Erqing

The writing was good in the early stages, but it started to fall apart after meeting my senior sister. It's not an exaggeration to say that the protagonist can become a temptress. The author also quibbles that the protagonist kills people and continues to inherit and support because he doesn't want to be involved in the cause and effect. Listen to what others say? Everyone has been killed and enemies have been made. Are you just waiting to grow up and take revenge? And every time you meet a big boss, you ask him about his Taoist heart? This is the halo of the protagonist, otherwise he would be slapped to death

The first part was pretty good, but the second part became more and more incomprehensible, and the plot was so grinding that the main character was talking nonsense and the whole chapter went by. Can you please stop reciting poems and composing poems when encountering the sunset in the deserts and rivers? The main character is a snake. Why don't you cultivate yourself hard? My head hurts every time I see those poems copied from here and there. Since turning on the home system, there have been several chapters of mindless daily life. I originally thought it was a harem of various monsters, but who knew that it turned into a Pokemon... The protagonist has to tease various ghost characters that are related or not; the protagonist has to forcefully intervene in various story scenes that may or may not exist. The result is that the entire novel so far is fragmented, and most of the characters appear with schizophrenia and multiple personalities. Alas... I have been persuaded to leave

After reading dozens of chapters, I can briefly describe my feelings. I thought it would be an interesting story at the beginning, but it became more and more boring after meeting Bai Suzhen... In addition, the spoiler in the book review is that it is a harem stallion story... The second poisonous point is the awkward poems in the article... The self-made (petal) poems that were forcibly inserted made the writing very awkward and basically lost the fairy tale. I would say it imitated the storybook form of Journey to the West, and it was completely like a tiger instead of a dog... How can I put it, I want to read the follow-up story of the protagonist, but there are too many poisonous points that stopped me. Personal opinion, no comments.

Nothing. It is recommended to move the car. It is recommended that the author understand each mythological work before writing a book and make up random things.

Can there be a serious start? What kind of world is it? Sun Wukong and Bai Suzhen are like a hodgepodge. When I started writing, I was worried that I would not have the confidence to write about a world theme type. Even for the sake of length, it is considered inferior, so abandon it!

You have actually chosen to cultivate immortality, so why bother opening a harem? Aren't you afraid that the inner demons will take advantage of the harem and make your life worse than death alone? This kind of spiritual training is not suitable for the harem

Indeed, I felt talented at first, but as time went on, it became a bit embarrassing.

The protagonist only thinks about life when he is so idle that he can't even get enough to eat. The protagonist is an idiot, a born weakling, and he doesn't dare to practice even though he knows there are things and monsters in Journey to the West. It's really ridiculous.

Seven Calabash Babies, do you have seven recommended votes?

A little ambiguity is normal

Everyone has very different opinions about this book.

Why are there sometimes seven recommendation votes and sometimes eight?

There are so few book reviews, just leave a mark.

Do you have any of the seven small tickets? . . .

Do you have the seven small tickets every day?

It's hard to say, a little conflict is normal, right?

Only when there is a difference between a human and a demon in the heart can there be a debate between human and demon. Without distinction, there is no distinction at all. Regardless of whether you are a human or a monster, the killer will be killed, the good will get a good ending, and the evil will get bad consequences. There is nothing wrong with that. The key is that you don't always use long psychological narrations, narrations, and discussion-style texts to illustrate your points. It's enough to express them with the words and deeds of the protagonist. Otherwise, there will always be too much private stuff and a preaching feeling. Today's young people hate preaching. For novels, just tell a good story. As for what the story tells? Let them go where they want to.

Sometimes I wonder why there are such settings in novels. Demons are a collection of desires. As long as people have desires, they will be immortal. Since human desires can become demons, why can't good thoughts become Taoism? Given a setting, as long as people's good intentions continue, they will also be immortal. This is a sufficient balance.

It's a very good book. There were so many good reviews at the beginning, but now they are all bad reviews. The author must have offended people, and he has been hacked like this Many comments are just nitpicking. The setting of being reincarnated as a snake is very eye-catching in a cookie-cutter time-travel novel. There is nothing wrong with it. The protagonist is indeed a demon clan and is quite friendly with humans. If this can be said to be unfirm, then is it good to lead the demon clan to fight against humanity? A thousand people have a thousand Hamlets, seeking common ground while reserving differences. This book was indeed well received at first

Why I hate this book is because at the beginning of the book, I had a lot of love for Baymax, but in the later stage, Baymax became a "sensible woman" and started to accept the other female characters in the book. If this book started with a harem like the son-in-law, I guarantee that I would be happy reading it. But in the early stage, I only like you, but after I catch you in the later stage, I can't let down the others. Isn't it disgusting?

