The Days of Opening a Restaurant on an Abnormal Earth

The first time I read Marvel on Apple was as a casual read in those years. After all, the early stage of that book is not much different from other Marvel fan fiction. At the beginning, the village leader of the novice village is Little Spider, and the novice village is New York. Where did it start? Apple's writing skills became more and more proficient, and he began to dare to write some of his higher fantasies. At this time, I realized that this author was no ordinary author. His world is alive and feels so real to me. At least I think so. Readers can clearly feel that the world is gradually moving forward driven by the protagonists intentionally or unintentionally. It is difficult to change the world. It does not mean that a person who is invincible can change the world, nor does it mean that a person can change the world no matter how powerful a weapon he holds. Let's put it this way, to change the world, we must change mankind. In other words, we must start from the nature of human beings Or the lazy heart, or various desires These derogatory-sounding words are the real driving force for the development of the world today. And Apple is always good at starting from angles that people haven't thought of. Who said that the Marvel world must be fought back and forth? It should be cool to manipulate the market hydra with just a finger. Who said that in a surreal city, you have to pretend to be cool and pick up girls? Simple propaganda and guidance of public opinion is far more effective than directly going to the boss organization's lair.               Apple has a very upright view, he dares to ask questions and write about his ideas, and some of his ideas always make people's eyes shine  "What the hell is this okay?" Such surprised complaints are the greatest praise for Apple in my opinion. Maybe the performance of the book cannot be compared with those of the big guys. I can only say one thing, those guys who consider themselves old bookworms to find faults, or those who have a bad outlook and hate positive writing, you have lost a world. A real world.

Message to the author: Hello Apple, I am one of your readers. For this book, I believe you must have put a lot of effort into it. I believe you will have the opportunity to become one of the great authors, and I can also clearly feel the improvement of "Restaurant" compared to "Marvel". Regarding the recent chapters of this book (it may be nearly one or two hundred chapters, I didn't count 😅), I have some personal opinions, which are not necessarily correct, but I have to say them as if they are stuck in my throat. My personal writing skills are not good, my accumulation is limited, and my expression may be wrong, but I hope you can understand that I do not mean to criticize you in any way. I just express my feelings and hope to be helpful to your writing career. After all, the more good authors there are, the better we readers can enjoy the pleasure of reading. I really like the works of Yuantong, Ermu, Sanzha and others. Relatively speaking, I prefer light novels with a brisk style, and the first half of this book gave me such a feeling. I once thought I had discovered a good book like "The Record of Abnormal Creatures". I have also read your last book, Marvel. I found it very boring when I read about two to three hundred chapters. The events were just a simple accumulation, and the text was stiff and pale. It read like a running account, and it was difficult to arouse empathy. Because you updated two books at the same time, so I jumped to the chapter you have already written. When I started writing this book, I found that the writing style did not move closer to that of this book. It was still a collection of running accounts (this description may not be accurate). There are countless plots similar to the vampire human ranch in the early stage of "Marvel", including the current "restaurant" that also gave me this feeling. I can feel that you are trying hard to describe, and you want readers to feel the same for the plot you describe. You have drawn many details to enrich the plot and improve the depth of the work. However, this is an online novel. The obvious light novel style of the first half of "Restaurant" has brought you a lot of love for this style of writing. Readers, in the middle period, when you want to deepen the "depth" of the work through a heavy plot and portray the darkness of human nature, the more pen and ink you use, the more disgusted these readers will be. They feel that the work does not match their expectations and is incompatible with the early style, which is the so-called logical inconsistency. I have also read very, very heavy and in-depth online articles, such as "Wasted", for example, a novel in which the protagonist is an unknown boy and the heroine is the prime minister's daughter. The sadness is so sad that I have almost completely forgotten it. They are still very interesting, but this does not mean that if you write a heavy plot in the book, it will be equally attractive. When I was in college, I was buying food in the cafeteria and a pot of braised mushrooms was brought to me. I like mushrooms very much, so I ordered this dish. It turned out that there was only one layer of mushrooms, and the bottom was all fried cabbage. I didn't hate cabbage, but I felt that I had been cheated and I was unhappy with the whole meal. Four or five years later, I still remember this. Moreover, the joyful "abnormality" has a depth that is difficult to reach in ordinary online articles. What I said is quite confusing, and there are other things to do. I hope you can understand what I mean, and correctly understand (other) readers' evaluations of you, and distinguish when readers say you are just making fun of you, and when they seriously feel that your writing is not good. I hope you can continue to improve and don't give up on your requirements for text quality under pressure. Your readers Thank you ps: I couldn't find how to send a private message, so I put it in the book review area

