Enter the Magical World of the Age of Firearms

After reading a few chapters, let me share my feelings: 1. The description of details is not enough. The visual impression of battlefields and cities is almost zero. 2. He is a talkative person. He is a talkative person on the battlefield, but he is still a talkative person in the city. What is even more fatal is that when everyone speaks, there is no description of who said which words, and what their expressions and movements were. The description of dialogue is like a running account, distinguished by paragraphs. 3. The battle is chaotic. The description of the battle gives me the feeling that when the enemy comes, they will be killed with guns or hacked to death with knives. I don't understand why the protagonist has become a badass, and he just hits a group of them one by one.

I started reading it from Chapter 5. I don't know how it started, but the middle is pretty good.

Come on, come on, author, come on, la la la la la, it's such a big lump.

Come on, author. To add to the book list.

Author, please hold on! I'm helping you find peace of mind.

I originally thought that the protagonist was building guns to conquer the world... But what turned out to be was the rise of a sheepherding boy...

It's rare to find works of the same type, collect them and read them for a long time

Uh-huh, this data is too miserable.