Qingyun Shangxian

The idea is good, but the layout of the story is too small. There is a lot of space in the early stage to describe in detail the inner activities and past life experiences of the reborn girl Xiaojiaqi, which suddenly lowers the level. Moreover, it lacks a sense of excitement. The protagonist keeps getting upgraded but is still beaten. The power of bloodline is not very impressive, but the bloodline has been extracted and the blood essence is used to trade with people. If you meet a half-demon casually, the level of bloodline is almost the same as that of the heroine.

This book has no CP, but the writing is really good. I don't even know how to describe my mood, just one word! I have read so many books, and this book is a breath of fresh air among fairy tales. The heroine is a demon cultivator. Some people say that this novel is a bit depressing. The pace was so fast that I was speechless. The heroine is haunted by a curse, and they still need to find the dragon's veins. If he doesn't hurry up, he might die one day. And the heroine is not the kind of cold-hearted person, she is very emotional. He is also very good to masters, brothers and the like. It can be said that love and hate are clear and the three views are very correct. The author's writing style is very good and his ideas are great. The supporting characters of this book also shine. The characters are full of personality. Although there may be a few small bugs, they have little impact. Although the heroine almost died several times, if you don't push yourself until the last moment, how can you know how much potential you have. All in all, it's very good. Highly recommended viewing.

The writing is very good, and the beginning is very attractive, but after reading the free chapter, I lost interest. Even if it happened to be free of charge, I still couldn't arouse interest. I think it's mainly because there are several attractions in the beginning, including a reborn girl, a time-traveling girl, and the heroine turns into a monster, so it attracted me very much. Later, it gradually became a normal process of working hard to become stronger, which is also good, but for me, a person with a high reading experience, it suddenly became a bit mediocre. Overall, I think it's very good. It's the author's first book that I've read. The future is limitless!

The only interesting part of this book is the first few dozen pictures. When the protagonist joins the demon clan, he is led by the villain "Twelve Emperor Beasts". Moreover, the plot in the rest of the book is monotonous, and he keeps chasing the villain's butt without any other tricks. The author probably felt that the book was ruined by him.

I have seen so many reborns and time travelers contracting various mythical beasts, various resources, and all kinds of crazy things. But from the side, there is a sense of superiority called the superiority of reborn people and time-travelers. Why do you know everything you see? Why should you contract with whomever you want, if others are willing? What a self-righteous time traveler, a self-righteous rebirth.

Before joining the sect in the early stage, the heroine was a cool, cute and highly intelligent girl. After entering the sect, he became stupid, and after becoming a disciple, he became stupid and arrogant. When the thunder struck, Yu Jin was obviously implicated by the heroine and the little turtle. The heroine's performance is really hard to describe. When parting, the heroine really wanted to hope that they would not die so early. . . Oh my God, you are the only one who can survive because of your greatness, but others cannot have the chance. It's getting boring. The hostess's device collapsed.

It's beautiful and well written. I hope the author can maintain this level.

Xianxia in female channels are too petty! Even more so when there are male protagonists. Refuse to report the title of the book.

It's so disgusting🤢, it's obviously a scam, why is the label "complete"! It's a lie, I won't even read it at all! How dishonest...

Why do I prefer Wang Xiyao to the heroine? Many times the heroine wants the treasure when she sees it. She 100% feels that it is hers and must be hers. Some treasures are too difficult to want. First, she hurts others morally. Then she says that her path is not good. You are mainly thinking about this and you will die.

After reading more than two hundred chapters, the heroine is either in danger or on the road to danger, but the enemies are getting higher and higher every time. In fact, I don't understand why the author arranges so many high-level disasters. It is not beneficial to her experience at all. Every time she encounters something, she must ask the green beads for help, otherwise she will die.

It's a very good story, but it's actually about eunuchs. It's almost finished, and it's still stuck in a heart-wrenching place. . . But the front is also worth seeing.

The heroine feels more and more stupid? After having a master, I started to feel relaxed.

Looking at the Witch Clan, the villains are too damn strong, while the heroine is weak and often fights alone. Large chapters are facing the dilemma of being n times stronger than oneself. Getting 100 points on an exam that usually scores around 90 points is a fluke. Getting a score of 100 on a normal test with a score of 60 or less is called cheating (nonsense). In short, the author Jun Judeng should be more reasonable. This stall is too big. It is really tiring to have life and death crises hanging by a thread at every turn.

In Chapter 73, she reveals her true identity in front of her master, who has just been a disciple for a short time. Her character design at the beginning of the relationship was in vain, and her mother taught her in vain.

It looks pretty good at the front, but it gets more and more collapsed as you go to the back, which ruins such a good setting.

I just finished reading a book about turning into a white snake and practicing dragon transformation, and then I discovered a book about a green snake ⊙∀⊙!

