Quick Wear Is Not a Cannon Fodder

The villain is very stereotyped. As long as it was in ancient times, boys would have been favored over girls, but now they will be greedy for money. I write about these two points over and over again. It makes me tired.

The plot is too weak and the psychological description is too wordy.

I found a lot of complaints about it, but I actually think it looks good, very good-looking. I don't think it's verbose at all. Maybe you haven't seen it being more verbose. I don't like most of the stories in this book, but I don't like the reality very much. All in all, it is a super good book, coexisting with the best guides I love to read 😁

I don't understand very well. Didn't you obviously say that you want to cause trouble for your scumbag father? Why did you end up helping people who wanted to get involved in stocks? After that, he made various concessions and didn't see the abuse at all!

This is a long paragraph and it takes a lot of time to type, but I really can't help it! I think the author is great. Not only is he excellent in terms of imagination, but the writing also pays attention to details and logic, is clear and organized, and rarely contains typos. The more you read, the more you can't help but want to read on. It's rare to see such a good piece of writing. Many of the current fast-travel articles become more and more boring the more you read them, but this book is "different", which shows that the author really writes with care and is constantly working hard to improve. Although the world where the previous protagonists have not grown up is a bit boring to write and a bit frustrating to watch (the first world), it is completely logical and common sense. Many people are criticizing the first world, saying that the three views are incorrect, and that the protagonist is violating himself by forcing himself to accept such terrible things for his grandfather. First of all, when the protagonist has not grown up, the weak do not have many choices. At that time, she has no means of cultivating immortality and no dream props; secondly, for the protagonist, her grandfather is the only relative in the world who is truly good to her. The protagonist in the book is a child who lacks love. When she is not strong, she will try her best to keep this only warmth. Things in the world are often not as ideal as you think. The imperfections in the first few worlds in this book just make people feel more immersed. Finally, I really have to praise the author for his tolerance. In order to make their book review section look good, many authors directly delete comments that have posted complaints, or even ban these readers' comments; regardless of whether what they say is factual or not, they should be paid attention to in the first place. In the review area of ​​this book, all these complaints are well received, which is indeed rare. Therefore, I hope you will be more tolerant, or read more, and then evaluate it later; you will find that you almost missed a very good work 😊.

Very nice, although a bit verbose. But I still followed it until the latest chapter.

Every story is very creative and the writing could be modified. Now I read this novel like a running account.

The heroine is really annoying, too extreme and irrational.

🤭 San Guanzheng's novel type, only after reading it can I feel that there is light in life, and the light in life must be lit by oneself. Only then can you see the brilliance you want

If you are too hungry to sleep on Happy Children's Day. I

Isn't there going to be a male protagonist? No, it's great to have only the female lead. Why do you have to have all the male protagonists come out?

Let's be honest, I can't stand the first story. She seemed so tough in the beginning, but in the end she got married, became a concubine, and then slept with her in various ways. She slept with her until she got tired of it and didn't want to sleep with her anymore. Then she lived in silence for the rest of her life. It's disgusting and aggrieved.

If the heroine doesn't like it, then she doesn't like it. It's fine without cp. The heroine says she doesn't like it but also says she can't refuse, and then she gets together with someone again. Is this? The author really likes to write plots where the heroine says she doesn't like it or not, but people chase after her. If you like it, you like it, and if you don't like it, you don't like it. If you don't like it, you don't reject it, so people chase it. The excuse is that you are too embarrassed to refuse, but in the end they are still together. And later on, there is a heroine who falls asleep with Cheng Wei's tongue kiss in the middle of the night...? I'm not very familiar with it either. It's the first time I've seen you. I haven't felt the temptation yet, so I feel a little nauseous.

Why does it have to have a male protagonist? If you don't like it, don't engage in so much ambiguity. You have so many abilities, just refuse. Who can force you? Thinking about what you don't like while also taking care of this and that, it's a bit poisonous

I think it's stupid to use a golden finger to help others live their lives. I think it's stupid for them to let others live their own lives at the expense of themselves. What kind of brain is this?

