Guard No. 1

This book is considered excellent among NBA novels. The characters created have souls. They are not just for scoring, not just for playing, but also have lives and feelings. The protagonist does not have a golden finger or the ability to predict the future, but hard work and learning ability allow the protagonist to improve in every game in every season. At the same time, there is also the head coach's tactics to fight against. The head coach is not just a mascot like other novels, or even the sadist in other novels. Looking at the group of people following the protagonist, they either won the championship and glory, or improved themselves. The protagonist can also activate his teammates, instead of simply scoring dozens of points to get two-doubles and three-doubles. Especially in the small ball era, the Mavericks still dared to fight and never give up. This is basketball. What I hate most is a center or power forward who floats outside and shoots three-pointers and then defends with his eyes. It is called the small ball era, but in fact it is useless and can only be a role player.

The driver announced today that he is retiring after this season. This book is one of the few that I have read about the Mavericks. It reminds me of the midsummer when the veteran burned his heart and belonged to the Mavericks.

Grove Street Brothers, emmm, the author, spoiled in the comment area that Yiyang is going to a three-word team The three-character teams in the league include the Pacers, Timberwolves, Trail Blazers, Knicks, and Mavericks Let's talk about the Lone Ranger first. If that's true, then there's really nothing to say about it, but there's nothing wrong with it. Then among the remaining four teams, exclude the Trail Blazers first Lillard, the core of the Trail Blazers, is a point guard, which overlaps with the protagonist's position, which is obviously impossible. For the Timberwolves, the time of this book is now 13-14 The Timberwolves have almost assembled a lineup with unlimited potential, but it is still a bit useless at the moment and may not be able to carry it. But we don't rule out the possibility of leading the team with a pass that turns everything into something magical. However, the Warriors have risen since 14-15, and the author's writing style is not purely brave. If he wants to compete with the Warriors in the finals, it is unlikely to stay in the West. So the Timberwolves are not very likely. Just the Pacers and Knicks If the Pacers were in Oladipo's era, it would be impossible. Oladipo needs the ball more. If it were during the Paul George era, the fit would be quite high, top off-ball player + passing master But I think the most likely option is the Knicks. Let's talk about the basketball atmosphere first. New York, the team with the largest market value, is the Mecca of basketball. New York is about to welcome Porzingis Isn't Yiyang + Porzingis equal to Yiyang + Nowitzki? The New York boss is willing to spend money, and the lineup is more maneuverable So to sum up, I think Yiyang's biggest possibility is to go to the New York Knicks But if he really transfers to the Dallas Mavericks, there's nothing to say The eternal city is still a good choice

The protagonist's biggest golden fingers are his explosive power and court vision, top physical fitness and super high golf IQ. In wet terms, this is a talent that is visible to the naked eye. The reason why I read competitive novels is because I love competitive sports. What attracts me most about competitive sports is that through sweat and hard work, hard training and tenacious struggle, I can become higher, faster and stronger, and win again and again on the way to surpass my own limits. This is the eternal charm of competitive sports. Nowadays, competitive novels seem to have fallen into a strange circle. System literature is very popular, and the system is the real protagonist. It seems that many protagonists may not be as good as a water dispenser player after losing the golden finger of the system and various plug-ins such as physical recovery potions. They may not even meet the requirements of the college league... With the help of the system, he gained powerful abilities smoothly (at least there is no comparison between what he paid and what he got), but he is just a weakling with no strength but no strong mentality. Spending too much ink on the system makes the protagonist look more like a puppet of the system. His strength improves too fast and often the ability value is 99 in two or three seasons. The author can even arrange plots such as the protagonist being accidentally injured to control the rhythm, and then it often collapses into a mess if there is nothing to write about... The most important thing is that what I read is not fantasy or urban, but sports novels. I would rather see the protagonist slowly improve himself through unremitting training and persistence. That is his true own ability, instead of relying on the system to easily become stronger and then push and show off all the way. Novels come from life and are higher than life. One of the reasons why people read competitive novels is not because they want to see things that are difficult to happen in reality. Indeed, there does seem to be a certain gap between the physical talents of yellow people and white people and black people. But in novels, among so many hundreds of millions of yellow people, a genius suddenly appears with physical talents that are not inferior to them. This is at least more reasonable than the system. I always believe that a novel about sports must at least have the basic core of competitive sports, which can be fun, exciting, and show off, but the sports spirit of tenaciously fighting higher, faster, and stronger is the soul of the novel. Instead of showing off through playing basketball, picking up girls, and making movies in the entertainment industry, it is better to write urban novels. I like this book very much, good luck to the author! In addition, the above is just my personal humble opinion. Everyone is welcome to comment. Finally, author, the Mavericks are quite strong. There is no need to suppress the team and the protagonist too much. The 11-year-old Mavericks are equipped with a mini version of the protagonist's enhanced offensive version and are not able to attack. How can they still take off? ! ! ~

I really hate this kind of protagonist who grew up in the United States and then took on Chinese citizenship. Judging from the setting, the protagonist's family is not rich. Are you sure you can study in elementary school in the United States without American citizenship? Even if you can study, how will you pay for the tuition and stay in the United States for more than ten years?