I have read more than 50 chapters. The story is a good one, but it is too long-winded and a bit boring.       :2630，       :40534，，23！ ! ! Water water water. . I will finally talk about Chapter 49. Ji Xiaochun, as the leader of Wang Wu and a small elite figure in the cult organization, was actually provoked to anger by the protagonist's few words! ! ? ? As a character hiding behind darkness, what kind of calmness and forbearance should he have? What about patience? How could such a character be hidden for so long without being discovered by the "relevant departments"? ? Moreover, Ji Xiaochun is also a teacher of spirituality, psychedelics, and hypnosis! It's obviously a character error. . Finally, I hope the author will work hard and strive to do better.

I may not be able to read such a slow-burning book. I feel that the protagonist is out of touch with the times and does not quickly make up for it, but just does this and that.

I read the Nightcrawler book first, and I've recently gained weight and am reading this one. The three views are really upright, including the views and ways of thinking on many things that are beyond those of ordinary authors. The supporting characters are all vivid and better than the previous book. There are basically no tools, which is so rare. Yazi is also improving in his writing skills. To sum up, this apple is good for everyone.

I feel that the article is a little off topic and drifts away from the main line. It is commonly known as: crooked building.

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This book is much better than your Marvel book, the plot and creativity are great. But you inexplicably stopped reading this book to read Marvel. Now that I have updated it again after more than half a year, I have forgotten the plot and can only give up.

Maybe I'm a little disgusted when I say this. The author strongly begs not to give away a daughter. In order to be able to write book reviews, pirated copies were turned into regular copies.

This book should be my favorite book of 2018. The most interesting thing about the novel is that it constructs a fictional world based on the real world. And although the expansion is slow in the early stage, each stage of expansion can at least be scored 7.5 Points for reasonableness. The male protagonist's character is also very realistic, so it's okay... Damn, I just sprayed it without going through the process. From the moment he entered the hive, or rather from the moment he joined the Mage Cultivator Association, everything became inexplicable. Each chapter basically contains a bunch of private goods to inject water into, something to make the station UP, and some hot social current affairs. Occasionally, once or twice, I saw the nonsense paragraphs at the end and just skipped it. After all, the author's work has personal content and grievances, so just think about it. I saw that there were more than fifty chapters left to read, "Plan to Enhance Physical Fitness of Earthlings". ? ? ? ? Doesn't the male protagonist just want to live a peaceful life? Afraid of invasion from parallel universes. . . . Isn't it true that the ability value according to the author's description of the invasion is a fair deduction? I don't want to talk about the ambiguous description of the combat power system.

I found a treasure. I clicked on it a long time ago, but stopped reading it when I saw the second chapter. First, I remembered that it only had more than 200,000 words at that time, and I didn't want to read it because it was too short. Second, when I saw the second chapter, I thought it was a girl's video book. Then after a long time, I clicked in again, clicked to read and went straight to the second chapter. I was still stunned for a moment, and then - it's here - I continued reading, and found such a treasure book, with a simple style of writing, a life-oriented atmosphere, and a little playful writing style, plus there were not a lot of book friends who clicked on it now. What a treasure.

It's different from what I thought. I thought it was just daily writing about cooking, delicious food, etc. I didn't expect him to be a supernatural writer, and he doesn't like intrigues. It means accepting incompetence, but still prefers a relaxed daily life.

A Pound of Grapes, your novel about those days when you were a villain in Marvel, where is Chapter 9 of the second volume of Vampire Empire?

When will you start updating again? Didn't notice either.

The author's writing style is very good, but the author should create it by himself. To be honest, the script is not good. There are too many places that copy reality. And I can't get rid of the scope of Shuangwen. The hand-made sea view plan is now mostly jumped off the building. Believe it or not, do you think this plan is great? Because this plan is real and feasible. The author directly moved it. But this kind of plan is difficult to operate successfully. To put it simply, the writing is very good, but the plot is not good, and there are too many copied parts. It's not plagiarism, it's just a re-creation based on real things.

