My Heroic System

Sorry, I can't stand it anymore. Although... Well... It's okay... Okay! I think the writing is too childish. Details are lacking. The characterization is not clear enough. As for why I can't stand it, that's because. I hit a poisonous spot. So I was poisoned all at once. Got it! The whole book feels very good. If the points I mentioned above were changed, this book would definitely be a masterpiece.

I have to complain, why are the chapters always broken at key positions? I'm very angry.

After reading Chapter 20, I wasn't interested in the plot, so I skipped it and left a comment to commemorate it. . .

I read the introduction, but I haven't read the book yet. Let me say this: Saonian, go and draw the sword, and ask your sister to get the holy spear. You must know that the gunman understands people's hearts.

After reading Chapter 56, the content is roughly as follows: Arthur: "Say or not ψ(｀∇´)ψ＂" Yang Nai: "Don't say (*￣m￣)" "Crack!" Yangno: "Ah~~~(//∇//)" Arthur: "Say it quickly! (▼Van▼#)" Yang Nai: "Don't tell me! (*≧ｍ≦*)" "Pa~" Yangno: "Ah~~(ﾉωﾉ)It hurts~" Arthur: "(ﾟДﾟ≡ﾟДﾟ)?"

It can be seen that the author is a foot control person like me 🤓

Now I am very curious about what various FGO fan authors think of me, Da Qin (*σ´∀`)σ

I came here specially to smell the incense. Even though I haven't smelled it for a long time, I still miss it.

When does the author plan to update it?

King of Light, Dawn of Hope

Regarding the author's handling of details in writing, whether a novel is good or not mainly depends on whether it is enjoyable or not, and it does not necessarily have to be an enjoyable novel. As long as what makes the protagonist unhappy can in turn make the opponent unhappy. As for what the author wrote, in Chapter 6, the protagonist has been complaining in his heart because Tohsaka Rin asked the protagonist to attend a banquet that he didn't like. It will make the readers who are introduced to the protagonist as unhappy and disgusting as if they swallowed a fly. Many authors are like this, because the heroine's decision about the protagonist causes the protagonist to do something that he doesn't want to do but has to do, so he writes that the protagonist complains that he doesn't want to participate. Why not write it? If you want to reduce the number of words, you can write the protagonist and think about why you should participate.

Starting from the teleportation array, I can't understand it at all. Is this the real protagonist or the King of Knights? I've read it several times and still can't understand it.

I took a look at the author's subscription record, and last month I subscribed to a book called The Apprentice