Dharma Elephant Immortal Path

The writing angle is good, but overall it's a B-level book. The fault lies in the fact that the author is in a state of puberty and started to fall in love after just a few chapters. Are you having sex while writing this?

It was really hard to watch at first, there were too many poisonous points, the character descriptions were too rigid, and the writing was poor. I was really short on books, so I bit the bullet and read it. Unexpectedly, the author's writing will become smoother and the quality of the work will get better and better. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot! I hope the author will write better and better, don't end it badly, have a good ending, and accumulate experience. I believe that the next book will definitely achieve better results than this one! Come on! Come on! ! Come on! ! !

I seem to have read a book called The Immortal Path of Dharma a few years ago.

This has become so popular that I don't even know how to read it. Come on, author! The author is the best. 😭😭😭😭😭😭

After seeing Runaways evacuate, I feel that it would be better to add the heroine after arriving at Qingsongmen.

You don't understand what science is

1*1=1 Is different in cultivating immortality. When the essence of life changes or sublimates, 1 may become 10 or 100. It is really a matter of looking at the sky from a well to speculate on people's infinite numbers based on 1.

It's best to make a major change to the front, there are too many poisonous points.

The cover is so gay😌

Why are there always duplicate contents, and I have to pay again to book the next chapter, but most of the contents are duplicates. Is this to make money?

The story is not good. . .

Destiny, another main character is Destiny. Farewell

Before telling another story. First of all, let's talk about the time traveler Zhang Zhiping. I think of this person and sing about him in a story. Death is painful and sad. These things are difficult to resist, but they are inevitable in life. All we have to do is accept it and face it. ———————— "Qianqian said that you are a person who will never be sad." Zhang Xusheng, who had recovered, looked at Zhang Zhiping and said. "No, I will be sad." Zhang Zhiping touched his heart. Both of them were his friends. After hearing the extremely miserable experiences of the two of them, sadness, sympathy and hatred were constantly surging in his heart. The heartache felt like he wished Zhou An could come to life, crush him to ashes, and burn his soul in the flames for hundreds of millions of years to avenge his friends. ————————— When I saw this paragraph, the first thing that came to my mind was the man whose wife was dead, but he was singing loudly. The bystanders were puzzled and asked him, "Your wife is dead, why are you not only not sad but also singing?" This is too much. He said: I am sad, but how can people not die? My wife's death is like the change of the four seasons of spring, summer, autumn and winter. Life is not gain, and death is not loss. I sang to bless her. In my opinion, this state of mind of the protagonist is the true heart of heaven. It is not the kind of ruthlessness of heaven mentioned in other novels, which forcibly replaces the ruthlessness of human beings in the sky. ————If good and evil are rewarded, there must be selfishness in the universe He accepts and enjoys the cycle of life and death, pain and joy, he suffers and he is sad, but he is not controlled by these emotions. He is not like an ordinary ordinary time traveler, or like those saints whose works have been handed down for generations. This kind of people will basically shine wherever they are. There is no such option as being mediocre in the previous life. Of course, it may be because of the darkness during the time of time traveling that brought about changes. The more novels I read, the more I feel that the protagonists in those novels are afraid, afraid, painful and sad, especially those who are reborn and risk their lives to escape. [This person wants to harm me in the future, so I have to deal with him now. Basically the entire article is filled with such thoughts, and the resulting variables, sorry, the author does not have the ability to re-evolve a time and space, so it basically feels like a second-week walkthrough of a pure RPG game.

I would like to give some advice to the author. Can the protagonist not always say "Damn" in his spoken language? It turns out that when something goes wrong, he just says: "Damn, you are careless!" Now it's better to shrink it to "damn", but in this chapter you have "damn" at the beginning of every other paragraph. It's really awkward when I read it. The Chinese language is profound and profound, and there are so many words that can replace it, such as: No! Ouch! Hey! I'm going! Hateful! What the hell! Yo ho! Etc. As for the curse words, there are even more words. There are so many words that can be used in rotation. Why do you have to stick to one and use it until death 😅

This book is a rare piece of good food! It's hard to believe that this is the author's first book. Apart from some minor flaws at the beginning, the subsequent plot arrangement, fighting scenes and layout have the potential to become a god.

