Elf King

This book is actually quite good, but there is one biggest mistake: Elf A evolves → Elf B, and Elf B is the evolved type of Elf A. But! ! ! There is no way that Elf A is the degenerate form of Elf B. There is no such thing as "degeneration". I hope the author can know, and if possible, I hope I can change the previous one. For example Chapter 13

Chapter 12 was written ten years later, when Vulpix was still young and had not yet formed a fighting spirit. . . . . Moreover, Lilluo has just begun to evolve, which is too slow. In the animation, one year is enough for the Yusanjia to evolve from its initial form to its final form by traveling to an area. The protagonist is already sixteen years old and has at least participated in the league conference and other competitions. However, the male protagonist only has three pets. The Vulpix is ​​still too young after ten years. Isn't it too inappropriate? Although Master Zhi may have just arrived in Kalos ten years later, the male protagonist should have mastered Mega at least sixteen years old. After all, the PM world should reach adulthood at ten years old. The writing is a bit messy. .

I originally wanted to read it, but after seeing the author's update speed, I gave up.

Hey, hey, it seems like this book is completely eunuch. Daze. But this kind of thing is no longer strange. After all, if the pressure is too much, the author can do anything.

Seeing that you are back, I, who is also a liar, cheer for you.

You can make a story where Xiaozhi has already participated in the competition, and the protagonist has traveled through time. I think it is quite popular. While no one has written this kind of story yet, it should be very popular. 😰😰😰😰

Vulpix is ​​born in a year at most, right? 9 Years wasted? Riolu has been with you since you were born, right? No evolution in 16 years? Just one Eevee evolved? It feels like you've spent ten years in vain, just wasting your time just to advance the plot.

Zhise is the king, I'm sorry I'm leaving

I spent 11 chapters and still don't know what the author is going to do? Let the protagonist pick up a few women when he was 6 years old and then die. Various sisters every day. It's so embarrassing to see that I have cancer.

Have you been eating shit for the past ten years? The timeline is a mess

It feels like playing a game to treat NPCs, and it's a bit messy

😁The author could describe the fungus battle in more detail and the journey process could be richer 🤓 The setting is still very good

The book is good, but the writing style is too immature, and what I want to express is not expressed well. The author needs to work harder to improve his writing style.

This. . Bullet punch is the starting skill of the steel type, and sonic punch is the starting skill of the fighting type.

I have some free time recently, and I can resume updating in about a week. As for which book to update mainly, it depends on which one is more interesting (both books will be updated). Anyway, I will write more as much as I can. Finally, I would like to thank the book friends who still remember me, hehe...

Everyone else is YY Zhulan (Sirona), why are you the only one who harmed my Serena 😭😐.

Don't watch the puppy on the show.

Why is the click -1? 233333

Emmm, is he a eunuch?

Personally, I think the writing is quite good, and I would like to give some suggestions here w First, I think you should give your Pokémon a name. Always calling it "Lucario" or "Moon Elf" feels like they are calling you "human" and they are not close to you at all (personal suggestion) Secondly, I think I should write more about some daily things on the road, interactions with elves, training, training plans, etc. I feel that the protagonist is very strong but not unreasonably strong. . . Emmmm That's it. Here are the comments of people who have only read about twenty chapters (if it is written later, just pretend not to have seen it) Please give me a thumbs up so the author can see it! ! !

I seem to remember that Luka could only learn one fire-type flame kick. Can you learn Fire Fist after super evolution? ? ?

As for the male protagonist, I remember that the author didn't give him the power of waveguide? Why didn't I see in the article that the male protagonist uses the power of waveguide to assist the elves in fighting and communicating with the elves?