Bring the Internet to a Different World

There are a lot of copies. I hope to have my own original plot. Come on.

There is still a lot of room for improvement in the writing style. Smoothness between languages is very important Sometimes small details can affect the entire article The revolution has not yet succeeded, the author still needs to work hard😄

🙂The cover is nice

It's exactly the same routine. .

Although the first person is very immersive, it is often the most prone to collapse in the later stage. For me, I still prefer the third person, because at least it can let people know that I am not pretending to be a middle-aged person. However, modern Internet articles are often accustomed to using the third person, and readers are also accustomed to reading For some first-person articles, I feel a certain sense of discomfort, and even turn them off without hesitation. Therefore, most first-person articles are replaced by third-person articles during the development of online articles. Either he is a eunuch, or he is a loser. I hope the author can take first-person writing to a new level Let's me think. Oh, right Also, don't use first-person and third-person pronouns for a while. Readers with a bad temper may even say something to attack the author. Therefore, I hope the author can correct After all, first-person articles are in danger right now 🙏 ----by a certain Comrade Lei Feng who wishes to remain anonymous

I think you can't rely on the system for everything. Then you are not a user of the system but a slave of the system. It also seems that the protagonist has no independent opinion and only relies on the system. (Ps: The system is equivalent to what is called a universal network)

There is a paragraph about the first person It's best to write it in the introduction Otherwise, when the newbie suddenly sees it, he will click X without hesitation.

If the structure of the anime "Traveling Through a Different World with a Mobile Phone" is copied and modified, then even if you don't watch it, what's the point?

The protagonist comes to a different world, and everything is too logical. From meeting the two sisters to helping them kill the monsters to joining the Adventurer's Guild, and then going to the magical beast to sign a contract with the protagonist... Everything is too natural, and the naturalness is a bit too fake. Even the Invincible novel seems to lack a routine. I've only read a dozen chapters, but I haven't read the rest yet. I feel that the author is following the routine of Long Aotian, a Japanese alien world. The protagonist has cheats at the beginning, but in the end, 99% of them will be linked to the gods. Most of them are written in this way. Personally, I think the plot written by the author is always lacking something, the foreshadowing seems a bit tight, and the character of the protagonist is a bit too majestic and upright, almost catching up with the hero who says "with great power comes great responsibility". I suggest the author take some time to read "Jobless Reincarnation" by Nissei. It is also a different world. There are two plots in the early and middle stages that are relatively boring, but overall it is a very good different world light novel.

Traveling into another world with your smartphone? I really wanted to at the beginning! 🪖