Hands and Eyes Reach the Sky

It is a work that is worthy of becoming a god, but it is buried here. This is a sigh for the author! ! The author has no choice but to mark the foreshadowing chapters in parentheses to cater to the readers who scan the text and sigh for the author! ! The author is thoughtful, the layout is exquisite, and the supporting characters have healthy IQs and are not toxic, but no one cares about it. There are even trolls who sigh for the author! ! I am lucky enough to read this book today. Compared with the platinum works, this book still has some shortcomings! I hope the author does not have to belittle himself and believes in his writing power. I will support it with monthly tickets and full subscriptions!

No, it felt like I was pretending to be sexy through supporting roles, and those scenes were quite embarrassing. (It's pure truth, but some people may not understand it)

Let me express my own little opinion. This is the author's first time writing a novel. For this novel, I can only say that the flaws do not hide the advantages. The protagonist of this novel takes revenge as the main line and then starts writing. With more than 200 chapters, I think what is rare about this book is that the author also has a sub-line, which is to present to everyone some correct three views, or in other words, a conscientious person doing conscientious things. For example, as a time traveler, I left some good ideas in modern times in this fictional history. (I haven't read the follow-up yet, but this is my personal guess) Of course, I also think some of the little spoofs are also part of the fun of this book. In the end, I thought this was a good novel. After all, a novel is a novel, and there are some things that you don't have to dig into. After all, the author cannot satisfy the tastes of all readers. Those who like to read will naturally like to read, and those who don't like to read will just not read. I think this is the correct way for readers to read. (Personal opinion, don't like it, don't criticize it)

Overall, it is a good novel with a certain history, and also some shadows of other books. The beginning is a climax, and there is no path for growth. However, it has been online since then, and it is a good book worth reading. It would be better if you use less elements from other books and create your own

Personally, I feel that the reason for the decline in subscriptions is that the last wave of plots made people feel that the second-generation time-travelers were incompetent in terms of force, and their intelligence was calculated, and they became prisoners of the natives. Therefore, I felt that it was boring to watch and had to wait for the protagonist to rise. After all, they were all for entertainment and fun, not to cause trouble.

This book is really good, IQ is online, and the preparation is in place. What's rare is that in this case, you can understand it without using your brain. One of the limitations of this book is the timing. Xiuliao and Dawang have brought a relaxed and funny atmosphere for a long time. It seems a bit unaccustomed to something like this that is similar to traditional martial arts. The other is publicity. If it weren't for the Silver League, I wouldn't have known about this book. And although the name fits the content, it is not outstanding. I really entered by clicking the wrong one. . . Of course, these problems are not big, otherwise it would be difficult for a good book to stand out. The biggest limitation is updating. If updated, all the above problems will not be a problem. People like me who are afraid of authors should check the number of updates before reading. If there are less than two updates per day, just clear the bookshelf. Well, this was a real surprise. Moreover, the lack of updates makes it easy for people to keep reading books. If they keep reading, they will forget about them. If they forget, they will just clear the bookshelf. . . However, considering that the author is a new author, and his writing is not just a beginner's article but a battle of wits, the number of updates cannot be increased, and the data is not good, it is really a non-war crime. I can only hope that the author will continue to work hard, never give up, rely on word of mouth to support this book, and one day become a great master.

In Chapter 1, the atmosphere of the whole scene is very attractive and gives people an interesting feeling. There are slight flaws in the choice of words and sentences, but the flaws are not concealed. It is a very good opening. There are many pitfalls in it, and it also makes the readers remember a lot of things. At this time, they are full of curiosity about the mean-mouthed Ren Zhen and the beautiful sword master.

