The Ancient God Awakens

It's rare to see a novel that doesn't start with a routine + time travel + system. . It should be interesting to read the introduction, except that there are a lot of characters at the beginning, which makes it a little difficult to remember, but the plot becomes more and more exciting later on. . The architecture is very grand, I hope it doesn't collapse later.

It can be said that it is a very Japanese light novel. This style of slowly unfolding the story seriously instead of showing off and upgrading to slap in the face may not be liked by newcomers, but those who have read for a long time will prefer this style. The whole text is actually a little confusing at the beginning, but as you read along, you can feel the author's continuous progress, which is obvious. The protagonist is not Long Aotian, but he is not a simple good-for-nothing either. Instead, he has shown his qualities as a top student from the very beginning, which was fully demonstrated when he fought against the vampires. Until later chapters such as the return of the top student, it fully reflects the characteristics of the protagonist using his own brain power and knowledge to plan the battle. However, such a protagonist is undoubtedly a great test and difficulty for the author himself, because if the author himself lacks brain power and writing power, the characters in the novel will naturally not be able to show wonderful and thrilling battles of wits. This is also a problem faced by many authors now. There are too many good fight pretense, but too few good strategies and tactics. Most of them are simple and childish. If we sort them out from the overall perspective, we will find that many of the so-called resourcefulness are unreasonable. Therefore, although the author does not show a tendency of the protagonist's intelligence to collapse, it is still worth looking forward to whether he can continue to write well. After all, the protagonist has to grow along the way, and his academic power should also grow along the way. I look forward to the author's subsequent writing and hope that the author can bring us higher quality plots and wits.

I am an office worker, and I started reading novels when I was in high school and college. My first novel, Sou Shen Ji, contains a lot of descriptions of environmental scenes, which can easily trigger readers' associations. Although this novel has just begun, there are quite a lot of mistakes in the description of the scenes. The description of magic and the author's control of the surrounding environment of the characters are very good. Sometimes the readers may not notice the details that are mentioned in one stroke, but they are mentioned in later chapters. Then I will read the previous articles again, and suddenly realize that the author's ability to fill in the gaps is still good. The description of the scene is as important as the description of the characters. Sometimes a few simple sentences can create more than one meaning, "The swamp under the moonlight, the fear in the tranquility, the rippling wails, the unrested creatures, but a weak human being shuttles here." It makes me feel that the environment here is cold and dim, quiet but slightly mysterious. The panicked human beings appear extremely weak under this huge swamp. Overall, this book is interesting. The background story draws on a variety of popular games today to create the author's own Western fantasy novel. Vote for recommendation and encourage the author to continue coding.

Are you borrowing the worldview of Magic: The Gathering?

I just watched the previous part. How can I put it? The protagonist might be a child. Because the protagonist is a child, so based on intuition and love, the protagonist spends a lot of time studying electromagnetic experiments without knowing what the future will be. After all, is the protagonist a monster who built a system based on only some incomplete knowledge? Because the protagonist is a child, he falls in love with a dragon girl whom he has not known for a long time. He treats her like a dragon without investigating her origins and actions, and without thinking about whether she will harm his friends and family. Because the protagonist is a child, he easily agreed to help them enter the fourth floor of the Astrology Tower, but did not investigate the purpose of those people, and did not consider whether he could bear the consequences of his actions, and did not consider whether his actions would cause harm to his family and friends. He just relied on his own feelings? The protagonist feels very raped Hey, the protagonist may be a child. Although the protagonist's actions did not have a bad impact, if the other party is really a bad person, the protagonist's relatives and friends will die countless times. This is really disgusting!

Why did you write about the Great Wall of China?

I am an office worker, and I am slow at typing, so the updates will not be very fast. If readers mind that my updates are too slow, you can save them first and then read them. Although the updates are slow, they are not eunuchs. After all, they are the hard work of a long time. Finally, the reader exchange group presents: Five Baba, Two Sis, Zero and Lu Qibaba

This book has many references, most of which are based on Warcraft, Final Fantasy XIV, Magic: The Gathering, and Fantasy Base. Add some scientific references, physics, chemistry, biology, geography, etc. If you have any interesting literature, please recommend it to me here.

1. Logical BUG 2. BUG in front-to-back connection (for example, he was wearing a cloak when he first appeared, and then changed to other clothes when writing the character.) 3. Other BUGs

I just saw the chapter released. The first chapter is very confusing, but the setting is interesting. I don't know what happens next. I can't read anymore. . .