I have been subscribing to your book from the beginning to now, and I hope you can continue to maintain such abundant intellectual vitality. In addition, I think that in the golden elixir stage, the protagonist should take the path of immortality, that is, the golden elixir is condensed with an ancestral energy as the core, and then the golden elixir is used as the cell, and the ancestral energy is used as the embryo to form a baby. Transform into the body of an innate god bred by the innate ancestral energy, follow the most superior method of the innate god, and then turn around, whether it is an immortal, in charge of the derivation of the innate ancestral energy, immortality, or an earthly immortal, create a blessed land, ascend to the cave heaven, self-create the world, or achieve self-perfection, it is the same.

From Chapter 22 to Chapter 23, I couldn't stand it at all. The beginning was okay, but the writing about that woman and Zheng Changfa was really disgusting. The writing is much worse than the "mortal cultivating immortals" written 10 years ago. The plot and personality of your characters are like urban or fantasy pretentious novels. I don't know how many people started abandoning books from this point on.

I gave up when I saw those women. The previous article was very good. I read a few pictures and saw that I had to bear the burden of that woman's illness. I really couldn't bear it. Do you have any colleagues?

The only difference between this book and fate is that it's fate! What era is it, and the protagonist and the villain are still written about fateful encounters and fateful enemies? So everything is doomed. Does anyone still like to read this kind of ancient story writing? ?

To commemorate the first anniversary of Faxiang Eunuch After being criticized countless times for its outrageous anti-theft system, Faxiang is finally a eunuch. I don't know what the author's mentality was when writing the book, but this book has always been one of my favorites. It doesn't have so much romance. Love doesn't have so much grudges, it's just a story about a small person who uses any means to practice and make progress. The story does fall apart in the middle and late stages, but I still hope that the author will feel better one day and can arrange an ending for this book, even if he publishes the remaining outline.

See Chapter 34 It's so poisonous, it doesn't matter if a lot of people say that the writing behind it is good. I have resisted one poisonous point after another, and then you directly kissed her and couldn't walk when you saw a girl (knowing that she will definitely be cured later is a big benefit, don't think about it) and you are only in the middle stage of Qi refining, so just bring a drag bottle, you Repair the wool, and no one else has checked it. It's your turn to be in the middle of Qi refining, and you haven't reported it yet. If you say it's Tianling and the big guys, they won't pay attention to it. Fuck, no matter how good it is in the future, there are a few who can persist to the end after resisting one poisonous point, and then they won't modify the previous ones after so many.

I'm really convinced that I don't want my parents to cultivate immortality. But a woman I've known for only a few months can make you realize the beauty of life? Can't walk when you see a woman? Farewell~

Originally you could read the third to last chapter, but now you can't read the fifth to last chapter. If you have achieved this level of anti-theft, you are invincible. You are the starting point anti-theft king. No one in the world can compare with you.

It's a pity that Golden Start. When I saw the woman kissing that sick woman, I really couldn't resist it. A woman without emotions, you are still a time traveler, using kisses, I can't understand it. Did you buy this book at the beginning? It doesn't look like it was written by a person.

I was only in the middle of Qi training when I saw a pig's trotters. I gave him pills not long after I met him. I should be responsible for the future and decisively discarded them.

Chapter 30 or 40 is a bit unbearable. It's a hot relationship drama. It's forced to have a heroine who is also a cultivator. It's clear that she has never interacted with someone very often. Then she writes someone who feels very familiar and takes care of everything. And the heroine is Tian Linggen. Haha, I don't think she cares about her parents. It's better to write a family drama than this emotional drama like yours.

After reading Chapter 34, I felt uncomfortable. Not to mention how good it was later. No matter how good I was, I was not in the mood to read on. The effect of persuading people to quit increased sharply by 70%.

It writes about scientific thinking but talks about luck and fate. Later, it doesn't look good when it comes to luck.

Another kneeling before a guy, this is all a pure loser can do

The protagonist is always a weakling. On the top of the golden elixir boss is Nascent Soul's Qingsongmen. The protagonist breaks through the foundation building and changes the map. Then he gets to the new map of the Nascent Soul Transformation boss, the golden elixir that breaks through, and then changes the map again. The protagonist is always a little brother