No matter how well written it is, the protagonist is a robber, and he has high talent. Why does he need money? The protagonist is a robber. No matter how you say it, he is a robber, whether he is good or evil or a robber. So how do people who are reading this book accept such a protagonist?

Extremely poisonous. The protagonist is described as being tough in the beginning but very poisonous in the end. The key point is that the author is very happy to write that he has been insulted so many times by criminals and cannot retaliate. Is this a child who grew up in a slum? ? I always thought that the robbers in the slums earlier were a foreshadowing to prevent us from seeing the protagonist beating people up, but this is it? ? You must know that the NBA is very cruel. Fouls step on elbows and fights almost everywhere. Every time the protagonist wants to fight, he is pulled. The NBA is very cruel. There are no fools in it. If you don't retaliate after a flagrant foul, you can give a reason at least because every flagrant foul is equivalent to killing the player who was fouled. The protagonist is flagrantly fouled again and again. The referee gives lenient sentences every time. His teammates stop the protagonist again and again. Do you think the Dallas Mavericks are the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles? He is from Texas, which is the most violent state in the United States.

Dirk's sense of presence has been infinitely lowered. Is Dirk the boss of this team or Yiyang is the boss. The top five forwards in history and the proper Hall of Fame players have been weakened to this point. The old Dirk in the 18th season has a greater sense of presence than this... I understand that the author wants to highlight the protagonist's abilities and pave the way for the explosive plot later, but this also... Dirk's finger was indeed injured during the finals, but the coolest thing about that series was that almost everyone on the Mavericks stood up and shot whatever they wanted. The author must have watched the game. I hope the author can write about Dirk's unsolvable style in the 11th season, instead of infinitely weakening the presence of the team boss in order to highlight the protagonist's ability. After all, the protagonist is just a rookie, but Dirk's performance in the 2011 series is historic. It's just like playing 2k. You force a superstar with an ability value of more than 90 to be in his early 80s. Since you want to highlight the protagonist's ability, and the protagonist is a point guard, then It must be even more powerful for the team. How can 1 plus 1 be greater than 2? The way you write it is completely close to 0 or even negative. It is not in line with the positioning of the protagonist and makes Dirk look like an enhanced version of the CIC that can help his teammates with support... This kind of writing makes the protagonist very tired, as if Kemba Walker, who is both a father and a mother and leads the team, not only failed to let the Mavericks take off, but also had a hard landing, the plane crashed and everyone died...

I started reading this book yesterday, and I feel more and more embarrassed as I read it today. It's not that the author's writing is too lazy, but the plot, characters, and rhythm. The first one is the plot. After reading more than 80 chapters, I feel that there is no sense of immersion. The environment and identity cannot resonate with people. Although the author has been emphasizing these, he can only It can be regarded as an explanation of the protagonist's personality, which can be ignored. The growth process of the protagonist and the process of constantly becoming stronger are not written, which greatly lacks the sense of substitution. The second is the characters. The protagonist's personality created by itself is a bit unlikable. It may be that I want to write a protagonist who has a slow personality and is ruthless and doesn't talk much. But he doesn't talk much and doesn't feel ruthless. It's too prominent, and the character is indeed calm, but this makes the protagonist feel dull overall. I understand that the author wants to write about the protagonist's defense against the outside world after coming out of the environment in the Wood District, going through ups and downs to make the protagonist calm, and then through the changes in basketball and the outside world, the protagonist's heart will be opened again, but the author did not control it well, making the overall It makes people feel dull; the third is the rhythm. From the beginning of the NCAA game to the NBA game, the rhythm of the game and the plot described by the author has not fluctuated. The role of the protagonist is described, but it does not make people feel the excitement of the game. The passion of sports competition makes people feel that it is not boring, but very boring! I don't know what the follow-up will be like, but there is no change and it is easy to forget. I hope there will be changes in the subsequent plot. If not, I hope the author can improve it!

The setting of the robber is really a failure. Can he make it to the national team? If the country knew that pig's feet were a robber, even if you were the God of Basketball and a public figure, they would probably ban you. Then the Chinese market, the largest in the world, would be gone. Without the support of the country, the discrimination in the United States would probably not be as good as Yi Jianlian's.

