Super God Kindergarten

The writing is really good, but the ending is too hasty. I feel like it's only a third of the way through. It's a pity.

Since ancient times, people have been talented in commenting, and they can express beautiful sentences with connotation. If they were not born in the new era, they would definitely be back in the Tang Dynasty to abuse Li Bai!

Reading the comments, I feel that the author is very low-key. Every time I see the prelude to a popular book, I immediately disgust the readers with the unnecessary plot, lest the book becomes popular and the author cannot keep a low profile. He is a good person and gives the opportunity to others.

The author should update a little faster, there are too few and it is not enough to read 😆😆😆

No one wants to go to kindergarten today! I have welded the car door shut, so no one can get out of the car!

I really feel that it would be nice to just write about daily life. Although I wrote so well at the beginning, why is there a great change in the world and a revival of spiritual energy later on? Why is there a big boss behind the scenes? I can't stand it anymore. It's a pity, it's really a pity.

I have gone through untold hardships, overcame many difficulties, and devoted myself to practicing Taoism for more than 30 years. Finally, I glimpsed the way of heaven and formed the golden elixir! Entering the coveted golden elixir avenue! Why do you want to destroy my dantian and shatter my golden elixir! "Pah! The little nurse next to me patted me and said, "Stop talking so much! Isn't it just a gallstone? As for that? In the obstetrics and gynecology department on the second floor, there is a girl with extraordinary beauty who became a Nascent Soul at the age of 16! Why don't you let us take it as usual? So there are several distraction periods in the mental hospital next door, there is an out-of-body state in the underground morgue, and there are two integration periods in the hotel opposite. No, there is a new Mahayana master on the second floor who has just survived the thunder tribulation. "

From Chapter 127 to Chapter 132, I have been in the starting point for several years, but I never expected to fall into such a disgusting poison.

It's a pity that it's a book that suits my taste. It has the potential to become a god. The ending is lazy and uncomfortable.

Personally, I don't like characters like Guogou Ritian. I wonder if the author thinks that writing such a character can make people feel interesting, but it doesn't feel like this to me. Instead, it feels a bit disgusting and low-grade. The first two monsters are well written, have characteristics, distinct personalities, interesting and cute, but this one is very strange. Characteristic style does not have to be based on disgusting, boring and low-level aspects.

36D? I'm afraid it's a deformity.

No, it feels like it was fine up front, but once the spiritual energy is revived, it is ruined. . . .

It's okay... I picked it up after watching half of it, but when I thought about it, I realized it was a mess (ಡωಡ)

It was kept in a bookshelf and prepared to be slaughtered, but unexpectedly it was poisoned. First, the protagonist participated in a cooking competition and encountered unfairness, but the author just let it go. The TV station has a background, so we can understand if it doesn't turn the world upside down, but the catering group, Coke platform and other organizers have not been punished at all, which makes people extremely angry! If you can't vent your anger for the protagonist, don't write such a depressing plot! Secondly, Section Chief Li from the Education Bureau came down to play the protagonist. He was so domineering and so infuriating that he wanted to slap him twice before venting his anger, but the author let him go easily... NMD is specifically against readers, right? Do you think the reader is in a good mood and must add some trouble to the reader? I can tell that the author deliberately made the protagonist a rotten good guy, and then made him disgusting! To be honest, the book is still good, but what is the reason for this continuous unhappiness? It can be seen from your writing skills that it's not that you can't write good books, but that you don't care about the readers' feelings at all! If you write a book just for fun, then write whatever you like. If you want to write a book to get results, or if you need to support your family, then if you are working against the readers, you have a flaw in your brain! Forget it, I'm too lazy to talk to you, it's finished anyway. It ended in less than 300 chapters. I don't want to talk about the bad ending or TJ or anything like that. I guess the results were too good and too many people subscribed, which scared the author.

I kept it free for a year, but ended up dying 😂 It's just chapter 32 and it's the finale

In the middle of Chapter 31, I wrote something about the star... This mistake is huge. Why was such a big thing not mentioned before? Then I went back to read it and found that the number of chapters did not match up. I thought it was harmonious, so I searched and found that it had been changed several times in the middle, and there was also a massage miracle doctor. The deletion was correct, but not completely. Chapter 31 is missing.

Why do everyone like 36d from Qidian... Isn't 34d better? Although the actual size of the breasts is the same, the 34d ones are obviously more prominent. Numbers and letters are like the contrast between height and height. Cups are letters. When it is fixed, you must find a smaller person to make yourself taller... For the same letter, the smaller the number, the bigger the breasts appear. Although they are actually the same size, they are visually different.

The author is awesome. Fell in Chapter 123. There is a bit of the Virgin in front. At this point, he was poisoned and died.

Let's look at your character design. The protagonist was a mature and steady warm-hearted man at the beginning. Now let's see what you have written. He is a mindless and funny person who jumps up and down. There are also several female characters who have become vases, such as Miss Su. She was so scared that she lost sleep when she saw a zombie at the beginning. Now that she has seen hundreds of living corpses, why should she continue to be exciting? Let's not talk about the plot. When we get to the superpower, we go all the way to nowhere.

All hell breaks loose. The writing style of the warm and everyday systematic urban novel changed into a fantasy novel about gods and demons. The kindergarten, which was finally full of talents, was shut down by the author without any explanation. Except for Su Yao, who was assigned to be beaten soy sauce, everyone else suddenly disappeared! That's too much nonsense…

Ask, is Jiang Xuan a descendant of Jiang Ziya? Otherwise, why is there a pointer that has a similar function to the God Beating Whip, and a Heavenly Book that has a similar function to the God List? The key is that they both have the same surname and similar jobs.

When will the new book be released

Long time no see. Was it blocked before or did you come from tj? Now I suddenly saw this book in a fan review and realized that it is already finished! Congratulations! !

I **you**, what the hell is written behind "Dragon Gate Swear", I'm stupid! How can this kind of plot be written later? ! When you see the explosion, just start spraying.

Stop doing this kind of slap in the face. Even if you want to praise the female anchor, you still have to have a certain level of strength. Just don't make an ordinary steak? ? ? ?

Speaking of which, this is a bit unreasonable. In general food competitions, shouldn't the same dish be cooked to determine the winner? The host should give the names of the dishes and then compare who cooked them better

It's another good book, quite interesting…to read.

(´д((☆ミPia!⊂▼(ｏ ‵－′ｏ)▼つPia! I'll beat you to death

I want to form a group and go kill the author JJ. Please form a group! Let him always break the story!

Why is the new book with this theme? Well, Building Dreams is still good-looking! Emmmmmmmmm