The Pay-to-Win Alliance

After reading Chapter 8, I gave up decisively, it was rubbish.

Before I knew it, another monthly ticket came 😌

It poisoned people to death in the first few chapters, even the fucking level 30 strength has to be taken back, and the rubbish system gives out krypton gold for some junk, and gives an SSR rubbish (which is useless). The protagonist is still very happy, but the protagonist is a ****.

I couldn't stand it after reading the first few chapters. Although the author said that he would keep reading and it would be better in the second chapter, but a novel can't attract attention at the beginning. How do you expect people to continue reading? I'm not saying that the author's writing is bad. I still know the reason why everyone can't stand it. I just think that the author's tone is too much. The attitude of "it's not my fault that you can't stand it, but your fault" makes me uncomfortable.

Actually, I just want to say one thing. Your subsequent writing is wonderful. What's the point of forcing people away at the beginning? The first few chapters are the most important. Your level is cleared and the card drawn is the lowest level. What can you do to retain readers? No one wants to read the main story of abuse. I came here from the Sharingan book. I can still tolerate it. I believe that your subsequent writing will be better. But you should write less at the beginning.

This is a book that even an otaku like me can't stand reading. It's like a book written by a delusional ****.

Extremely slow to heat up. Let's first talk about the "gold-finger" pit at the beginning that many people think. After actually reading it, you will find that this is a pit dug, and it is very reasonable to fill it later. After getting past the beginning, the early stages seemed like an ordinary adventure in another world, and I always felt awkward because of the "Golden Finger". In the middle of the game, there was a little hidden thread, that is, after knowing Chess, the overall feeling was very depressing. The characters around me were talking about their fate and being the Riddler all day long, which was very irritating. As chess unfolded, very unpleasant characters appeared, so I just kept telling myself that this guy would be dealt with and kept watching. In the later period, as the information about the past life was slowly revealed, although the whole thing was still depressed, the focus became what was going on in the past life? What is the protagonist's plan? As the protagonist finally unlocks the memory of his past life, many pitfalls have been filled in at once, but there are still some pitfalls that have not yet been filled. After that, with the end of chess, the protagonist group got rid of control, and began one wave of climaxes and pit fillings, and the final ending ended with the last pit filling, a perfect ending. From a reader's perspective (myself), the author's strengths are his superb skills in digging and filling pits, and his logical and logical plot. His shortcomings are his control of the entire atmosphere. It feels frustrating when it's frustrating, but it's not satisfying when it should be exciting. As a result, I'm not very happy after reading it, but because all the pits have been filled in, I feel a sense of satisfaction. Overall, it's okay. If you like suspense and solving puzzles, I highly recommend it. If you like refreshing things, I don't recommend it.

I came here from Sharingan, but I'm so disappointed. The level is too different.

I am an African chieftain who was deeply tortured by the lottery of the game "The Day After Tomorrow". When I read this novel, I only had one thought - smash the protagonist's damn cheating mobile phone into pieces. 5555 Is too bullying to the African chieftain.

The author seems to be too average, and his writing style is not good. It seems really boring. As mentioned earlier, if you keep reading, you have to give a reason. If the writing is so bad, don't blame the readers for complaining. Okay, average author, come on, give up.