The Sect Leader of a Fantasy Sect
玄幻门派掌门人
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 194k Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Subgenre
- Game System
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
86Chapters
0Votes
1.6kRecs
13Fans
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Reader comments 17
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Why are there so many words of memories? There are a few rebirth novels that read memories. It's enough to have a rough understanding. Besides, monsters are only powerful in terms of strength. The pill-forming stage explains the problem to the foundation-building stage. Is it still a monster? It has become a spirit. Besides, it has not transformed, and the spiritual roots can still be fake.
There are too many typos, the sentences are not fluent at all, and the preface is not followed by the follower.
Ah, the sea, you are all water
It feels like the same routine from many years ago, boring!
I'll take on apprentices later! ? I hope to truly write about the spirit of teaching, teaching, and solving doubts as a teacher, and as a leader of a sect...
I just want to ask, how long will it take for you to update twice a day? The most evil beast!
Good start
As a result, the writing got worse and worse. Let's sort out the outline first and then talk about it.
Obvious disadvantages
The story rhythm and writing of this book are good (very few people can do this anymore), but in the 60th chapter, a supporting character wrote several chapters in a row. This is very fatal. I hope I won't do it in the future!
This novel is a bit fresh. Come on, the author. I hope the author can take it seriously and try to have as few typos as possible. I will reward you with a 100 face gift first. I will see how you perform later. I support you.
The beginning is not bad, at least it is logical, but now it is too chaotic. If you want to introduce it, open a single chapter to introduce the background and power system.