This Mage Is Not Too Cold

Any typos, logical inconsistencies, or areas worth complaining about in this book can be posted in this post. Thank you all for your support.

To be precise, it is a game name solicitation post. I've been overwhelmed by the naming. If the bosses have any names they can accept, they can post them. Thanks in advance.

Breaking the watch is a sign of tj...

Come on, it still looks good.

To be honest, the book is really good and the writing style is not awkward. Keep writing and you will always come out ahead. Let me tell you my opinion. I'm not sure about attributes, expertise and the like. Even on DND, skills and so on, it's a good Warcraft. I've used up all the Warcraft skills at the first level. I'm curious about what to do next. There are two poisonous points that I can't stand. One is that the protagonist's talent cannot be considered to be at the highest level. Otherwise, he will be in the spotlight early, but later he will have various first passes and be the best in the world. It is very uncomfortable. There must be a process of strengthening. Another one was my epiphany in the game, when I saw Chapter 50 appearing twice, which was so poisonous to me that I couldn't bear it. Although I know from reading the legendary NPC that this book is a realistic depiction of the game world, I can't accept it anymore. What does it mean to explode in the game?

The other places look pretty good, but some of the data is wrong!

Fan list... I just wrote it wrong

Shouldn't the damage of fire skills be reduced?

By the way, isn't the range skill too powerful?

It is said that if the review star of a new book is less than ten people, it will be given two stars by default, but one star is really kind of magical.

Make a bubble ( )

Three skills killed the assassin in three seconds. Three seconds was not enough time to cast the spell.

To be honest, professional gamers have no dignity in my opinion... 🙂 Fans want to express serious deformity in e-sports...

Take a look at the reward list for someone named Jin Song Drunkard...

I have always said that the protagonist has good skills, but as far as the performance in the article is concerned, he is just an ordinary player with relatively good skills. Those big studios are not even as good as the protagonist. Hope the author can make some improvements. Also, the spells here can be chanted directly, and the casting speed should be related to the chanting speed, not concentration. But as far as the article is concerned, there is no difference between the speed of singing by oneself and the speed of casting spells by oneself, but it is not easy to interrupt. I don't know if this is a foreshadowing.

In fact, I really hope that this game world can become real in the later stage.

😍😍😍

As for emotional scenes, don't make them cumbersome, abrupt, or mindless. Basically, there won't be much of a problem. After all, it's not the main part. If the characters are well drawn, it will be the highlight. Judging from what you just wrote, as a writer, you have planned everything well, and it doesn't seem to be a problem when you write it, but what? Readers who don't know anything seem to be confused. There is no focus, no background, and no foreshadowing. The appearance of this character is a bit awkward, as if he suddenly thought of pulling him out for a walk. The plot is a little weak. I think a recall may be more effective than this single chapter. But the writing is still good haha