Rekindling Lion City, 1994

Having read over a hundred chapters, here are my thoughts. The premise is quite novel, starting a business in Singapore. However, there are also many flaws. Updates are too infrequent, the plot feels forced, and the protagonist seems like an encyclopedia, knowing everything. The reincarnated character is incredibly powerful, and the trope of showing off and getting slapped down is everywhere.

The plot is drawn out, jumping from one thing to another without a clear main storyline. The only worthwhile aspect after all this time is the detailed depiction of life in Singapore. The author is indecisive; even when Mr. Ye from Meicheng offered himself to the author, the author remained unmoved and showed no reaction. Is this too aloof, a hypocrite?

If I were a tycoon… that dialogue and that part of the plot were really awful. Indecisive, as one reader said, self-indulgent. Why not pursue it aggressively? Childhood feelings are naturally sibling affection. Without the stimulation of hormones, who the hell knows what love is? She's talented in singing and dancing, why not show it off instead of being so hesitant? Even peacocks need to spread their tails to mate.

You've just been reborn, and the first woman you meet makes you all emotional, wanting to change her fate. Then, within a few chapters, a whole host of women appear—how desperate are you? Don't you think you should at least ask if they're willing to let you change them? Don't be a saint; that's a major taboo in online novels. Also, avoid writing haphazardly.

What I hate most about discarding books is using English names.

Why is it that the main character in every book is a neighborhood committee auntie? She has to meddle in other people's family disputes and relationship problems. Can't she just be a passerby? What is your relationship with her that you have to interfere in her love life? Is it just because she's pretty?

The writing is a bit messy. As a reborn individual with high education and experience, there should be a relatively complete development plan. Don't include the show-off and face-slapping stuff; everyone's tired of that kind of plot. Besides, he's so young; it should be the time for youthful exuberance. Occasionally having some passionate encounters with beautiful women is normal.

I feel the author didn't explain things clearly. It was confusing; all I saw was the protagonist indulging in self-pity. Who actually owns that company? Half and half? That's ridiculous! Get it straight. I don't really like childhood sweethearts. Even though that's how it is in reality. It's heartbreaking! We men all like to wallow in self-pity.

Is the pig's willpower a bit too strong? A beautiful woman confidently tempted him with her body, and he still managed to resist, acting like a saint. It's truly unbelievable.

Updates have become increasingly difficult, and the recent chapters have felt a bit padded. My writing style seems to have declined and gone astray.