His Wife Wants a Divorce Today

I have a suggestion, I will just say it, but you will listen to it 😌 In short: no need to explain in too much detail. Especially when you want to create a "high IQ" image, you can't explain everything - especially some uncomplicated speculations (reasoning). For example, when the heroine first saw Liu Niang, she described Liu Niang's expression in detail for about a paragraph, even down to her upper and lower eyelids. The heroine finally concluded that Liu Niang's expression was a typical expression of fear. I can understand the purpose of such a description, which is to highlight the heroine's meticulous observation and psychological foundation. The problem is, even people who have not studied psychology can see this "typical fear expression". So for readers, using an analogy that may not be suitable, the effect is: 1 plus 1, plus 1, plus 1 again, plus 1 again, and finally plus 1. The heroine sees that it is equal to 6, which is amazing! In fact, even if "1" is subdivided into two 0.5, It won't be very powerful. Of course, it would be different if it were extremely detailed to prove "1+1=2" (.) Another example is the negotiation between the female protagonist and the male protagonist after meeting Liu Niang. When she talked about "the male protagonist is in trouble", she explained for a long time what the male protagonist was before, what he is doing now, the powers of the Dali Temple of the Ministry of Punishment, etc. However, these are not needed at all, and only the information Qinglai told the heroine before, the reader can draw the conclusion by himself: the hero is in trouble. Readers have even predicted that the female protagonist will help the male protagonist solve this problem. However, in the following text, what the reader already knows needs to be inferred again in detail, and even this time the reasoning needs to add more information to draw a conclusion. Readers can't help but wonder, what's going on? This heroine is less talented than me. Is she really a top student? There is a problem with the heroine's character, and there is also a problem with the male protagonist's appreciation of the heroine. Therefore, it is highly recommended that some explanations can be reduced, and sometimes explanations can even be omitted deliberately. When Watson didn't listen to Holmes explain the reasoning process, he thought Holmes was really amazing; after listening to it, he couldn't help but said, "It turns out to be that simple." It can be seen that not explaining is also a way to maintain magic. The subject matter of psychological crime solving is somewhat difficult. The authors who can choose it are all very courageous and deserve my applause 👍 I hope the author will write better and better, and I also hope that my little suggestions can be of some help to you 😌

The identity of the heroine was revealed at the beginning. This heroine's social contract is so rubbish.

After reading it twice, I still feel that the author is not so cruel. The couple had no love at first and were separated for 6 years. Later, the relationship got better and they were separated for 4 years. How many 10 years are there in life?

This heroine, who has a doctorate in psychology, is still nervous when chatting with people from ancient times. It doesn't fit the character. Is this the psychological quality of a doctorate in psychology? It's too low.

This author's writing is very to my liking. I want to build a small black room, tie her up and let her code words. The black room already exists. Now we start a group to tie the author. Those who join the group will get +1 😁 First of all, we have to get some recommendation votes to lure her over. Those who have votes will quickly throw them out. We will take advantage of her to pick up the votes... Hehehe...

The author writes very well. I look forward to new works after finishing this book. I will always support you 🌹

What is the name of their daughter Su Baobao? I feel like I will be a military general in the future! Ha ha

There is a small problem⋯⋯ If the prince is the eldest son and the second prince is the male protagonist's cousin, then the male protagonist is 24 years old and the prince is older than 24 years old, then how old is the queen? How could the Prime Minister be in his forties?

I really like the little male protagonist (son of the heroine) in the story, he's so cute

Why is the heroine always stunned? What is there to be stunned about? She always freezes up when she talks to anyone. Is there really nothing wrong with her brain? Moreover, she is a modern person, what is there to be shy about? She is extremely shy when holding hands, and is extremely embarrassed and angry when she is on her period. Is this really in line with human society?