The Ming Dynasty's Nail House

The premise is good, but the character development feels soulless. Logically, it's unbelievable; after reading a few chapters, they casually hand out guns to refugees. Just because you're the protagonist, does that mean everyone will risk their lives for you and never shoot you?

Write well; it's not bad so far. Create an outline, clarify the main plot, and it will be fine.

This is some serious bootlicking! One minute they're talking about taking down corrupt officials and nobles, the next they're fawning over them. Zhang Ziyun's family owns over 500,000 acres of land; you can't even tell their background is corrupt. The protagonist's relationship with the government is incredibly awkward. Is it really meaningful for him to be so subservient to them after all this?

A modern division has 9,000 troops, more than 30 aircraft, complete tanks and armored vehicles, and an unlimited supply of ammunition. How can five thousand people die in a cold war? I am really convinced. This setting is awesome

If I were to write a time-travel novel, something like this, and if I had such a powerful cheat code, I would choose to ruthlessly eliminate all those who stood in my way of achieving my ideals within two years. The victors would write the history of right and wrong, regardless of race or individual, not because of the emperor's wisdom, the emperor's blessing, or the "master's" favor.

Brother, if we're not up to the task, we should train diligently for a year or two before fighting. It's a bit illogical that you can fire artillery, drive tanks, and fly planes after only a little over a month, especially considering that most people in ancient times were illiterate—would they even understand that? Sigh, you really can't read with your brain. 📖

The author is deeply poisoned by Confucianism, trying to reason with a group of vested interests—naive and endearing, not much different from those corrupt Confucian scholars of the Ming Dynasty. Frankly, these corrupt Confucian scholars are quite pitiful!

If a city wall is built on the outskirts of the capital, the Ming Dynasty will likely mobilize the entire nation to attack it.

It's such a pity that the best Ming Dynasty novel in my mind ended too hastily. I feel very regretful. I will continue to support the author when they release a new book. There are too few good Ming Dynasty novels nowadays.

Chapters 710 and 711 were disgusting. How could the author be so indifferent to human life to write such a story? Over 5,000 casualties, and the commanding officer was merely demoted and then reinstated after a while? This is absolutely impossible in a modern army. It would be a court-martial every time. I don't know who your slap on the wrist can intimidate.