Reborn: A Record of Survival on the Border

Stupid or not, you can put as many good things as you have space for, so why do you have to win back a man's heart? Is it too far-fetched?

The heroine of this article is more silly, sweet, and mad than a virgin, which leads to pitfalls in subsequent chapters and cliched bloody plots. Also, too much fantasy and space upgrades are failures, making a good article a bit boring, so let's just do it.

I feel more and more that Li Yunbao is stupid!

The subject matter of the article is pretty good, written in a running account style. Here is a summary of several problems found so far in this article. ①The heroine is really stupid, a complete idiot. ② The crime of treason plus the original body's retaliation has no reputation at all. The time-traveling heroine is even more feudal than the original body, a pure ancient. The exile was originally the best time to get rid of the second wife. The male protagonist ignored the second wife, but the female protagonist had to talk about her filial piety and reputation to the uncle and aunt of the second wife. It can only be said that whatever happens next, the female protagonist deserves it. ③The road to exile is written in a childish way, with banquets, shopping, etc. The exile is not difficult at all, but the number of words is quite watery. ④If it weren't for the male protagonist, the female protagonist's golden finger would have been exposed in the early stages of her exile. The male protagonist reminded her again and again, but the female protagonist never changed her mind. ⑤The story is anecdotal. It seems like a long time has passed, and the male and female protagonists have experienced a lot, but the readers have no impression and cannot read it. I really doubt how the heroine managed to buy a car in modern times without relying on her parents. The main reason is that the heroine's IQ is not up to par. I can tolerate the cruelty of the heroine, but I cannot tolerate the mental retardation of the protagonist.

Are you trying to laugh me to death by asking a proficient embroiderer to do cross stitch? And that poem about waiting for my hair to reach my waist doesn't make any sense. What the hell did people who were proficient in writing in ancient times say?

Haha, I couldn't stand it. The writing wasn't good enough. I read a few chapters and gave up.

To be honest, this book is not very well written. First of all, the heroine did not make good use of the powerful cheating device of space. This can be seen in many plots. For example, when the heroine took her two children to find the hero, she could often put the children in the space without making the children suffer. She seemed to have forgotten this matter and took the children on adventures, euphemistically speaking, for fear of exposing the space. In fact, many times you can find a way to control it. The heroine is actually not smart. Another example is the rebellion in the end. Since the heroine has room to cheat, she can kill him in many cases and is threatened stupidly. Many plots are really not well written. Check it out in Shuhuang.

I thought I had never read it, but after reading a few chapters, I realized that the title of the book had been changed 😒. I like the subject matter, but it is a common problem in farming books. After clinging to the powerful and embarking on the road to Qingyun, the content becomes cliché and ends in an anticlimax.

Tell the truth! This book is not very well written!

I really can't stand it, the heroine might as well not have been time-traveled