The author's writing style is quite good, and he has created a protagonist with a distinct image. We see not only the growth of his football skills, but also his mental journey. It is a relatively rare passionate sports novel this year, but sometimes the author's thinking loopholes are still obvious, and we still hope to continue to improve. (Don't comment if you don't like my personal opinion) Finally, cheers, author↖(^ω^)↗

I have passed by it many times, clicked in and was persuaded to leave. First, the setting of a robber, and then how to explain the physical fitness of the protagonist? It's not that I praise Americans, but Asians' physical fitness is really worse than that of black people. You said that it is acceptable to control the ball and shoot based on the overall situation, but I really can't pass the test if you don't have external physical fitness!

Can't you just write a more normal background character? The background of the protagonist has to be written blindly. Can't CBA's father go abroad after being beaten? Still living in a fucking slum! Domestic security in foreign ghettos? When you go abroad regardless of the safety of your family and loved ones, have you ever thought about how your loved ones feel? Such a father deserves to be shot! Why don't you return home quickly if your husband dies? You still take your son to live in a slum, knowing that the slums are dangerous and not conducive to your child's growth? Are foreign countries so good? These are not parents in their right mind! What kind of brain circuit is needed to write such a character background? The author was either underage or had low education and social experience when he wrote this book.

Poisonous point 1: The protagonist started robbery in the slums Poisonous point 2: The protagonist has a cold personality and refuses to say anything to anyone he meets, but others are very enthusiastic about the protagonist Poisonous point 3: The protagonist's parents are Chinese and he was born in China. As a result, he does not want to join the national team. The reason given is: there is no benefit in joining the national team to play. I think if you don't want to join, you can start as an American.

Stevens, who appeared at the beginning, will never be finished like this. He is looking forward to the protagonist joining Kai Kai and taking over Uncle Drew's position.

Second grade, pretentious, as if watching anime, to be honest, I really can't stand it. Also, the author really doesn't know enough about the NBA. When he applauded Stern in the draft, he knew how nonsense his writing was. And about the agent, if you can't afford an agent, brother, someone from the lottery area will naturally come to your door. There are too many flaws in the writing

Yiyang's season this season is comparable to Olajuwon's in 1994. He didn't win the MVP in the regular season or the finals. As well as the expressions of defensive intensity in the chapters posted today, there must be a lot of best defensive players. Why do I always feel that this book is almost finished, the end of the dynasty. It's pretty good, even though Yiyang is 26 years old, which makes the author write that he is the number one point guard in history.

At the beginning, I persuaded a group of people to retreat. The robber at the beginning was really a failure.

Let's put it this way, if you jump to about 100 chapters in this book and read it again, you will find that it does not affect the reading experience at all.

After reading the beginning, I was persuaded to quit. I felt that the character of the protagonist did not match the rest of the story. If it was true as what was said later, the protagonist would not have robbed at the beginning, and would have threatened others after being approached. Personality doesn't change in a day or two. Do you think a person who grew up in a slum and has gone to college, at least 18 years old, still commits robbery at such an old age? As a Chinese, you don't think he can change.

Just write it down without any ideas. An expression that is too bad to use

Don't you look at the data? The author himself doesn't even know how many points the protagonist scored in a game. There are various scores during the process, and the total score is written casually at the end, which is completely inconsistent! ! ! Speechless Death 16 points and 9 assists in the first three quarters. In the last quarter, he played 9 minutes with 2 points and 1 assist. Speechless

This book is the author's pinnacle work, and subsequent books become more and more sophisticated as he writes.

U1s1, in order to protect himself, the protagonist becomes a gangster and has a cruel personality. If others provoke him, he will start a fight or even use a knife to scare people and injure others. After all, it is not easy to survive in the slums due to foreign racial discrimination. But at the beginning, the protagonist takes a knife and actively robs a stranger. It is really unacceptable. The robber does not deserve to be pitied. Don't call me a holy mother or anything. It is really difficult for people to accept the protagonist who actually takes the initiative to rob others.

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When I saw the Clippers playing away games, that girl suddenly came out. It was so disgusting. I kept pretending to be her name... And the character of the protagonist was also really disgusting... I wanted to write it like Kawhi and Dumb... But people also laughed off the court... The robber was a huge poison at the beginning. He grew up in the United States since he was a child and he was not an American. It was also a huge poison... It was very poisonous to write the setting for the sake of political correctness.

Finally, I saw a sports article that is not a plug-in for the rebirth system. The writing is relatively reasonable and exciting!

When it comes to basketball articles, they have to be ones that I really just want to write and write with my heart. There will be no more basketball articles after blacksmithing!

I feel that the competitive writing in Qidian seems to have gone astray, as well as the historical writing... I really don't understand why those authors who write competitive novels forcefully write about the entertainment industry... It is undeniable that basketball and football are more or less irrelevant to the entertainment industry, but there is no need to use a lot of pen and ink to write about it. This book is simply clear, without system or mess~

I don't know what the protagonist will be shaped into in the future, but without super scoring ability, there is no way to compete with these point guards. Although I don't like Harden, I think Harden is really good, and his scoring and assists are not bad.