Finished reading it in one sitting. The subject matter is very good and very interesting, but I can't always be happy with the heroine's character. Although you have to work hard to get opportunities, I feel that the heroine is too greedy and steals from her brothers and others without caring. Although in the end they are indeed not good people. But she didn't know it at first. It feels like there still needs to be some bottom line or something. The heroine's tenacity seems to be just a description of words, and there is actually no actual description. There are too many double standards for the master-servant contract. In fact, Xiyao has not done anything excessive to the heroine so far, on the contrary, she has also given a lot of help. It's normal to not be willing to submit to others, but it shouldn't be said so contemptuously. And although she didn't know it clearly, judging from her previous life, it was probably because of the interference of the third sister that she was able to be independent instead of being contracted by Jingjing. It can also be regarded as a cause and effect. By the way, have you ever secretly thought about it, in the past life, could it be that Qing Ci was so domineering and Jingjing was so weak, could it be that they had already secretly cheated on Chen Cang? A field of gorgeous lilies bloomed? ? (Haha, just kidding) Also at the beginning of the story, it was shown that the time-traveling girl from the previous life was also there. For example, Jingjing was very useless when she went to the valley, Qingci had the charm of the demon king in the previous life, and Xiyao's sudden change in Jingjing's personality when she was seven years old. But later, the Jingjing perseverance and black clothes mentioned in the previous life were different from the previous description, and it seemed that she had not been time traveled again. There is also this one that looks like a battle between a time-traveling girl and a reborn girl, and then Qing Ci, as the heroine, is eating melon seeds with her master and making comments. Then these people are used to set off the heroine. Just like Xianyu book friend said, the three girls actually have their own difficulties, and they all feel that it is not easy. I feel like this article has always been a little awkward. But there are endless possibilities, and many settings are very interesting. After all, the chapter has just begun, so you don't have to worry about the previous ones. The author has probably already clearly decided on the character setting of this novel. It's best to make it more interesting the more you write it.

It feels like the heroine is becoming more and more indifferent, and it feels like the plot is being forced together. It looked cute at first, but after coming into contact with the contract, especially the part about helping the Xiahou family, I couldn't hold it any longer.

The entrance test collapsed. Sure enough, this is going to be a romance. As soon as the male protagonist appears, his IQ goes off the line.

The heroine's senior brother Han Zhao has been dragging the heroine down. Not only does he not give any benefits to the heroine, but he also requires the heroine to pay for him. It is as if Han Zhao is the author's biological son and the heroine is just a gift to Han Zhao.

I found that the comment section was very polarized. I read it on QQ. Well, I felt very good at the time, but the author hasn't updated it for a long time, so it's good to update it occasionally. Actually, although the whole book has some minor bugs, I still quite like Qing Ci's character design. She is not very kind, but occasionally she is kind-hearted and wants to help others. Sometimes he can be very cold. But this makes him more human. I personally think the heroine is quite handsome, I don't know what you think. Those who say this book is not good-looking may not have read it carefully. If you read it carefully, you will find that except for a few little ones, everything else is good. The author's writing style is top-notch, and the heroine's IQ is top-notch.

I also find the heroine to be forced to play at such a pace. She is forced to play in various ways. She has such a low level of cultivation that she keeps opening dungeons, and there are also some messy branch lines that seem to have a low number of characters. I'm drunk. Why am I still so depressed after reading an article? I gave up.

It's almost over, how can you be a eunuch?😭

What's the point of completing the book if it's not finished... I advise the author to be more sensible and start the second part.

What do you say about this book? Anyway, I felt quite uncomfortable watching it. You said one is a time traveler, one is a reborn person, and the other one is the protagonist of Triple Kill. Are they considered reincarnators? Or maybe he was originally a dragon, but he just returned to her body. I just watched the author's description of the protagonist wildly guessing about the strange behavior of a reborn person and a time traveler, and thinking wildly and thinking wildly. I feel very uncomfortable. From the third perspective, we readers know that the two are the time traveler and the reborn person, but the protagonist just doesn't know. This makes me feel very awkward and uncomfortable.

It's over before it's even finished 😭

Three major characteristics of Xiaobai's novels: 1: There is no description of scenery or background in any scene in the article, and there is no sense of substitution 2: Most of the words in the article are mainly dialogues between characters 3: The supporting characters are 100% intellectually reduced when they encounter the protagonist, and the protagonist's personality is 80% changed when encountering events 4: The paragraphs are not standardized, with hundreds of words per paragraph (reading makes the eyes tired) 😁😁😁😁

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that I would rather have a novice writing style than be fighting in a sect one second, and the fight will be chaotic, and then I will be practicing again in the next chapter, and the last chapter is still writing about the process of the protagonist swallowing the medicine, and the next chapter will be about what happened to the supporting characters. Can I skip the scene after finishing writing, and many times it feels like the previous chapter has nothing to do with the next chapter, and then after several chapters, I suddenly think, did you get something at the end of a certain chapter? Then something new came out of nowhere in the latest chapter

Seeing that the heroine was cruel and ruthless to her family in her previous life, and was as close as a sister to the enemy who destroyed her family, and finally had a falling out because of a man, just as the heroine thought, this man is not only selfish and cruel, but also stupid. Even if this person were to do it over again, there is no way he could change it💩. This kind of person can still be the heroine. There is really something wrong with the author's three views.