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Many people may not remember the protagonist after reading the book. Some supporting characters, some villains, and weapons are all super attractive, such as the ruthless emperor, the sky-swallowing magic jar, Chen Pipi, and the second senior brother, our iron umbrella. The writing is also very good. Including Master Haitang's transformation from female to male, from death to life (the writing is really cool) There are too many of these highlights, which is better than writing the protagonist to be awesome and brilliant all the way, because different villains will make people not tired of it, and there are too many starting points for equally strong protagonists. Think about it carefully, would it have been better if Master Mei of Langya Pavilion had not died? The part where Mei was robbed and killed halfway was quite eye-catching, but it was a pity that he died. It is said that your enemies determine your height. In the past, I liked watching Invincible Streaming and pushing it all the way. Later, I liked watching chess games where I met my opponent. Now, only the villains who are eye-catching, ruthless, ruthless, or sinister, can arouse my interest. I think this book is very good, and I would like to make some small suggestions for you to consider. Some weapons are awesome not in a few sentences of description: where they are in the world, but in the meaning they represent. I suggest you consider the description of the ancient bronze temple in Zhetianli, the divine sword Capturing the Dragon in Heroes Chronicles and the magic knife made from the residue in the furnace, the big black umbrella that blocks the light at night, the physical holy sword and small crowbar, etc. Weapons, martial arts, supporting roles, villains

The author quoted the title of "Sword in the Snow", which is inexplicably uncomfortable. The key is to always use those characters in the readers' minds to bring them to some people, which is very annoying.

After reading most of it, I suddenly felt that the author should vote for the two-dimensional category, because readers outside the two-dimensional world don't seem to be interested in memes, or even resent them, and cannot appreciate the fun of memes.

No wonder no one is watching it. The main character has a low IQ and relies entirely on showmanship. The main character has a halo. If you can't write it, don't write it. It disgusts me.

How about this Tangtang🤫

Fang read one hundred and seven chapters and wrote an article on a whim. The first draft of the recommendation is not complete yet, and we sincerely invite corrections. A very amazing martial arts book (although it is classified in the historical category). It does not follow routines, nor does it deliberately go against routines. The main and supporting characters have online IQs, and the plot is not independent but develops in conjunction, not entirely revolving around the protagonist. When readers follow the routines to "predict" the following plots, plots that cannot be guessed by routines always appear, giving people a feeling of being unexpected and unexpected. It is unexpected, natural and orderly, and everything is orderly and exciting. The background is an imaginary world, Jianghu, Chaotang, Southern Jin Dynasty and Northern Tang Dynasty. But many settings are similar to real history - which is understandable, after all, China's five thousand years of history itself is very complete and adaptable to readers. In addition to the setting being adapted from real history, the characters are also mostly reflections of historical figures and even novel characters, with some similarities and differences. As a result, the worldview of this book is extremely grand and complete. The characters are full-bodied, and even the supporting roles are vividly portrayed. The protagonist, Golden Finger, is powerful and has an eye in the palm of his hand. He has the ability to destroy the origin of all things in the world and can also use memory, disguise, and imprisonment. Ren Tianxing (why are you laughing? You are so stunned) was a general of the Northern Tang Dynasty. He conquered cities and territories for the Northern Tang Dynasty. He was also a swordsman of the Yunyao Sword Sect. He collected three thousand sword scriptures for the Yunyao Sword Sect. However, he died due to the emperor's fear, hundreds of schools competing for profit, and the plot of a treacherous person. The only son Ren Zhen was exiled to Jinling in the Southern Jin Dynasty, but he also fell into the emperor's plan. However, he followed the plan and first established embroidery and spinning, then sneaked into the Northern Tang Dynasty and scolded Fang Qiu! Ren Zhen, who came from the earth, not only inherited the third eye in this life, but also inherited the blood feud of his father Ren Tianxing. There are many turmoils in this world, and many treacherous things in this court. Let's see how Ren Zhen can bring order to the chaos, make things happen, and have hands and eyes that can reach the sky!

The first three chapters are majestic and majestic, but after about ten chapters it becomes like a piece of writing. Are you looking for a ghostwriter?

