The Tang Dynasty's Grain King

I really couldn't stand it anymore and gave up. Let's withdraw from the party. Not rigorous at all. This is the first time I know that fried noodles are actually cut out. Cheng Huaimo was Cheng Yaojin's eldest son, and Cheng Chumo cried and fainted in the toilet.

I've read a few chapters and haven't finished the first volume yet, but except for the name Li Xuanba, which is the highlight, it's just as dull as water. The writing style is okay, but it's obvious that the author didn't prepare an outline and just wrote it one by one. The first volume looks really awkward. The villains were so frightened that they showed their aura in the casino. How did the boss get the confidence to send a few of his men to hunt down the protagonist afterwards? Killed more than a dozen people in the street, no matter whether they were good or bad, without alerting the government? These are two holes in the first volume. The protagonist is invincible from the beginning. He can defeat a million by one person. According to the history at that time, when everyone in the Turks was mobilized and gave up production, there were only so many people who could afford weapons. The protagonist could kill it single-handedly. Then rest for a while and fight for a while. In a few years, the Tang Dynasty will dominate the world! What to write next? The book failed to progress and fell apart halfway at the beginning. Then there was an inexplicable saying that if you kill Jieli Khan, the protagonist will disappear. What does it mean? Why not improve the background of the story in terms of settings and force the protagonist to have an unexplainable curse to control the development of the plot? If this continues, it can only be said that the number of words is just water. Also, the description of the heroine is too rough. What woman would fall in love with a man wearing thatch at first sight? In general, if you don't calm down and think about the outline carefully, this book will collapse after about one million words, right? Or deliberately pretending to be deaf and dumb, clearly solving the problem in one fell swoop, but in order to enrich the content, deliberately go around in circles and write more. The protagonist is invincible in terms of force at the beginning, which is a fundamental flaw in the setting. However, since this is a novel, it might as well include a few more characters from the novel to check and balance the protagonist.

I'll tell you why I can't stand it In fact, it's very simple. Just say no, and your body will do it honestly. Say, don't change history, but everything you do changes history. Who said that last thing? Bitch is just hypocritical

Why do I feel so bad when I am reborn and go back in time to not be an emperor? If you were to go back to the past and you had a chance to be an emperor, would you do it? I know how to counterattack.

How could a top student become like a loser after time travel?

It's a bad ending. It's a pity that a book with good ideas was ruined by the author.

Dear book lovers, if you see a familiar person around you who likes to smile bitterly and touch his nose, don't hesitate to hug him, he must be the protagonist.

The most annoying thing about the system is... Something like that. In the past, the novels written by Jin Yong and others had never been systematic.

The protagonist is also drunk. As mentioned in the previous article, he has been here for 2200 years. The protagonist has an IQ of 2000 + more than 30 doctoral degrees. The technology is advanced enough, right? But his IQ dropped seriously in the Tang Dynasty? You don't even know how to make steel in the most basic way, how can you increase the production of eggs? My brother, if I don't say anything else, can you make a pistol and a rifle with all your hard work? Also, the protagonist's method of training soldiers is really funny. Aren't orders and prohibitions the most basic thing? You have a good time with the soldiers all day long. Do you think that as long as you are well fed and well clothed? Oh my god, this book is so poisonous that I skipped through the second chapter! Do you think Li Shimin, who is so easy to talk to, can teach you the most basic things about how to behave, like me, a little book boy with only a bachelor's degree, my author? ? ?

The protagonist cannot see the woman walking, and the protagonist is not intelligent enough. The protagonist's personality is too erratic. Okay, the shortcomings of this book are all here. If you can continue reading, just read it. If you don't want to watch, get out! I'll get out first