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Fortunately I didn't delete it, I knew I would write it down.
I read it in one day and felt it was well written. As a small character, the sense of immersion is quite high. There are some bad points, but they don't affect the overall reading. It is recommended to be more realistic and add a little more to make it cool. If you just write it for yourself, then it doesn't matter.
It's much more comfortable to work with Mr. Yuan. Working with the eldest lady is really exciting.
The plot of the game is really well written, but the emotional scenes are a bit lacking.
Rarely speaks. Originally there was a problem with segmentation, but the emotional line turned out to be quite toxic.
The protagonist has been reborn, right? Did you live your previous life in vain? It's unreasonable. I don't know what the purpose of this setting is? To make the protagonist grow? Couldn't it have been experienced in previous lives? I only know that after this plot happened, I was so disgusted that I basically stopped watching it so carefully. If I encounter some bad points later, I might give up. The design of the eldest lady in the end is quite impressive.
After hundreds of thousands of updates, there are only a few fans. The author is very powerful 🙂
I've reached chapter 134. The author could definitely use less descriptions of female characters, as well as emotional aspects. It would completely hinder this book.