Medical Dynasty

Poison, poisonous weeds, hahaha, brother

1. After the system released a task from the beginning, there was no trace of it. 2. After reading about 50 chapters, the original background of the protagonist was not explained clearly, and I don't know how he got all the medical methods. It was easy to explain that he turned out to be a doctor or a medical student. After the system appeared, there was no specific explanation. There were problems with the narrative. I felt that it did not reflect the role of the modern medical system at all. I felt that folk remedies were mixed in, and the dissuading effect was too strong. 3. The plot is stiff, has no sense of substitution, and looks awkward. Author, have you written an outline? Not to mention the golden 3 chapters, at least 50 chapters are not interesting. I suggest you sort it out. Even the free chapters are unreadable, and not many people have read the paid chapters!

Um, the plot at the beginning is a bit toxic.

With a long beard reaching up to his waist, I guess he must be an old man in his seventies. He is not going to die soon. As the saying goes, he will go there in 73--84 without being invited by the king of hell. Hurry up and customize a coffin!

Weak people occupy a small corner. Please don't be angry. That's it. Let me give you a book about the end of the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's soul wears Xiang Yu. Interested book friends can read it. The Overlord Must Win, Yipin. (Not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai) Sorry for any inconvenience.

When I saw the last killing, I felt that the book finally came to life, just like the ministers killed and killed after the assassination of King Qin. A special feeling emerged

The writing is pretty good, but it's a pity that so few people subscribe. I'm basically all set. When I looked at the fan list, I was ranked third... Anyway, give the author some encouragement.

Why not try to refine it yourself.... In case the system is GG 😥