The Coming of the Saint

It has to be said that the author has played a very good hand. The work is good in terms of imagination and writing. However, the update speed drags down the whole book. Maybe you don't take the data of the book seriously, but if this continues, you will lose a lot of readers! If you are not careful about fattening, you may die! If one chapter a day is not enough, then we can do one chapter every three days!

I came to see the pastor, not to see you play the piano, cook, pretend to be 13, and pick up girls in a 10-year-old novel.

To be honest, it's one chapter a day, and sometimes it's delayed. It's too tiring to watch, and to be honest, the progression of the plot is really slow for me. I don't know how long it will take for this book to be finished, but I estimate there is a 50% chance of it being completed. So, I can only take it off the bookshelf. Too tired to watch. Hey...

The author is trying to figure out the characters. I want to know what characters there are, but I feel confused.

This kind of writing attitude. Either don't do something, or do it seriously. How often will it be updated? I'm too lazy to wait. It's probably a series for my lifetime. Or it's a eunuch novel.

The content is poor, the plot is not compact enough, updates are weak, and it makes people anxious to watch it! When I look back after gaining weight, I don't even know what I wrote before!

What has always attracted me to this book is that the protagonist is always slowly learning and working hard to become stronger. Unlike other Long Aotian novels, he doesn't show off when he has strength, and breaks through when he encounters a strong enemy. The slow writing style gives people a gentle feeling, maybe because the author has no utilitarianism. There is no plot for the sake of enjoyment, and there is no intrigue or intrigue. Anyway, it feels very relaxing to read, but the plot is a bit loose. If you don't write more than a thousand chapters based on the way this daily novel is written, I'd be sorry for describing the daily life in such detail. Anyway, if the author dares to write, I dare to read it. Don't change the outline just for comments. The author still has writing talent, just write according to your own ideas, just don't need TJ. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง and keep an eye on you.

Persistence is victory, author

I don't understand why time-travelers can't have faith. If there really is a God who can bring happiness to people, then why can't they believe in him? As long as you have a little gratitude to God, isn't that faith?

Today's update. . . . !

How can I put it, the advantage of this book is that the subject matter is novel, and the book has the feeling of a two-dimensional light novel. Many scenes are very graphically depicted, which is very good for a novice. Disadvantages: The first point is that the writing is a bit messy, and it is very paced. I read the 300th chapter and the protagonist has only traveled a few months. However, the events he has experienced are already a bit too rich. If it were not mentioned in the book, I would not have thought of it. Moreover, based on the protagonist's current progress, there will definitely be such a scene x years later. The second point is that the main plot is basically driven by the system. I feel that the protagonist is like a puppet most of the time, and the system basically takes care of everything for the protagonist. There is assistance in drawing, assistance in aiming, assistance in refining medicine. Anyway, there is assistance in everything. It feels like the real protagonist should be the system. The third point: The power system is a bit broken, and the protagonist's strength changes. Basically, every time before starting a battle, you have to explain the level of the protagonist's magic and what level it has been after adding various buffs to the protagonist. However, there is no specific reference for this level. It all gives people a false and empty feeling, because everyone does not understand the standard power of magical spells at all levels. You say that the first-level spells you release are better than others' fourth-level spells, but everyone does not know how powerful the fourth-level spells are, so they only have a vague impression in their minds, which is indeed a bit uncomfortable to watch. This is my first time writing a long review, it's a bit messy, please forgive me (´ω`)

Come on, author! Subscribe to support! I really like to see this kind of true and kind holy light!

I hope the church will not be written as dark. After all, this is a world where gods really exist. You, a believer, have betrayed the rules set by the gods. I am afraid you don't want to die... Unless the god of this church is an evil god himself, corruption cannot occur... Oh, don't take real-life Christianity as an example. After all, there is no God in reality, so naturally there will be so much filth... The setting in DND is very good. As long as the priest betrays the gods, he will either lose all his power through the test but his life will be intact, or he will be directly burned to death by his own power, or he will find another god to support him and reverse his power...

I started chasing this book in 2017, and now it's 2020. Come on, the author, fight for your life. I'll see if I can live to see this book finish and live as an unfinished eunuch, or if I die before the book is finished, I will give you a reward when the book is finished, and put up a sticker as proof.

I drew it myself, and I will draw other characters in the future

Post a post to see if anyone is still reading this book. This is a quarterly book.

The tickets are all for you. Please update 🥺

I discovered this book in 2018, and in 2019 I found out that it had a million words. And now in 20 years, he is still updating it. It feels like he hasn't updated much in a year.

It's a pity, I watched it when I was in high school, I thought it was pretty good

I watched Grave Sweeping a long time ago. I came back to watch it on a whim, but it was no longer updated. At that time, I liked the tone very much, and the heroine was quite mysterious 🙂

I remembered this book I read when I was a kid, and I cried because it hadn't been updated yet. I really liked the one about the male and female paladin ()

Is the author still writing or not? Give me an accurate letter and don't pretend to be dead. I know that you have logged into the Qidian account for more than a year and your IP address is displayed. Don't lie here. Isn't it fun to hang people?

It's a pity that such a fluent priest novel is rare😢

Come on, author. Monthly tickets will always be given to you.

Can it still be resurrected😭

Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you

Big cheers for the author! I will always support you

Come on, author, the writing is great and it is very comfortable to read. I wish you success!

Come on, author. 2 Monthly tickets + 8 recommendations + 100 rewards. It's a small amount of kindness and no respect.