Rinzai Monk of the Oda Family

Whether it is the title, introduction, or content, this book is completely written for people who know a lot about Japan's Warring States history. People who don't know it will not be able to read it, which makes it difficult to promote the book. Although it is well written, not many people will read it. As far as the content is concerned, although the story is exciting, the narrative is too bland and it is difficult to mobilize readers' emotions. This writing style is too niche and difficult to become popular in the current Internet writing atmosphere. Even if you just write for fun, if there are very few readers, it will be difficult to keep writing.

His background was not good, he abused his master, and he rose to power. Don't do this again. I'll give you a piece of advice. Don't follow history just to save trouble. If you write like this, you won't be far away. We just want to see something different [unofficial history], thank you!

Don't let the reader's thoughts dictate your own pace. There are 10,000 different ideas out of 10,000. Everyone has different opinions on an issue, so don't be too pushy. Just write according to your own logic and thinking. Of course, if readers raise some bugs or errors, you should accept them with an open mind. Come on, welcome to the Japanese war literature family 🪖

Author bacteria, this is my suggestion. This book is a plot in which the main character goes to Japan as a monk from the Celestial Dynasty. I think that when writing about a monk, and it is from the Celestial Dynasty, you should give full play to the characteristics of the Celestial Dynasty people, either as a character like Nobunaga's counselor, such as Yixin Chongden, or as a leader in internal affairs, or as an Anguo A diplomatic monk like Temple Huiqiong, the protagonist's current living style has given him a Chinese status in vain. At that time, Chinese people were very valuable in Asian countries, especially in Japan where Buddhism was very popular. The author should seriously consider the development of the civil servant style.

The characters' personalities and abilities are basically the same as those in other novels and games, which is quite disappointing.

I was really looking forward to this book. The more I read, the more disappointed I became. Is the protagonist a brave general or a wise general? Messy content is not a capital crime. One update every three days is a big problem. Every time there is a reason to stop, it is better to be an eunuch as early as possible.