Da Luo Feixian

Very good article, very exciting

Recommendations for collection, please do your best, I like every character in your book, hehe~~

I've tricked everyone in the dormitory, haha, please give me a little red flower!

The simple words show the great principles of life, which is quite beautiful.

Support this masterpiece, two votes

The writing is quite good. I strongly recommend everyone to read it. Everyone should support good works 🌹

The depth of the author's writing skills can be seen everywhere.

I lost interest after halfway through the first chapter. The first impression I had was that it was a story about becoming an immortal through hard work. I kept reading and found that there were too many shadows of books, too much traces of imitation, and few of my own characteristics. Qidian has never lacked writers with good writing skills. Just good writing skills are not enough to attract readers, so I gave up.