A World Without Warcraft

To be honest, your protagonist is a bit weak. The person who fought in the starry sky in the previous life doesn't have any skills in exerting force? How did you conquer the stars in the past? Is it all about brute force? What about the awareness of fighting? Since they have all conquered the starry sky, there must have been a lot of battles, right? I recommend the author to read Soul of Burning Steel

It's weird to at least threaten the official and hide it from your family. In fact, the setting of the family itself is a burden for this kind of book. If you don't handle it well, you will be scolded. If you handle it well, there will be no benefit. It is not a romantic or heart-warming novel. A novel like yours, which comes from a World of Warcraft game, is just a battle... But you insist on having parents, a sister, and so on. I really don't feel recognized. For example, most modern families have one-child families. Where do they get younger sisters? What about allowing a second child only two years before family planning? Not to mention that the family relationship is not very close at all. I feel that the author wrote it like a rural county. It has nothing to do with big cities. The most troublesome thing is how people with special abilities face the problem of the country. It is recommended to downplay it instead of describing cooperation or something. Because non-public officials don't know the operational procedures of these things at all, the writing is particularly false.