The characterization is too small

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt the discomfort getting stronger and stronger. . . The author's writing about the world is so realistic that I felt so uncomfortable watching it. Although the author deliberately pushed the plot this way, this imaginary world background showed me that no one has a vision (except the protagonist), no one has an IQ (except the protagonist), and no one does not believe in the promise of the protagonist (except the protagonist). The NPC always stands at a lower level than the protagonist as if it has been forcibly reduced in intelligence and watches the protagonist pretend to be x (personal opinion, you are right if you complain)

The empress does not live up to her name. The chest is mediocre and the means are mediocre. Anyway, everything is fine. A character that should be very amazing, but turns out to be so unsatisfactory. The master is quite satisfactory, with a little lack of ambition and courage. But he must be considered astonishing. Mr. Da's portrayal is relatively unsuccessful. Before the change, the author's portrayal was quite good. After that, the style of painting changed, and the whole person had no bright spots. The protagonist's father is also a little lacking. As a generation of time travellers, he was once the best in the world, and he has no big highlights. It is all speculation that he is very powerful. But there are no bright spots in its own portrayal. Before Cao Guojiu appeared, it could be said that people were looking forward to seeing him. After he appeared, he felt that "this may be a fake Cao Guojiu". The protagonist is full of wits and tricks. It just has the weird attribute of "if something big happens, you will kneel down at the critical moment". Other supporting roles are remarkable.

There is no way to imitate the style of this introduction, except to imitate the general manager's showboating with words, and it doesn't have the pretense of being a literary youth. It's just a copycat.

To be honest, this book is already considered a rare good article even when there is a mountain of garbage. It has few poisonous points, an interesting protagonist, and no messy systems. It can make people read it calmly. In the end, the female swordsman Gu Haitang uses the protagonist Ren Zhen as her natal sword. This operation is a bit censorious. I hope more people will recommend it and don't let this good book be buried.

Already in the trap, a student gang, a bookworm with six years of reading experience. It's a good book, and I promise to put it on the shelves. If I'm not financially well-off, I might not get any rewards. I'll stick to reading the original version. The author's writing style is sophisticated, the characters are richly described, and the plot is good. Sooner or later, it's going to be popular, so it's better to get familiar with it first. 🙂

The director of the embroidery workshop said: "The most powerful thing about me is not [thousands of people with thousands of faces, hands and eyes reaching the sky], in fact, I am more beautiful than the Sword Master"; Li Fengshou in black: 'My greatest strength is not my martial arts, but that I can make a female donkey pregnant'; Wang Fengwu, the old man next door: 'I only carry water for the widow, and never climb the widow's wall'; Widow Zhang Fengxia: 'Lao Wang, a tough guy, doesn't dare to kick in my door. It's not because he's afraid of my high martial arts skills, but because he's afraid that I'll speak uncontrollably, never think beyond my words, and accidentally say something out'; Lu Xiaofeng, a cripple named Lu: 'Although my name is Lu Xiaofeng, my idol is Fu Hongxue. If you don't believe me, just come out and take two steps, come and take two steps'; Sword Master Gu Jiantang: 'My most powerful thing is not my sword, but my breastband, which can circle the earth twice'; Sword Attendant Xue Qingwu: 'I finally understand why you didn't teach me the Dugu Nine Swords. It turns out that not only can you like women, but you can also like men'; Second disciple Mo Yuqing: 'I am arrogant because I have an expert behind me'; The third apprentice Xiahou Ba: 'I am the third one because I have watched the tortoise and the hare race, and I never delay on the road'; The fourth disciple Cui Mingjiu: "My name contains the character "", so I want to tell you that drinking will cause trouble. I want to change my name to "Jiu Mingjiu"; Confucian sage Dong Zhongshu: "Don't judge the name. My name is Dong Zhongshu. Do I have to be the third loser?" Mr. Yan Yuan, a college student: 'They say I can't swear more than three oaths, who can tell me the pain in this?'; The second gentleman, Yuan Benxi: "You are still suffering, everyone says that I am the empress's friend, but there is someone else"; The rebel general Hei Umbrella said: 'Don't talk nonsense, we are just playing chess together. I want to run away, but I am locked up and can't escape'; The fourth Mr. Zhao Qianqiu came out in a wheelchair with a sullen face: "Can you please not mention the word 'run' in front of me?" Mr. Wu Feng Wanli: 'Just stay here as a kid without legs and watch me travel across the wilderness and gallop around the world'; Go here first and add more later. You can add them together 🤝

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The layout is rigorous and meticulous, with vertical and horizontal lines interlocking with each other, the characters are full of highlights, the main plot is clear and fascinating, and the writing style is simple and precise, which shows the basic skills. The plot control is relaxed and relaxed, and the size of the branches can be freely chosen, refueling, and dark shapes. Virgin---Female---- Posted here!

