Knight's Departure

Also, the text is too light. I can understand the story you are trying to say, which means that at least there is not much problem with the narrative. However, I couldn't be touched by this story even a little bit. It's like a cool article without a bit of fun. That's just a matter of polishing the text. It's my own opinion. If you don't like it, you can delete it.

It was too cruel at first, but later on he was treated as a slave, for dozens of chapters, forget it.