Across the Heavens

There are more than 2 million words in Mao's new book selection. Do I have any misunderstandings about the new book?

The treasure gourd can be used for unlimited flow in the ancient times. Nothing else will work! Why did you go to the world of low martial arts in the prehistoric times? A rigid form in the prehistoric times is many times more powerful than that. Does it make sense to write that?

Shang Xiuxun, did you go to the wilderness with Wanwan?

The biggest flaw of this book is that the book is written as a fantasy cultivator of immortality, which makes the book look neither like Mugenliu nor a fantasy cultivator. Instead of writing about the infinite flow of the ancient world, it would be better to write it directly as a fantasy practice article, which would still be interesting. Since the background is ancient times, don't write randomly. At that time, there was a holy land for cultivation, and the level of the sect was the same as in fantasy novels?

The protagonist is not a native of the prehistoric world. He has no mark of heaven, has not been included in the long river of destiny, and has not been accepted and recognized by the origin of the prehistoric world. He is always an outsider, so what a fool the protagonist is! I don't know what the author wants to express, and the author's main world is obviously the prehistoric world, so you can't be included in the prehistoric world. What's the point? I'm too lazy to say that the protagonist travels through a world of low martial arts. He can become an innate in one breath. Any ordinary person or patient can become a grand master. Otherwise, the natives of the prehistoric world are nothing.

From the prehistoric times to the two dragons of the Tang Dynasty, I roll first as a sign of respect.

Is this book lowering the standard of Honghuang? Give me a thumbs up for this point of view.

Now that we have traveled to prehistoric times, why do we still need to go to the martial arts world? ? ? What's the difference between this and leaving the richest man's son alone and choosing a beggar as his father? ? Taking a breath, eating a piece of grass, or nibbling a piece of fruit in the ancient world is better than practicing in the world of martial arts for hundreds of years, right? What are you planning?

After reading the prologue, I don't want to read any more! Ask yourself, every time you go to the hospital, will the doctor look down on you because you are poor? Would you not save a critically ill life because you have no money? Please find out about the green channel! Does it make sense to force black doctors? What kind of opening doesn't work? Do you have to be a black doctor? When social conflicts intensify, irresponsible writers like this are adding fuel to the flames!

It's rare to see a setting like the author's, and the few I've seen have generally had miserable results. In the books I've read, The Prehistoric World should be considered a medium world. A book like Coiling Dragon with several universes is considered better than The Prehistoric World. But I don't understand why the author traveled from the ancient world to the world of martial arts. I remember that the starting point of the human race in the ancient world was innate. If you go to the low-level martial world and you are so miserable, a mosquito will kill you in the ancient world... Brother author, if you want to learn from others to write novels about time travel, it is best to read more fairy novels to accumulate experience.

There is a limit to exemption in the first shot of soul-drawing. No matter how you read the reviews, you think this book is not good? What should I do? I am also desperate!

There are more than 2 million words, and there is a selection of new books, What's wrong with the starting point? It's poisonous!

Even if the protagonist cultivates to the Shattered Void in the Tang Dynasty, he will feel that he cannot even defeat the human soldiers at the city gate when he returns to the prehistoric era! ! !

Let me complain a little, you are a prehistoric person, let alone awesome, at last you are more awesome than those who started practicing martial arts, why did you travel to the martial arts world, to show off your presence? The first time I saw the Double Dragon of the Tang Dynasty, I gave up. Since you want to travel to the world of martial arts, don't write that you were born in the prehistoric times. I don't know how many people have been dissuaded by your setting.

The main world is prehistoric, it's too low to go to Wuxia to play dungeons

Even in the prehistoric times, even if I had to travel through time, I could get through it just by enduring it.

I shook my phone so hard that it almost flew away, but I shook it like this! ! !

Damn it, I saw this book in the new book recommendation. It has 2.5 Million words. You told me it was called a new book 👍👍👍

Sigh... From high to low, what does the author think? The world of martial arts is like a college student going to preschool. What can he learn? Want to learn how to cry?

Inhaling a few more breaths of spiritual energy in the ancient world is better than spending decades in the low-level world.

Pangu created the world and defeated three thousand demons like he was chopping up melons and vegetables. Out of boredom, he found a book titled "Across the Heavens". He turned over and read page by page. In the first chapter, Mu Ran changed color, in the second chapter, his face turned livid, and in the third chapter, his whole body was numb and he couldn't help himself. Chapter 4 is almost half disabled, Chapter 5 spits out twelve mouthfuls of blood like a fountain, Chapter 6 the eyes turn cold and hot and blinds as he watches with spiritual consciousness, Chapter 7 the physical body collapses, Chapter 8 spiritual consciousness collapses by three points, Pangu has been poisoned to death before Chapter 9, so nine is the ultimate number.