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

Apple's books are like a daily routine and need to be read slowly The last one, The Blame-Baker, only started to show its strength in the middle. I really like this book now. It is plain but not trivial. It is slow and leisurely but not ink. And you haven't noticed that Apple writes that everyone and everything are connected. Everyone has different tastes and it is normal for some people to dislike it. I hope that readers who don't like this book can just not read it. If you think it is slow, just wait for a while and then read it. Don't scold the author. There is no point in scolding the author. If you don't like it, just don't read it. I've said this on Countercurrent, I've said it on Baseline, I've also said it on the Dome, and I've also said it when Uemoto was a scapegoat in Marvel. I still want to say it here. Don't troll the author. It's meaningless. Don't be a pea shooter. That's even more meaningless. I hope Apple can write books with peace of mind. Don't be distracted by these pea shooters. This is a very good food article (confirm). We haven't seen enough of your daily typos. Come on!

When Guo Ge's restaurant was mentioned in the group, it was talking about the type of late-night canteen. Considering Guo Ge's experience as a "cook" and pastry baking training, I believe that the food in this book will have a "real" taste. Guo Ge's restaurant is different from the mainstream of Qidian. On the one hand, it is reflected in rhythm and expression. The restaurant itself is positioned in daily life, so the story will naturally have some trivial matters and some fragmentary details. A max-level boss who does not aim to dominate the world will definitely take the leisure of "retreating from the world". Similarly, since confrontation is not the core, the character's way of thinking must be different from the "combat" thinking. Brother Guo spent a lot of time laying out the thoughts of the characters, and at the same time contacted and developed many related things. With Brother Guo's personal thoughts (commonly known as private goods), because it is different from the core of many cool articles, there must be strong personal opinions to maintain the writing. (In my personal opinion, there is naturally a problem of matching the three views. If you cannot adapt to these three views, you will naturally feel uncomfortable.) Let's give an example. The villain positioned in this article does not seem to be that "evil". Moreover, they are "villain organizations" connected by interests. In order to maintain the organization, they provide better treatment and higher wages. Unlike Shuangwen, the villain can deal with his subordinates at will. Before the "protagonist" grows up, he has to be brave and rainy, with the coolness of "coming back after losing a lot of money". When it comes to "interests", the villain simply does not have the pleasure of reading a novel, and to a certain extent, he loses readers with "dark preferences". Perhaps some people appreciate bad guys who go on a killing spree over a disagreement and become arrogant without dealing with the situation. But when it comes to "stealing electric cars" (it can be compared to Sikong Zhaixing, this person does not give people such a bad feeling), "pyramid schemes", and "occupying positions". The discomfort with the villain has really increased rapidly, and some controversial backgrounds have been added, such as "revenge", "becoming stronger", and "hate the rich" elements. There will definitely be different opinions. There is also the issue of the positioning of the protagonist, which is also controversial due to style. Jiang Hua's performance is more in line with Shuangwen's happiness, superior abilities, jealous character, fickle behavior, superiors' favor, and the contradictions of smooth characters. This series is Shuangwen's protagonist template. On the other hand, looking back at the protagonist, his mysterious experience, cooking good food, not fighting for power, etc., The setting is like a background board for a story. Due to the reading habit of Shuangwen, readers cannot tell who the protagonist is. But the Chinese class teaches us to look at the protagonist of the novel. The simple judgment is who unfolds the story and who is driving the development of things. Rather than who appears first at the beginning, who is more likable. On the other hand, it is reflected in the difference between the climax and mainstream novels. The ending of many things is not who defeats whom, who subdues whom, but more of a fragment of life. Without this strong contradictory stimulus, there will be a feeling of "water". In addition, some problems in the novel are pointed out in the article, or the plot is mind-numbing, or the logic is ridiculous, which makes readers who are used to this kind of writing feel uncomfortable and unwilling to explain such ideas. Give me a logical problem that does not appear in this novel. In many cool articles, there are always wise men judging the odds of winning, or probability issues. Originally, this is a matter of intuition. But I always like to focus on wise people to reflect their high IQ. Readers who have studied statistics will know that there is no judgment without data, and various types of analysis should not be mentioned. Logic can be deceptive and multi-directional. Relying on this to be a wise man is also destructive. In other words, the content of anti-Shuangwen becomes a new form of Shuangwen as soon as it goes astray. This kind of content depends on the reader's own ideas. Yesterday, Brother Guo blocked the tweet. I hope more readers will like it. He updates 200,000 words per month, so he is considered a hard-working author. I hope you support him.

