Find the Road Map

Don't be afraid of being slow when it comes to good food. Consider your writing style. I haven't even finished one chapter.

Thank you for always voting for me and supporting me! Now let me support you! Although I don't often read this kind of novels, I feel good if I can understand it! I'll save it up first, and I'll come back and take a look when there are more words! I wish you success! ✊

Take your time, don't rush, keep accumulating and making progress. In the future, you can also open your own works as a memory record

A great start. But because of this realm. And buried. I hope you can read Immortal Space when the author publishes a new book. 😁😁

The author's writing is great, but the realm is really too confusing. What kind of Taoist priest is it? It's better to build the foundation, Zifu, Jindan, Yuanying, Yuanshen, and Tianxian. These are more straightforward.

There are too many people writing online articles now, and readers' requirements are also higher. I just read one chapter, and I hope the author can improve his language organization skills.

The early running accounts are obscure and difficult to read.

The books that become popular vary, but the books that hit the streets are basically the same. Not to mention other problems with this book, the biggest problem is the protagonist. The author always speaks from God's perspective, and the protagonist's character is like a pool of stagnant water. When being bullied, there is no reaction; when being with a beautiful woman, there is no reaction; when there is an unexpected encounter, there is no reaction... It looks irritating, and then calms down to disappointment.

After reading more than thirty chapters, there are only two chapters missing. The writing style needs to be improved. Come on, let's go.

Let's receive and visit each other, come on! The author is so pitiful that I can't stand it anymore. I've read a million words. Is there anything you would recommend?

I have a feeling this is a stallion story. You can meet girls wherever you go. You have a crush at the age of twelve. Pig's Foot is probably a big stud in the end.

Such a writing style and careful conception, more than just a great god, worship me 👍

In fact, you can consider starting a new book. I have almost perfected my writing skills and no one will read it if I continue writing. I might as well start a new book while writing the outline with Quanqin 🤓

Millions of great gods,,,, shivering