After reading the first two chapters, I started talking about the second chapter. I felt all twisted and embarrassed. I felt that the original owner's death had become a ticket, allowing An Ran to live his own life, prostitute the man he liked before, and live to be a hundred years old comfortably. The original owner still had to give his life days to the tasker. I felt that the original owner was so mean...

After reading the first two stories, I don't expect the heroine to keep her virginity, but having casual relationships with men is really a bit uncomfortable.

It's also possible to quickly travel through NPCs! You can find a life that suits your needs in every world! Don't make do with a man you don't even like! . This will give readers a very frustrated feeling! Refreshingly open up the highlights! When doing quests in each world, if you meet the type you like, just tie them to the bed! Those who don't like it will be beaten to death! If you're in a good mood, here's a guide! . Or it's okay to meet someone you like and develop a relationship if you're not doing anything at the same time! Don't make any drama about not wanting to be together in the end! Every reader doesn't like this feeling! ! If you can't write an emotional scene, then write a forced scene! ! If the forced man makes the heroine unhappy, just click away! How nice to let yourself go! I still prefer the main heroine! I've seen a lot of heroines in the world of heroines! That's called domineering!

I have read more than 2,700 chapters. This book can be called a model of nonsense literature. Che Zulu talks back and forth, clearly explaining things in a few sentences.

There's so much nonsense, there's no need to break it all down in such detail. There is a lot of nonsense and truth, and there is no firm and clear idea at all.

It is recommended not to read it. It didn't feel good at all, but made me feel depressed. The heroine has a low IQ

When I read the article now, there are all kinds of top-notch articles that make me want to vomit. How come there are all kinds of articles on all subjects, and they are especially those with no IQ, no logic, and no brains. It's so embarrassing to watch... When I read the article now, if there are top-notch articles with no brains, I will leave them. I would rather watch Silly Baitian!

It's too long-winded, nearly half of it is psychological narration, and it contains too much water. Moreover, the heroine is not decisive enough. She has so many cheats but her IQ cannot keep up. She is not happy at all and her writing is not very good.

This is the second or third time I read this book. After a while, I couldn't remember why I abandoned the article before, so I continued reading it again, and then I remembered that the author is really verbose and verbose, and he has to explain a simple truth in large sections. . . I was listening to the book while doing other things, so it was particularly obvious. . . . Is this the legendary way of making money by scraping up the number of words?

Author, can you write more about reality?

It is not good to be too sloppy or procrastinate in fast travel. It feels like there is too much ink in some deleted parts that have little impact on the development of the plot. A small question was tossed over and over again and explained over and over again. Something that can be summarized in one sentence can be repeated in four or five different ways. An example of imitation is... The protagonist ate a certain dish, so she explained in 100 words: why she wanted to eat this dish, and what her intention was. In fact, she didn't have to eat it, but she ate it anyway because it was better to eat it. ... Just this feeling, my head hurts.

The first story was so toxic that I couldn't stand it. . . It is normal for a family with a background in ancient times to train you and want you to marry a powerful man to support your mother's family. Moreover, women in ancient times were taught to have three wives and four concubines. The love interest is not important. You don't have to agree with it, and others don't know that you will suffer from the disease. You don't have to say that you are selling your daughter for glory as soon as you are asked to marry. You are too self-centered and live completely in your own world. The heroine's behavior in which everyone is drunk and I am alone, and I am noble and you are all ignorant is completely like the cannon fodder character in other books.

If you don't want a male protagonist, don't write it. Is the female protagonist a **? , Traveling through so many lives, does the man like the heroine? The heroine has no feelings. She is like a holy mother who cares about the men she doesn't like. Green Tea is a bitch 😥😥😥😥

Dear author, I kneel down for you. Please can you please simplify it? It's too wordy and uncomfortable! ! ! ! ! !

There is no career line at all. It is just a simple two-stroke summary. It is all written about the pull with the male protagonist, which is also toxic. Then Zhang Zhang gives birth to a child, which makes people sick when watching it. It is completely a problem with the author's setting