Survival in the Cracks in the Elf World

There are many dark parts in this book. It's not about torturing the owner, but it's about torturing your heart. Pokémon sees you as the only one and you see it as a tool. You have to squeeze out the last value before death. The key is that there are many plots and detailed descriptions. Book friends with a bright and kind heart are not recommended to read it. It is very harmful to the heart.

It is dark and delicately written. At the beginning, five of the six elves in Ajiu are crippled and one of them dies. Oh my god, it deeply shocked my young heart. I keep this as a souvenir. I read it with the music MY ALL. The death of the giant needle bee is very sad. I just feel that although the ending seems to be free (the strongest), I always feel that something is missing.

I feel like I'm always sneering here, please, this is a dark article, mainly about inner activities. You sneer at every turn to show that you are awesome. . Don't you think it's too stupid? And Pokémon is mainly about the mutual recognition between trainers and Pokémon. One is killed here at every turn, It can only be said to be a fantasy in the skin of PokémonArticle🤫

Currently my favorite Pokémon fanfic, the plot is reasonable, the characters are detailed, and the dark story is very appetizing. I hope there will be a new main line (similar to Shadow Team) or new elves in the future. Come on!

It's amazing. The little elves that I killed were decisive in killing them. I killed ten thousand people who didn't want to do it. This is the first harem. The plot is so connected.

After reading along the way, I personally think the author's writing is very interesting, and the description of elf development and battle is very sophisticated. Moreover, the rhythm of collecting elves is also well controlled. I sincerely hope that the author can continue to keep up the good work~

Come on, it's really well written.

The author must not be a eunuch.

Generally speaking, I think the biggest flaw of this book is that the world view setting is a mess. You can completely rely on the game, or you can set your own world view like Ting Shu. There is a problem with the world view setting, okay, I can accept it, but your protagonist is killing people and setting fires everywhere for a little profit. Is this still the protagonist? The IQ of the supporting characters is also not online. Generally, few authors will make major changes to the story lines of fan anime, because it is not easy to guess what will happen to the plot later. Most of them will choose some unknown places to construct the story, because this has nothing to do with anime.

Because of the book shortage and the cartoon I watched the most when I was a kid, I also read a lot of Pokémon fan novels, and I summarized some of the things that make this book better than other novels. 1. Every Pokémon is powerful for a reason. In other novels, it is mentioned in one stroke as talent and the protagonist's luck. 2. Each Pokémon has a different personality. In other novels... They are all unyielding, aggressive, loyal and diligent. No matter if it is the King of Leave or something. 3. The protagonist grows up regularly, like other novels where he goes out for a year to catch mythical beasts. 4. The supporting characters are not without their merits. In other fandoms, it is impossible to defeat the protagonist's Pokémon. 5. Failure after time travel. Almost all time travel novels have a protagonist who was a waste before time travel. Once time travel, his IQ skyrocketed.

Let's talk about a major poisonous point in online literature. It is especially easy to appear in dark literature. When it appears, it will be +999 to persuade others to quit. That is, they are fooling teammates (mainly referring to those who have no conflict of interest with the protagonist and can even help the protagonist). Of course, this point looks good if it is well written. It's very fun, but I'm afraid that my lack of writing skills will make me self-defeating. Let's talk about some teammates who have been criticized for their brainlessness. First of all, the famous Gu Zhenren pretended to be the Wolf King and killed a fan girl. The fan girl was really obsessed with him, and many people felt that killing her was not worth the gain. There is also a book called Summoning from the Abyss of Doom. I tamed a dog for a day at the beginning, and killed him in a sneak attack when the dog was licking him affectionately (probably, I am no longer chasing him) just to activate a summoning ability that can summon monsters from the abyss. They also said that the dog is not reliable and only those monsters are reliable. Ahem, summoning an abyss monster will give you 100 loyalty. Do you think you are playing a game? The author of that book's writing is not bad, and his character is not bad, but the results cannot be improved, which may be related to the powerful dissuading function of killing dogs at the beginning. There is also a book I read some time ago, Shang Sanjiang. A girl summoned a turtle and asked the protagonist to help raise it. Then the protagonist stewed the turtle. It was really scolded. Some people still like my chapter. Finally, let me talk about dark literature. The style of writing can be dark, the methods can be dark, but the heart cannot be dark. After all, we are still living on the earth. Dark novels are for authors and readers to vent their inner pressures, rather than to cultivate a shameless dark heart.

There are a lot of new poison types in Alola ~ Looking forward to it, the plot is also very exciting now

People treat you with all their heart and soul, but this protagonist doesn't even have any bottom line? Dark writing, bad for the sake of being bad, really disgusting.

The writing is poor, the plot is terrible, and the protagonist is 60 years old, but he actually only has the IQ of a 3-year-old.