Apples, apples, apples, I'm all set, I'm all set for nothing else, I can't stand it anymore, what's the matter with you? What's going on? What's going on? What's going on? Write a good story! Aren't you the author? Write a good story! Can't you just write what you want to write? Don't be influenced by this messy person all the time, okay? Zhang Tong will cry, Jiang Hua will cry, and I will cry too. Can't you just write a good story? This book, this story, this story, even if it doesn't reach the platinum level, I think it is at least a gold-level story. What a good story! Can you stop being so glass-hearted? It's so rare to find such a comprehensive novel, okay? You are obviously very talented, okay? , Tell a good story, okay?

A very good book, I like it very much. The narrative is quite unpretentious, but it also contains some flavor. If I had to say what this flavor is, it would probably be a combination of warmth and realism. The excessive descriptions of food in the play cannot be said to be cumbersome or redundant. Instead, I feel that it is precisely because of the food passages written by the author's experience as a chef that it gives this book a different kind of reality. I also like the work's insight into various aspects of society. The three-point sense of reality is impressive, and the seven-point warmth makes this somewhat cruel reality no longer so "cruel." The most noteworthy thing is that I couldn't put it down because of the characters of Jiang Hua and Zhang Tong. I was so addicted to them that I couldn't extricate myself. Jiang Hua, the simple and decisive Gravity Queen who boldly pursues love, is impressive. She is not only perfect, but also has the experience of being a fat man and has her own little temper. She is really vivid and I think she is a very likable female character. To be honest, the protagonist Zhang Tong's portrayal is not as impressive as Jiang Hua's, but the setting is different from the so-called mainstream protagonists who are quite violent, which makes me feel pretty good. An old-school handsome guy, the characteristics of the old era and the new era intersect in him, and he can be regarded as a protagonist with particularly charming personality. Let's talk about another problem, that is, the author sometimes brings in private information, but fortunately, the three views expressed in the private articles are also pretty good. It does not mean that the three views of the author and I are consistent, but the author's three views can make me not disgusted, and even make me feel a lot of affirmation. The most important thing is that the author can carefully create an interesting plot to bring out his personal stuff naturally. As for the noisy "battery car theft" and other incidents, I can only say that I don't feel the poison. As a person who has been reading novels on a keypad since the third grade of elementary school and is now a college student, I have my own taste in appreciating books. In my opinion, this is not a poisonous point. It can only be said to be incompatible with the so-called mainstream impetuous ideas. I just want to say that it is ridiculous. Nowadays, the definition of poisonous points in the Internet literature world is really getting more and more confusing to me. It's like a group of children who don't understand but pretend to understand. Think about the past, not killing decisively was a poisonous point, and having a female protagonist was a poisonous point. To be honest, it is really ridiculous. Even now this trend is quite popular. I can only say whether there is a heroine or not, and whether the killing is decisive or not cannot be my criterion for judging a book. I cannot beat it to death because of my own taste, nor can I beat it to death because I have read too many bad books with that kind of poison. Poisonous point? What's the poison? You just don't like to see it. Your arsenic is my food. It is really boring to blindly spray poison points everywhere. At least I will think that you are the one who is jealous of other street authors and comes here specifically to spray him. This book is really, really good-looking. I found it while sorting out books on fattening from a long time ago. I once read more than 200 of them to get fatter, but now there are more than a thousand, which is really surprising. I patiently re-read it, and the two hundred chapters I had read were still so interesting, with gentle parts and climaxes, the cool points were just right, and the characters' personalities were deeply rooted in people's hearts. Although many plot excesses are a bit coincidental and dramatic, isn't it quite pleasant to watch? In addition, I hope the author will not be affected by the comments. At least judging from the more than 400 pictures I have seen recently, this book is quite interesting. It is the kind of book that I think is outrageous if it does not make gods. As an author who has recently come up with the idea of ​​writing a book at Qidian, I just want to say that human words are indeed terrifying. I really want to read the first 400 chapters, which are humane, have laughs, have romance, have fun, have fighting, almost perfect content. I sincerely hope that your subsequent chapters will not deviate too much. Not much to say, I ordered all of them first, and then went to watch the pirated version. The original version of this book is really annoying to read. Too many people have affected my reading experience in the comment area.

