The Life of a Certain Archer in Another World

I feel that the categorization of this novel is wrong. It should be placed in the two-dimensional category instead of the fantasy category. If it is placed in the fantasy category, it will look awkward because many people don't know about it, and its acceptance is relatively low. This subject matter should be placed in the two-dimensional category to attract more people.

The subject matter is acceptable, but the writing style is really not good, and the routines are all old routines from at least 5 years ago.

The subject matter is good, the writing is terrible, it's too Xiao Bailong Aotian, especially the paragraphs, which made me tired to death.

I saw the magician joining the band of thieves again. It was definitely an illiterate fort mage who didn't run away.

Likes to explain the properties of weapons to enemies. . . Skill attributes. . . .

Even if it's to help the protagonist find a backstage, don't be so anxious. Meeting a goddess in the forest and worshiping the big brother in the exam are such an old routine.

Is this introduction poisonous? Am I an archer? With a spiral sword? ? ? Sword? Arrow? Or is it cheap... The pirated version of the article that I am reading? ? The introduction is like this, you can imagine the content...

From time to time, a sentence with homophones in Japanese appears... Which affects reading.

What a waste of subject matter. The writing style is unbearable. It slipped away.

I found your book interesting at first. Most people who have learned about FGO will know what you have laid the groundwork for. So I am still looking forward to how you will bring a different plot to our readers. The Old Man of the Mountain may be an Easter egg. But the central protagonist must be an archer, not an unparalleled assassin. Otherwise, it will be easy to write down. 😁😁😁

I've been reading it for a while, so it feels good to read it in one go, even though it's only about ten chapters.

Is that you, Shirou Emiya

Duan Yuming is a bit similar to the archer Yutian Shenming in Melee Mage.

Emm, how should I put it, I feel embarrassed when I write it in the third person. Can you change the writing style? It's a flaw, it slipped away. After reading several chapters, what happened to Duan Yuming, what happened to Duan Yuming, what happened to Duan Yuming, and what happened to Duan Yuming. Alas, I know this is the protagonist, but why does the prelude always start with the protagonist's name? You just write the process. We (readers) all know that this is what the protagonist does without adding the name, which enhances the sense of involvement. When you write it this way, it feels like others are telling us the story, instead of us watching the story ourselves. For example, so-and-so was hit by a car, and so-and-so's mother went to borrow money from relatives and friends. How do you write about this so that others will have the feeling of seeing the car accident at the scene? So when writing a novel, you need to let the readers know that they are reading a novel, not someone else telling me a story. This is how you write it now. A (representing the protagonist's name) sees B (b represents the supporting character's name) getting into a car accident, and then A sees B's mother coming to the hospital, and A then sees B's mother calling his relatives and friends to borrow money. Could the author change the way he writes this?

I would like to ask if the worldview of this book is just that small or will the worldview expand in the future?

The name of the saint is taken from Erza in Fairy Tail.

The stench is strong. If you are not a homebody, don't read it. You will be persuaded to quit.

Well, has the protagonist really never thought about using the armor in this world? It looks very convenient, and I feel speechless every time I get injured. Just break the petal shield and get injured. If you have an armor, you won't be injured.

It's funny, which game company would produce such a game? Ordinary people can model? Can you build character models? Do you still need to write your own martial arts in this crappy game? Do you know how hard this is? In reality, the actions in that game are not patched on the human body and then recorded into the computer? Not to mention the subsequent character movement corrections. Have you ever learned about modeling yourself? It was written so casually. And how can ordinary people have that time? Why don't they go to work? In order to play your game, it would take me a month or two just to create the character, mdzz This kind of game company is just a mouse company