Well! I thought I had found a good book, but there was a bit of drama behind it!

I originally thought that the Seventh Realm was a very powerful level, but it turned out that the three teenagers in the Seventh Realm in Arakawa were much better than the young geniuses in the Central Plains.

At first glance, the opening of the book is majestic. It has the style of the blood-red "Evil Wind Song". I haven't read the rest yet.

Let me give you a brief review. There is a reason why this book is not popular enough. First of all, the writing style. In the previous chapter review, the author said that humor should be humorous and seriousness should be serious. However, due to the jokes in some places diluting the overall seriousness, the cup was not filled in some places. At the same time, the detailed psychological activities and narration can indeed lower the reader's reading threshold, but it also lowers the b-level. The author wants readers to appreciate the layout of each sloppy and gray line. He does not necessarily have to explain it clearly himself. If he talks too much, it will appear long-winded and break up the feeling of the layout. Then there is the plot. How should I put it? The male protagonist's revenge line is actually one of the main lines, but to be honest, it is very unrealistic. Until the male protagonist's father returned to the world, the revenge line was written hastily. How the Yunyao Sect forced Ren Tianxing, and how the Northern Tang Dynasty framed the general. I wrote a few lines of imitated handwriting, a few lines of multi-party cooperation, and the rest were side hooks. This led to a problem. The "pleasantness" of the revenge line was gone. Character creation, there are indeed many characters appearing in this book, but only a few of them are successfully portrayed. Needless to say, the male and female protagonists, like Mo Yuqing, who is barely considered the second female lead, can be explored carefully. The empress, the big boss in the first half, is just an ordinary woman who only knows what you think of Yuan Fang. Although the author did say that the empress relied on Mr. Er and Qianji Umbrella to rise to power, she did not show why this woman could make these two people work hard. Words of admiration and saying that the empress can make Mr. Er realize his ambitions cannot establish the image of the empress. As a small boss, it is not a good thing to have a thin image. In comparison, Dong Zhongshu's image is much more three-dimensional, and this involves the next point I am talking about. The force value is the most difficult aspect of this book. Readers who read this book carefully will find that the characters with higher force value appear and are portrayed more often (excluding the eighth realm of Southern Jin tool men who appeared later), while the characters with lower force value are thinner. For a character like Xu Laoliu, if it were written by the author's favorite manager, Gao Lu would give him one or two chapters of personal space. Another piece of evidence is that Dong Zhongshu's portrayal is far better than that of the Empress. He also does things behind the scenes. Dong Zhongshu's story about stealing the fate of scholars is much more detailed than that of the Empress. Another problem caused by the force value is that it would be difficult to write about a temple. The high-end combat power of this book can already significantly affect the fate of the country. Therefore, I am personally not satisfied with the section from the male protagonist trying to stabilize the situation in the Northern Tang Dynasty to Ren Tianxing retreating the enemy. The presence of the army has been infinitely eliminated. In fact, it is still a chess game between two top practitioners. In any situation where the force value is hugely different, In this novel, the plots and plots of Koukousou Sosou will be very pale. In order to avoid this situation, the author added a lot of settings to make the plot more reasonable. However, in fact, it is inherently inconsistent with the world view under a high martial arts structure. It feels a bit strange every time I read it. In novels in a world of high martial arts, the basic logic is "Everything in the world is determined by a sword." This book is not a world of low martial arts. I hope I can write better and better.

What's the point of being plotted against? Then the protagonist's aura survives. Without the protagonist's aura, is he dead? Don't tell me I'm disgusting.

I read more than two hundred chapters, and I have a question. If the empress is not beautiful, why did the emperor steal her into the palace? In my impression, these grassroots strong women either have extraordinary means or extraordinary looks, but the book also says that the empress does not rely on such heroic means.