Magic Pen Evil Monk

There is a "Gluttony Gate" sect, and there is the "Chef" faction. I thought about this upgrade for a while, and then set the sour, sweet, bitter, spicy, salty and smelly flavors mentioned later. I used a magic pen to carve the textures. The six flavors can only become powerful when they reach the "special level" such as "extra spicy, extra sweet". I thought about how to upgrade the "pot" department of Gluttony Gate. Small pot, medium pot, large pot, extra large pot? A little embarrassed

An interesting thing is that there is a scene in a dark hole later. I wrote that it was so dark that I couldn't see any fingers, and then I wrote about the protagonist. Suddenly I thought, no, I can't see anything, how can I write this... I can only write sounds like "bang bang", "swish" and "ahhh". After thinking about it later, I might as well write a person who comes in with a light bulb. At least it can be described. Otherwise, what should I do if I just write the sound... The second thing is that I just saved the manuscript and reached Chapter 22... I feel the best since I wrote something. I have pictures in my mind, and I feel that that chapter is very touching. Unfortunately, my writing skills are not strong enough, and the picture is still not strong when I read it, but I really trembled after writing it... It feels so good...

I have been learning to read other works recently, and when I look back at my own, I instantly feel that my writing is very poor. First of all, the writing is not good. As I read it, I found it unattractive. The writing was very dry and not satisfying. When I realized this, I had already saved the manuscript and wrote more than thirty chapters. I had revised the first few chapters four or five times and deleted nearly 2,000 words, but I still felt it was very poor. Maybe I will try different expression techniques in the future. I hope this book can reflect my gradual progress. Oh, come on...😭

The turning point is a bit abrupt, but the book is good and I support it↖(^ω^)↗

I can only give it a collection and recommend it to a few~

I haven't been online for the past two days and I just cast 9 votes. Long Kong

In this world, strength is based on height. Eight feet and five feet tall is the mortal level. However, it never describes what a woman is like. Does it mean that a woman must be full of muscles and eight feet tall to be considered strong?

All things have a certain destiny, I have great ambitions, and this place cannot bind me. This is what the protagonist says when he is in danger. What can you tell from this sentence? ?