I read a lot of fans and expressed their opinions: To be honest, the ones I carefully read are: Survival in the Cracks, Legendary Trainer, and Darkness Rising. It's not that I like reading dark novels because I have a dark heart, but I feel that after traveling through time, it's a real world. There are also various dark organizations and poachers, which shows that this is a real world like the earth. Shazhi was besieged by the Spearow in the first episode, which shows that the wild is not as safe as imagined. And when Pikachu was delivered to the Pokémon Center, Joey said that Pikachu would die later. There are many similar examples, so I won't list them all. Let's talk about the gap between the rich and the poor: there are boys who catch insects and boys in shorts, which can be explained. Generally speaking, I just like realistic novels, without a female protagonist, and it doesn't have to be a dark novel like a crack in the middle. At least be realistic, whether it is elves or various resources, the protagonist must fight to make money and develop. The elf world is so big that you can make up your own map, like Neverland or various uninhabited areas. The excitement of the long journey of life, the different cultivation methods and different general categories of the protagonist's elves in each book. Each elf has its own characteristics rather than just being cultivated and trained casually after being subdued. Like the legendary trainer: The powerful Swampert is very attractive with one punch and a squealing monster, and the combination move of the Earth Ice Hammer is super cool. The final outcome is actually not important. Anyway, the end of the elf world is to become the champion or beat all the champion kings. Just like Kane finally became invincible and traveled around the world, instead of traveling through the past and starting with a three-family or system. He is a quasi-god with all kinds of flashes. He goes out to the Viridian Forest to torture bugs, upgrades to a lower level, and then starts playing in the gym. It feels really childish. Moreover, he is following Shazhi's map. He might as well go back to see Shazhi and there are various female protagonists in the harem, which makes me even more speechless.

After reading Chapter 520, I discovered that the protagonist is a pervert, and massacred an entire village in order to improve his own strength. The author's human nature has been distorted in order to reflect the darkness.

I only read the first nine chapters. After hesitating a few times, I couldn't bear it anymore and quit. It's not about giving advice to the author (because everyone is different). From the first nine chapters, I can see that the protagonist is a person who uses Pokémon as a tool. Pokémon treats the protagonist with pure fear. First of all, Pokémon have emotions. Secondly, Pokémon are much more powerful than ordinary people. In addition, the more powerful forces in the Pokémon world are generated by bonds, and the protagonist and Pokémon have no bond. Secondly, the world described in the book is too unrealistic. Just the orphanage confused me. This orphanage has so much power and is so dark. First of all, he can seek private property. I really don't know how that is done. Secondly, he can also threaten a breeding house owner so that he cannot adopt a child with an inheritance.

I have read it myself, it is a good novel. I think this novel is quite good. I like the style of painting, the plot, and the character of the protagonist. The details are well described. It's not bad.

A disgusting book, forced to be mentally retarded and dark, yet people still like it. Even if there are people in society who are trying to trick others, they will not show off like this. Who doesn't smile when he's tricking people?

The beginning is too stupid. Those who want to read dark stories can leave, and those who want to read bonding stories should go out. The two Pokémon novels are not related to each other, and the setting of rebirth is a cool story. It's funny. If this author doesn't go to the street, who will go to the street?

The protagonist of this novel is so shameless. He even cheats Uncle Liu. He kills a long-haired pig for a piece of unmelted ice. Uncle Liu is already very interesting to him. He gives the pig horns all the training methods of pressing the bottom of the box. The publication of the previous paper was also shameless. It was originally a doctor's patent, but because he failed to obtain it in his previous life, he suffered retribution (being imprisoned by the relevant department for a few days). He has to take revenge in this life. It's really fucking Bichi.

After reading the previous chapter, the protagonist is so disgusting, worse than the rats in the sewer. Being mean and dirty is always the heart of a villain.

Liu Bo has been so good to the protagonist in this life, why can't he be given a good ending? It would be better for you to let him grow old and die naturally than this way of writing. To be honest, it's a bit disgusting. Forcing my wish to come true makes me want to vomit.

Not to my liking, the style of painting is wrong. Call it a fan, there is no bond between the trainer and the elves in the original work, and they just kill the beasts to get their bags. Call it a fantasy, there is no contract and no means of control, so why should the elves listen to the trainers. It feels like a summons wrapped in elf skin

Don't say this work is too dark. This is reality. It is human nature to harm others for one's own sake, and only a minority are willing to help others unconditionally. The author said at the beginning that this novel is dark. If you want to read about healing, go to Tingshu. I am a slow-tempered person, and the protagonist, the Virgin, suits you. Every novel has its own advantages. Don't think that all people are the same because of your own preferences. The right thing to do is to choose the one that suits your personality, so don't get into trouble with yourself. After all, everyone has to live, and being the same will only create garbage (I'm not talking about a certain potato) Come on, author, wait for the new book (don't be too dark, just pursue the ultimate in force, otherwise it will be really depressing sometimes)

It's like I magnified my negative emotions and wrote them into a novel. It feels uncomfortable.

The gas bomb cultivated by Kane was wandering around one day and met the double bomb gas abandoned by Kane. Unexpectedly, Kane was such a person, so he secretly poisoned Kane, and Kane was poisoned to death. The whole book is over.

The little wild boar who killed Liu Bo also wanted his family's inheritance and killed the Nine Tails who had been waiting for his master for thousands of years. From the looks of it, these pigs' feet are purely evil people. They don't have their own villain ideals and bottom line for Pokémon. People who like Team Rocket are good to their Pokémon and are sincere in giving. Purely egoistic evil people really can't pursue them.

At the end of this book, I really wanted to give up on people like Liu Bo. . I think it's too dark to kill a whole village of Variety Monsters. . .

If you have a normal outlook on life, it is better not to have any contact with him. The protagonist is pseudo-dark, far from being as pure as Fang Yuan.