Walking in the World of Mythology

The author has a habit of giving an introduction to the situation after the protagonist says a sentence, but the introduction is also sandwiched with the protagonist's inner monologue. This makes it particularly awkward to read. Let me imitate a paragraph. "I have been promoted to the ninth level dark mage." During this period, Dylan made rapid progress with the help of blood energy. Now my strength has made a qualitative leap, and I finally have the capital to protect myself. I suggest that the author either puts this inner monologue in what the protagonist says or changes me to Dis, otherwise it will be too awkward to read.

First of all, I would like to thank the author for paying attention to "Xeno Knights". I have collected this book. Regarding the Three Golden Chapters, I will make a simple comment. There may be any inaccuracies. Please forgive me. Advantages: 1. The writing is smooth. In terms of language processing, it is relatively close to the Western context, which is commendable. 2. The main points of the story are clear. The basic points about time travel, character characteristics and golden fingers are very good. 3. The hot topic in novels is the recently popular system plus mythology, which is good for accumulating popularity. Disadvantages: Proofreading is important! Proofreading is important! Proofreading is important! I say important things three times. Leaving aside other matters for the time being, the errors in sentences in the three golden chapters have reached the point where it affects reading. ① "15-16 Years" should be "15-16 centuries" ②The following line, "The Earth in the previous life", does this refer to the previous life or this life? If it is said to be the previous life, it means that the protagonist has traveled from an imaginary world to an imaginary world. ③ There is no transition between the names of Li Quan and Dylan, which seems a bit abrupt. ④ "But this race" is missing the word "right" ⑤Is "6 o'clock in the evening" the same as "6 o'clock in the evening"? ⑥ Does "all arrived and came out" mean "all poured out"? ⑦The master of this world, 'Dylan', should not be single quotes here, but double quotes. ⑧There was a knock on the door outside. The first word was door, right? ………… The three golden chapters may be the most important part of a novel. It directly determines whether the reader will follow the book, so you must be cautious and cautious. Finally, I hope that your works will become better and better as you write them, and they will be more popular~

I have only read part of the book, and I have a question. Since the protagonist is a mage, why does he always use a sword for melee combat? 😰

I'll make the soy sauce, and I'll stop by to see if I can add some essence.

Don't take it too seriously and support the author.

Yes, I have been looking for fans like The Vampire Diaries or The Original Vampires for the past two days, and I accidentally found this book by the author.

Can't you write about a normal vampire? ? Super self-healing ability, blood-sucking, superhuman speed and agility, huge strength, some ancient species can grow wings and so on, or some novels can transform into bats and black smoke, etc. It is really disgusting to do some blood energy and game-like spells. Even if there are supernatural power spell settings, it can attract dark clouds to cover the sun or fog, and it doesn't need to be so game-like.

The author works during the day and writes books at night, and often has confused thinking. I would like to collect your opinions on the plot. The content in the book includes the settings of elves, magic, and hell. Most of them come from some famous Western books and legends, and they are all based on texts. Although you may find it awkward, this is the real Western setting. In real Western novels, there is no magic system of wind, thunder, water, and fire, and there is no clear division of good and evil. If you feel that my plot setting is toxic, you can clearly state it, and I will try my best to correct it without changing the outline. Thank you all again.

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