In the early stage of this book, Erqing taught the mountain spirits and sought enlightenment everywhere. It was really exciting. If it had been maintained at this level, it would have been a masterpiece. Unfortunately, it fell apart after meeting Dabai. It started high and then went low. It's a pity, it's a pity.

It was still bearable to watch at the beginning, but towards the end it became a bit confusing. And it's not a single female protagonist. I couldn't bear to see the back. Yang Chan was put to sleep again. I also liked the plot. The protagonist is becoming more and more arrogant and brainless. I don't want to see it anymore, come on!

I think the first and middle stages of the book are well written. The setting of the book is originally a classical fairy tale, plus some semi-classical Chinese and a lot of Dao concepts. I think it suits my taste. Coupled with Er Qing's dedication to his senior sister, it can be said that Dabai is everything to Er Qing. Erqing has chased Dabai for hundreds of years. He was able to practice the Nine Transformations Mysterious Skill for Dabai and finally persisted. He was able to refuse the opportunity to become an immortal for the sake of his senior sister, which shows his focus; but from the plot of Erqing and Dabai's marriage, Xiaoqing and Little Fox began to force the palace, and Dabai finally gave in. I think this part is a poisonous point. If this plot was caused by them taking advantage of Dabai's kindness, then I can understand it, but the male protagonist's attitude of not being perfunctory and unclear is completely contrary to the settings in the early and middle stages. Tell me, the male protagonist's dedicated character that has been laid out for so long is ruined here, so all the early preparations are in vain? ? . The good single heroine turned into a multiple heroine, shit. . . But the plot behind it is still good, despite the many female protagonists 😅. . . .

The protagonist kills demons when he sees them killing people. He kills demons when he sees people. Whether they are evil or good, why don't the protagonist kill that person? When he sees beasts eating people, he saves the people. Why not save the people when he sees people eating beasts? He also snatches the herbs from the two monsters. When they meet again, the protagonist says, "It's true that we are enemies on a narrow road, but they are still murderous. Did they provoke you?" It was you who robbed their herbs, not them who robbed the protagonist. Please, the protagonist is a demon, not a human. In the eyes of the protagonist, which side should the demon or the human fall to? Don't you have any psychological clues? There would be nothing wrong if the protagonist was written as a temptress.

After practicing again and again, I finally cultivated multiple clones with split personalities, each with their own independent character. When the clones meet, they joke and talk to each other. Such a photo is really mindless.

After briefly flipping through it, I felt that I did not agree with the three views of this book, so I took my leave. If you want to write about people, write about people. If you want to write about a demon, you must write about a demon, but you have to deal with the entanglements and contradictions caused by the uncertainty of identity. It is like the war between Germany and France. You can either write about Germans or French people, but you want to write about a French-German or a German-French. Just write. Your personal position in the war is nothing more than winning, legal, or neutral. But you don't insist on doing what Our Lady does. You think both sides are right and wrong. This is of course not impossible. If you were the president of the United States, you could also decide the rules, but it's a pity that you are not.

Eat grass snakes, shit, vegetarians, write about snakes well, it's nondescript, I haven't read the first 10 chapters, I hate this kind of people who can't recognize themselves the most. Carnivores are vegetarians, zombies don't suck blood, monsters are not like monsters. I feel that snakes should eat meat, zombies should suck blood, and monsters should be the opposite of humans. After all, people will kill monsters when they see them. If they are not my species, their hearts will be different. It is not a joke. Such a way of writing a good gay friend of a shemale and the protagonist's immortality is unacceptable.

Well, to be honest, I felt really good when I read it before I officially started cultivating immortals. But when I was with Bai Suzhen, my feeling gradually changed. It was all about picking up girls, and it became like a romance novel. I didn't want to read it anymore.

Attached is a picture, it's pretty impressive, Dabai dressed in white.

The Jiange chapter is really thunderous. People who like American neoliberal values ​​will like the author's logic - I am subverting you for your own good, and I also want to support talents who agree with my American values ​​to come to power. In the end, Jiange will definitely learn from the pain and reflect on himself for supporting the interests of American imperialism. Adding the vulgar emotional drama of Qiong Yao's drama into such a strong plot is simply a professional fan-washing operation for a popular star.