Dao Tongyao

The front is fine, the back is a mess, but there's nothing wrong with it.

Is the protagonist a virgin bitch? Does she eat people? Is the heroine a vase?

Are you finally giving up your identity as a "person"? Very good!

I can't read it at all, I will read it every time it is updated.

Author, if you change your writing style, use some techniques, and do some foreshadowing, and let the book talk eloquently, it will definitely have a different effect, and the results will be much higher. I wonder if you have such an idea of ​​rewriting this book, using the original plot, but changing the writing method. I read this book three times, and each time I couldn't stand it after more than a dozen chapters. It felt elusive, the portrayal of people was not skilled enough, and the development of the plot was a mess. It is not an exaggeration to say that it was a bit confusing. I am also a famous author, and I used to be like this. I can't bear to see you writing tirelessly. After all, no one will read a book with poor results. It is a waste of time and energy, putting the cart before the horse.