Scepter of Heaven

First of all, it was too short, which gave me a bad first impression. The ease with which Vito bought the stock is a big poisonous point in my opinion. This kind of thing is bound to be watched by many people, and it is basically pre-ordered. At the very least, it must go through a round of identity verification before successfully buying it. How can it be possible for the protagonist to buy it? After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that a lot of the protagonist's success depends on the setting. I can do it just by myself, but I can't "learn" anything. There is also the feeling that the author's narrative style, or writing style, is not very smooth, which makes me very uncomfortable. emmm, the author is destined to meet you in the next book.

Let me tell you my opinion. The plot borrowed from "The Godfather" at the beginning attracted me very much. The deep beginning made me very interested in reading and I was looking forward to it. However, the further development is a little disappointing. The protagonist is overly controlled and there are too many acting parts, which makes this kind of pretentiousness seem a bit naive. Acting is okay, but if the readers know that he is acting and know his true thoughts and purposes, there will be no sense of mystery. Without the sense of mystery and admiration for the protagonist gained after the truth is revealed, they will only find such manipulations a bit ridiculous and funny. In addition, I feel that the author's performance of the protagonist is a little underwhelming. He only learned the form but not the meaning of the imitation of "The Godfather". Some bloody scenes actually reduced the atmosphere created by the beginning of the book. Some of the protagonist's expressions and language revealed that the character is a bit young. Although it is an acting, these performances are revealed. Compared with "The Godfather", it really does not reflect the level of the character. Finally, this book mixes too many elements, including nuclear war, wasteland, Cthulhu, and political intrigue. It is not impossible to combine these things, but with so many things mixed together, it is difficult to highlight the focus. It has a somewhat nondescript feeling. It starts like a medieval fantasy, then seems like steampunk and 20th century gangsters, and then jumps to the post-nuclear war. Such chaos, at least for me, is not a good experience. This is also a problem with current Internet literature. Throwing in various elements results in a novel that looks different, especially some very white novels, which creates a very bad trend. I hope the author can make some choices and clarify what he wants to write, instead of blindly filling the book with things that may be attractive.

This name. . . I thought it was the rod of God

The only thing you deserve praise for is your writing style, so let me complain about it. What I hate the most is your name, it's really confusing. Although the dialogue is humorous, it is very cliched. You borrowed a lot of dialogue from movies, which is actually a bit watery. Why not deliberately describe the plot and express it to the point. The last point, and the most important point, is also the reason why this book is not selling well: your choice of subject matter is really wrong. It has strong characteristics of foreign novels and is not to the readers' appetite. Maybe what you write is more like a movie or TV series than a novel.

I can't complain about the chapter titles in recent chapters. Is it okay to reveal Murphy's last name so early?

Today I finally finished reading the 200,000-word chapter. I felt like I still had something to say, so I couldn't help but write a review. Although the author is a newbie, he is very knowledgeable, and it can be seen that he has made careful preparations. Although this is a Cthulhu-themed fantasy, I must praise the business wars and tactics in it. It is no worse than some urban and historical writings I have read. . . I also like the character of the protagonist very much. I feel like I felt when I watched The Count of Monte Cristo. He looks very calm but has everything under control. Especially in the later part of overthrowing the principal of the military academy, the foreshadowing is so deep. . Then why do I have the illusion that the godfather is Naia? (I don't know if I guessed it correctly) Come on, author, don't be a eunuch, I will keep chasing you. .

There is no reason why this book is not popular...

The protagonist and his brother... I think this can be written as a beautiful novel~

The book is actually finished... I was still in the process of getting fat from Juezan... Okay, why don't you go read the new book? Eat it sometime! (///▽///)

When you come back, just do your own thing in peace.

Why, with this name, I feel like I read a book 7-8 years ago where the author broke off the text halfway through. It seemed to be called a scepter...

Sure enough, raising books is the right thing to do, and this is the end of it

Even though I've only read a few chapters, I feel like I've already decided to book the first book.

Love this style! I hope the author can work hard and don't be fooled! I will sell Amway's ˋωˊ

I wonder if the author will set up a book club or something?

This foreshadowing is buried so deep! However, I did have a hearty feeling after reading it. It seems that the author will lay out a huge plot in each volume, which is very interesting! The end of the second volume also gave me a surprise. Come on, let's fatten up for a few days and look forward to the third volume.

Are we really going to finish the book? . .

Just finished reading the first volume. I feel like I've found a treasure.

Come on, poor man, subscription support only.