What an interesting novel Warm people, warm things, and occasional little episodes to stimulate excitement are really in line with my values. It is my dream to find a wife who is pleasing to my eyes, have one or two children, and live a normal daily life with a little excitement occasionally. Compared to those protagonists who save the world at every turn and possess the blood of xx system xx, I prefer novels like this book. In fact, I feel that the Qidian trend is slowly turning into daily heartwarming genres. From the rise of food streams and anchor streams, we can already see readers' love for daily genres. Many readers are tired of fighting monsters and upgrading, and hope to see some warm scenes. This result has led to the sudden rise of daddy stories. To be fair, who would hate a well-behaved and obedient little girl? What's more, there are so many lolicons nowadays. . . But more of it is the touch we can gain from our daily lives. What can touch people's hearts is precisely the ordinary. Look at Aunt Niu, who works overtime until night every day and gives up time with her son for a subsidy of more than 1,000 yuan. One day you see her child admitted to a key university and hug her and cry with the admission notice. Will you be happy for them? Look at Boss Zhang, he opens a restaurant, the food is good and cheap, and he is a honest and honest person. Recently, he wants to pursue a policewoman. He has been thinking hard. You have also given him many ideas. When he embraces the beauty, will you feel happy for him? I never wanted to stand out. I am satisfied to be able to sit in the yard with my grandfather and talk in the sun, to sit and drink with my father and listen to him talk about how he was doing back then, to hear my mother telling me to wear long johns when the weather is cold, and to listen to her complaining to me about the increase in vegetable prices and other trivial matters. I am satisfied with these. It's a pity that grandpa is gone and the old house has been demolished. There is no yard for me to bask in the sun anymore. Grandpa is such a good person. He is honest and responsible. He was still healthy last year and is cancer-free. My mom and dad are separated. My dad was seriously ill before and almost didn't survive. Now he's busy with work every day and only sees him at the dinner table. Sometimes he doesn't come back until one or two o'clock in the evening. It's hard to find time to talk to his dad. My mother often buys me clothes and shoes, transfers pocket money to me, and often takes me out to play here and there. Unfortunately, I can no longer hear her complaining to me about this or that. Every ordinary day we live may be a series of miracles happening one after another.

1 The text is very kind and describes the warm scenes of life very well. This is a huge advantage, and reading this book is not a loss for this reason. 2 The protagonist is set to defeat Cthulhu and have the power of the universe in a blink of an eye, but he pretends to be an ordinary person on earth. This setting is too far away from the desperate temperament in the Cthulhu story. It is just to gain popularity, which is unnecessary. 3 The setting of the returnees in this book is very interesting, and there are also plots in which various organizations interact with them. This kind of description of organizations and society should be very interesting, and the author does write some interesting stories. 4 In short, if you don't mind the invincible protagonist and the unlucky villain who are too coincidental, this book is still worth reading.

On a whim, I wrote a long review to count how many holes are left unfilled. The first is the superpower of the pig's feet. Now it is just said to have magnetism. The specific strength is not clearly stated. How did the pig's feet come back? Is it the same as others or is it like the readers guessed. Is it too strong to be weakened, or is it too strong? The weak talent has not been weakened (but this seems unlikely), and the dignified little lolita who is particularly edible (I don't know if there will be a follow-up, I feel like it is half written), and Tian Yi has not been found yet. I am not sure who killed Tian Yi's parents. I'll stop here first, I hope it won't sink in (I hope everyone can tell me if I'm wrong in some places, after all, I read books at a glance, and maybe I didn't see some places) 😁😁😁😁

The author seems to have changed his mind. The name of the author of the current number one book is "One Pound of Little Avocado". The author's family is also a porcelain maker. How can they be so similar?

