Only I Can Kill the Sky

It feels like the pinnacle of online writing! The writing style is great, and the environment rendering and article overlay show the great skill. I think the dialogues could use a little more feeling. I have been reading books for ten years, and fantasy is my favorite. Recently, I have really run out of books to read, so I tried to write a book myself. As for DaDa's writing style, there is nothing wrong with it, but the writing style could be more stable. I feel that I have read a lot of DaDa books, and I can still see the shadow of some great masters, but it doesn't matter if it goes on, it will still be affected subtly! The early part is a bit flat, but the later part is a bit more interesting. I've read more than a dozen chapters and will read it again when I get to work! But did you not recommend it when you signed the contract? The exposure is too little I have to say that the current author's imagination is really big. The strange settings, time travel and systems are all tricks. I will be attracted, but how to put it, it is interesting at first, but after reading more than ten chapters, it will become boring. So no matter how good the setting is, no matter how awesome the writing is, it is not as important as a good story. Recently, I am also writing a book. I use all my free time to understand the pain of single-player. Although I work hard, newcomers still have to persevere! Let's work together and encourage each other. If the author has time, you can also come and take a look at my fantasy. I feel pretty good about myself, hehe Come on and give me Oli together!

Emotional dramas can be toxic if you are not careful. Personally, I suggest that you try to avoid ambiguous aspects of emotional dramas. Just go through them in one step. If you don't like them, don't criticize them.

Blessings 🙏

I feel like a master, the writing is good. Becoming a great god is just around the corner. It is gold that always shines. No water, just fine separation. And don't be a eunuch. Don't care about other people's opinions. Write your own book, Let others speak. Anyway, I think it's good. There is a feeling of déjà vu. Anyway, as long as. Come on! Come on! Come on! Work hard and write books. Sooner or later (you will be exhausted!) This is fake, you read it wrong. Sooner or later, you will become one of the great gods. Expect.

After seeing thirty pictures, I feel I need to say something. The protagonist previously hid his growing spiritual roots in order not to be discovered, so he could tolerate it. However, the spiritual roots are perfect, and there is still a year and a half before the sect examination, and the protagonist is still enduring it, saying that it is to better deter others in the sect examination. I cannot agree with this. Power is the best deterrent. In a place like the world of cultivation, if you have good qualifications and high status, you will have great power. If you say a word, there will be many people rushing to do it. He has to endure it for another year and a half. Nothing may happen in this year and a half. It is better to expose his hidden spiritual roots directly. Time is of the essence. If you get resources one and a half years in advance, you will grow very quickly.

I didn't want to read it after seeing the introduction. Can you bb the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors?

I don't know why I've recently become obsessed with otherworldly fairy tales.

Bro, how many words did you sign the contract with?

I came here after reading Erda's book review and reading the author's book. I have a small request, hehe. Ahem, "Catching the Stars" is my book. The writing is average. Can the author help me check it out? Thank you, thank you, thank you very much! ! ! !

Based on your introduction, you are so disparaging about the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors, I'm doomed

Wow, why do you have to stop updating? Keep writing.

Leave your name on the fire tongs😁

I've been following it for a while, so I have to express some of my opinions today! First, when I first started reading it, I thought it was another wastage, and I almost gave up. Then I looked through the catalog and continued reading. I didn't expect that it was not a wastage, but a super genius... Second, it can be seen that the world structure is quite grand. I like novels with this kind of grand structure, not bad! Third, the setting of the cultivation system in this book is also quite good and very rich. I hope the author can keep it stable! Fourth, the protagonist has a good personality and can kill women without batting an eyelid. Unlike some novels, the protagonist instantly turns into a soft boy when he sees a woman! The last thing I want to talk about is the cultivation system. I didn't expect the author to have such an interesting theoretical setting of foundation building. It's really good! Finally, I hope the author can persevere, I believe you can.