Panic Darkness

Why does every novel about becoming a god have to talk about raising the throne of God? Wouldn't it be more comfortable to sit on it? 🤔🤔🤔

Is there anyone here? I want to see if anyone is reading my book. If there is someone, my motivation will increase a lot. . . .

Build a building here. If there are any errors or bad writing in the book, you can point them out here. If there are typos in the book, you can point them out in this chapter and I will correct them.

I will not hold up a throne, I will sit on it.

If there was a throne, I would not exalt it. I'll sit on it.

The feeling of the protagonist in the latest chapter seems to make sense. However, most protagonists are at their peak when a novel is finished. It seems that the peak can no longer rise. This is a limitation. Only by setting the protagonist in a posture that constantly surpasses himself can he keep moving forward.

This eunuch brags in the group every day

When writing a book, don't use dialect, okay? Isn't it okay to replace the word "give" with the word "be" in many paragraphs? It's really uncomfortable to watch╯╰

Be more careful when writing. I found that you wrote a little too fast. It's only more than ten chapters. It feels like the world is about to end. Well, you can refer to the Prosperity of the Witch Way and the Blood of the Burning Soul. Their progress is slow but not too slow. You can learn the reasons behind this. Look at the Infinite No. 1 Book. Empire, he has a tendency to feel that it is about to end after just over a hundred chapters, and forget about it after reading it. Combining the emotions of various characters, scenery, etc., Can increase the sense of substitution, and feel the sense of fulfillment that improves step by step, etc., Instead of being boring after the passion, this is probably what it means, come on! ! !

This is just a low-martial world. The effect of the wisdom-lowering halo cannot be awesome. The author must consider the world level. Don't make the low-martial world too fantasy.

Please recommend and collect. I want to be in the top ten of the new book list in the new book period. Although I don't know what this list is for →_→, I still want to make a splash after all, I am 18 now (๑˙ー˙๑). Please give me some love and courage. Thank you.

I haven't read it yet, but seeing as you said that the power system collapsed, you can write about daily life.

Is such a beautiful novel unfinished? ? ? ?

It's been a long time since I read The Eunuch. The worst thing about this book is that the power system is a bit unbearable. Light and shadow are the right things. Here, shadow is divided into darkness...

The world of dark fiction loses another great general

Nowadays, there are little white texts everywhere in Qidian! This book is a clear stream

🤫🤫🤫I have been banned from the Demon God. Since you have said so much, it would seem inappropriate not to reply. Don't feel unwilling to accept it. I don't care if you criticize me. It won't have any impact on me. I even think it's a bit funny. Why are you kneeling to me? Why are you a bitch and still erecting an arch? I will reply to you, I am the devil. Author, I am very happy. Since I have made money, why not do it by being hyped by the other party and becoming famous? I just make money, and I don't care what you do. If it gets serious, I will change my account and copy and cut Philippine vegetables. This is so cool.

It's so long-winded. It's not that you write multiple chapters. What can you do if you can stop being so long-winded as a dog? Like that doctor, you either kill him or just punish him if you can't kill him. He keeps babbling and babbling, and the protagonist's personality is not clearly reflected.

Come on, old author, I've been watching it. Come on, I'll give it to you if you have the votes.

I would like to give a suggestion to the author. Since it is a dark stream, then write in the style of the dark stream, which is rational, ruthless, cautious, and unscrupulous to achieve the goal. Killing is not the only way, everything is for profit. Just look at Gu Zhenren, how to calculate the world, the supporting character's IQ should be high, and the protagonist's IQ should be higher.

It's really good for a newcomer, but it still feels a bit novice and cliche.

. . . . Phew, what the hell is the follow-up outline Σ(っ °Д °;)っ

There are so many speech errors, it's so uncomfortable to watch.

Passing by ヽ(￣д￣;)ノmake your first order

. . It has always been on the bookshelf, and it was only when I was about to slaughter it that I discovered the mistake! ! ! Σ(っ °Д °;)っ

What is the relationship between dark godhead, dark creatures, and shadow energy? Why does it feel wrong for dark creatures to use shadow energy? Is there any explanation?