Immortal Prison Asked

Apart from anything else, writing so many chapters with this achievement is enough perseverance.

Persistence is a virtue. If you don't work hard and keep updating every day, there will never be much. I believe you will hold on! 🌹😁

There are too many flaws, not enough coherence, the protagonist is mentally retarded, and his skills are unknown. He wrote about different seas of consciousness. After being struck by lightning, he wrote about the endurance of the protagonist, but he almost turned into an idiot after being imprisoned. Knowing that the higher-ups want to arrest him, he still wants to contribute to the Dao Palace. Can the author make reasonable arrangements? Do you know why the writing master's book is so beautiful? Logic and reasonableness are the most important

It's such a magical world. You can kill wolves in a pack at the age of 5. This wolf should be about ten times smaller than Teddy😄

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The protagonist is too young, so there is always a strong sense of childishness between the lines.

Happy New Year, come on, I'm thinking about how to finish, I'm so tired from writing

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The protagonist has nothing but good luck. He behaves randomly when encountering problems. It feels like he has no brains at all.

Sorry, your book is not suitable for me. My life is relatively dull and there are not many people to criticize me. I also don't have the spirit of a bastard who responds to everything at once. Next time I will attend the meeting.

Okay, brother, almost two million, 83 fans, looking at you I seem to see my future

It deserves praise. I still persist on a single machine.

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There are too many realms, and I started writing more than thirty chapters in a hurry.

Trash, a fighter among the trash. What the hell. Can you understand it yourself?

Is this book for 15-year-olds? The logic is extremely childish.

Come on! Let's work together!

The front is okay, but the back is completely nondescript! It's obviously an Eastern fantasy, but if you insist on forcing a Western fantasy behind it, it's awkward no matter how you look at it! Isn't it against the law that all the elves have come out? ?

Those of you who are book-hungry can come and take a look.

Regarding this book, Qiu Feng has been coding according to the design of the original outline and continuing some of the original ideas. To be precise, the male protagonist should finally have a final showdown with the ultimate BOSS, the Demon Lord. Now it has more than 3 million words, which is basically close to the setting of the final plot. The words are coded at this time, and they must echo the main plot laid out earlier. The speed of coding will not be very fast. I will try my best to keep it updated so as not to disappoint everyone😀

There are about 1500 chapters, involving the elves and the beasts. The description of the demons will be gradually expanded, and finally the character of Demon Ancestor Gusa will be introduced. I have not yet decided how to describe the final chapter. Welcome to give your valuable opinions.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are disturbing, please mute me.

Are you a newbie? Your writing is a bit poor, at most it can be regarded as solid food.

I can't even get the punctuation right and it's very uncomfortable to read. It's like this in the first few chapters and the rest. . . .