Daqin Longque

The writing is good, Doubi Liu is now very popular, but for the first time I found that Doubi Liu's history is so well written, and the sense of substitution is a bit lacking. In ancient times, it was like that, when a man is angry and blood splashes five steps, I feel that this book is not passionate enough. Maybe I am still young and like to watch Tang Xiao kill kill kill! The sense of history is not enough. The official language of the Qin Dynasty was Cantonese, and the coins were not copper coins. Imagine, there were so many copper coins at that time? ? ? ?

It is said that the competition at the starting point is very stressful, but in fact it is nothing more than that. There is no need to feel sad about the misfortune in front of you. Maybe the great masters will suddenly become eunuchs.

The Persians went to the imperial capital to find trouble and rob the prison... They are still an enemy country. Do you need evidence to kill them...

After five months of suspension, will work resume?

Passing by, by the way - Zulong is the best in the world!

In the midst of dying illness, I sat up in shock, another short and weak update

It's a bit unreasonable. Born in a military family, people are usually required to practice martial arts since childhood. However, seeing that the protagonist is still a weak chicken 22333, even the most dandy kid must be able to do it to some extent:

After reading the first few chapters of this book, the old bookworm said that there is nothing wrong with it, there are no common poisonous points, and the writing style is okay. But why do modern novels usually begin with no father or mother? Masters write like this, and new authors also write like this. To be honest, I like this setting...😅

It would be nice if there were more

Congratulations on signing the contract. You can finally reward me.

Be broad-minded, be broad-minded, keep writing, follow your own outline, and occasionally listen to the opinions of book friends. Take your time and don't write too hard.

It doesn't matter if it's a fiction or not, whether it's historical or not, it's a good book if I enjoyed reading it!

To be honest, this book is really good. The storyline suits my taste.

I'm not satisfied with writing it quickly.

Hey, I've wanted to read this kind of novel for a long time, and finally I have it, write it well, and don't want eunuchs!

Let's talk about it here. You said this is an imaginary world, but you still didn't show the map. Earlier you said that Persia and the Empire had already fought a war in Changsha County in the south. So is Persia to the south? Rome to the north? Which country is where? This needs to be made clear. If this is not clearly stated, writing about other countries will be relatively empty and completely unclear. The territorial situation of each country needs to be explained clearly, or it can be written out bit by bit, but you still haven't explained it at all. Another little suggestion, you haven't explained the map yet, you can make Persia a little more remote. Then join naval battles and landing battles. It depends on whether you want to write or can write well.

A very good book with fascinating content

Ice made from nitrate is poisonous and can only be used to cool down.

The author is great, can Wan Reward be a supporting role?

Re-open a supplementary building, the previous one will be invalid, just leave the name, age and occupation.