Short comment: Various time travelers come and go in online articles. Will one day all time travelers come back together? Yes, they are back. Work: "The Day of Opening a Restaurant on an Abnormal Earth" Author: One Ton Big Apple Keywords: Anti-travel, return, superpower, daily life Commentator: Bu Mingbai Introduction: Every unit pays attention, every unit pays attention. The issue of implementing the work of returnees who have returned from time travel is the top priority in this year's work. Profoundly let the returnees and superpowers Awakened people feel the warmth of society and the concern of the department, and make due efforts and contributions to building a harmonious society for everyone. This is a story of a man who responded to the government's call and opened a restaurant to start his own business during the wave of return time travellers. Book review: Apple must have also changed his profession from an old bookworm to become an author, so in his novel, he brought back those compatriots who have traveled to other dimensions. A very interesting setting. On the one hand, there are the "returnees" who have traveled back through time, and on the other hand, there are the "superpowers" who have awakened on their own in the local area. The earth has undergone tremendous changes in just ten years. Isn't it interesting to think about it? When there are more cheating fingers, the world will inevitably experience some pain. The people in power in our great dynasty are quite good, and have achieved great results in managing the returnees and those with special abilities. Whether it is policy constraints, employment placement, or welfare benefits, everything is in order. But people's hearts are complicated. Although there are many down-to-earth people like the protagonist Zhang Tong, there are also many who have not yet awakened from the dream of kingship and hegemony. Therefore, there are always some people who don't want to live well and seek death around the protagonist. So while the protagonist Zhang Tong is conscientiously opening a shop and cooking, he always needs to poke and nip some unstable things in the bud (ability: electromagnetism, the strongest combat power on earth in the dark). Don't waste time chasing your wife. Yes, the most urgent thing for the older leftover man who is in his thirties on his ID card is to chase his wife. He is extremely anxious. For this reason, he also worked hard to change and improve himself, evolving from a slut who looked like a 1960s guy to a fashionable man. A famous internet celebrity and handsome uncle. . 😎 The heroine Jiang Hua is a very masculine policewoman, known as the Queen of Gravity. All kinds of royal sister style, with a little bit of tsundere, she is really cute. . 😆Because her first boyfriend in college turned out to be gay, Jiang Hua lost her temper from a fat man weighing more than 200 pounds to the supermodel beauty she is today. . It is precisely because of this that when she sees a good-looking man, she always suspects that he is gay, so she becomes an older leftover girl, and is taken advantage of by the protagonist -? (It has not yet become a real thing (´-ω-`). And Jiang Hua now easily gets angry whenever she hears someone mention her former weight. Fried chicken is cute. (๑• . •๑) I like the descriptions of various abilities in the article, many of them are very novel! People around the world use their imaginations to use their own abilities, such as: dyeing hair with bare hands without using medicine; whitening and removing freckles with pure spiritual power; sterilization without sequelae; magical powers... It is quite interesting to see it.

The book is quite good, but the plot has been a bit toxic recently. The protagonist is being beaten by a little Japanese. What is it about cultivating immortals and not being able to defeat Ninja? I hope the author can improve it.

Looking at it now, I feel that this is not about opening a restaurant, but about me being my wife's ass and being my wife's slave.

What should people like Apple do who live off subscriptions and still support their wives and children? Mad, this is such a shitty world.

No matter how big the cake is, no matter what means are used to distribute it, it will always be distributed unevenly, because it is the basic desire of people to get a bigger cake, which leads to the occurrence of conflicts of interest. The ultimate purpose of law and force is to moderate the competition and distribution of interests, rather than the so-called fairness and justice. Once the number of people with superpowers reaches a certain level, conflicts of interest are inevitable. Even if the pig's trotters live forever and dominate the world, it is better to divide the pie among the people with superpowers than to simply restrict them with rules and regulations. Only when they benefit will they maintain the system. Otherwise, they will just fall into endless infighting among the superpowers, and ordinary people will only be worse off. I feel like pig's feet are too idealistic

The character of the protagonist is not like someone who was in his twenties in 2000 and is now twenty-eight years old, living in Shanghai, the first city to open to the outside world. He is more like a worker in his forties or fifties who works in an old industrial city in the north. He is not curious about new things and does not want to understand any new ideas. The time before 30 is supposed to be the most active time, but the protagonist is like a middle-aged man in his 40s or 50s who is waiting to retire. It is okay to pursue justice and equal rights, but it is not necessary to write all the positive characters in it as stereotypes. Moreover, there are too many sermons to teach others.