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I really can't stand it anymore and gave up. I have read more than 90 chapters so far. It can be seen that the author is not good at describing the growth of the protagonist's abilities, and there is no description of fighting. The protagonist basically relies on eating to become stronger. The description of the supporting characters is difficult to describe. I haven't seen the female protagonist yet. The author is basically a straight man. This I haven't seen any outstanding female characters in this book so far. The only female character that impressed me is Li Lan. The author probably wanted to describe him as a character who is deeply scheming and relies on wisdom, but her ambition is just to kneel down and lick a man to make herself stronger... The description of the protagonist's friend is also really disgusting. His appearance is just to portray a fool who is obsessed with sex all the time. In contrast to the protagonist who always looks like he owes money to women, the protagonist may be taller? There are also those martial arts students. The protagonist was the first to use other people's lives to seek benefits for himself, and he did not show any guilt when others were hurt because of him. He only saw that he did not want others to implicate him. What is even more strange is that these people did not feel dissatisfied with the protagonist after knowing it. The author's writing here is too stiff. The last point is the religious issue. The protagonist is called a Taoist sword cultivator of the Chunyang lineage, but I can't understand the operation of worshiping Sanqing every day... In these chapters, the author suddenly started to crazily criticize Buddhism. In fact, there is nothing wrong with black Buddhism, but the common problem of the author, or most of the authors in the starting point, is that when he criticizes Buddhism, he is relatively low-level, either by directly belittling and slandering, or by making up some things to praise and denigrate Buddhism, but When the author compiles these things, they are often exactly the opposite of what happened in history. For example, a monk in a prosperous age in troubled times contrasts the historical monk soldiers against the Japanese and the anti-Japanese allied forces formed by monks, and then compares Quan Yong, or compares Quan Yong with the White Lotus Sect, which also originated from Buddhism... For example, the Taoist priests written by the author disdain the powerful are even more embarrassing. Zhang Tianshi's Zhengyi sect has relied on licking the royal family to be raised by the royal family since ancient times, and it has not changed until modern times.

Xiao Yuyu wants to read a book review, so I'll write one when I wake up. The glorious body is sometimes illusory and sometimes real. After a hundred years of cultivating the spiritual body, the dream turned into a butterfly and came to nothing. A small glimpse into the future of a swordsman, Chunyang rebuilds the Ice City. Weird trading is introduced into the game, and Baigou Village is slightly weird. Chunyang swordsmanship is greatly affected by the cold, and Zifu practices Qi and cultivates golden elixir. The mighty soldiers of the Qin Dynasty fight all over the world, and the mandarin dragon knights hunt for the soul. After ten long years and several days, the sword of wisdom cuts through the injustice in my heart. I, Zhao Yang, was the man who changed the destiny of Da Qin and was a dangerous member of Da Xia. Now I am willing to exchange the lives of tens of millions of people for the strength of returning to the ruins to fight. I do not ask for a long-lasting reputation, but I hope that Da Xia's kingdom will be extended for more than a hundred years.

The worst thing about this book is that In terms of setting, the protagonist is awesome, but in terms of plot, it's very low-key. The protagonist either doesn't make a plan, but once he makes a plan, unexpected events will disrupt his plan. In the final analysis, the author is suppressing the protagonist's combat power, and it is a bit deliberate. There are similar poisonous points in many novels The protagonist upgrades very slowly in the early stage, but skyrockets in the later stage.

After reading Chapter 30, the protagonist, a Yuanshen monk, was reborn. He knew clearly that it was a golden age and that the future would be very dangerous. However, he did not practice, develop or improve himself. Instead, he hung around a woman. The woman also had a bad attitude. However, as long as she threw two bones or said a word, the protagonist would lick her without hesitation and leave.

When I read Chapter 21, the previous chapter was okay, but here it is a direct **. As mentioned before by those who attended the party, they are all big bosses from various provinces. Who are you? You come from a rural area. Can you attend the party? Your cousin had no choice but to bring you here according to her mother's wishes, and ran directly over to force you to toast! Not to mention the one who was forcibly toasted, I want the second-generation rich people present not to let your cousin come to events in the future. Most poor relatives have it, but there are still very few people who are so stunned. What does it mean for your cousin to bring a lunatic here (this behavior seems to be the case). What if he brings someone who is even more stupid to kill directly next time? ? ? ? You (the Yuanshen Great Monk) don't care about other people's opinions. The result of this inversion is that your cousin's family will lose a lot of face in the eyes of others. What's more serious may even be suppressed. Is this what a reborn great monk does? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

After reading the setting in the first chapter, I felt that this book would definitely be a hit. Except for a small number of people and newcomers, I really can't stand it. They have already cultivated to the level of the Yuanshen Great Monk. So rebuilding the body should be a trivial matter, and it can't even repair the foundation. So what's the use of the Yuan Shen Great Monk? Being invincible at the same level is just a way. You can't say that because several best-selling novels emphasize invincibility at the same level, you can say that there is only one way. The reason why many people who cultivate immortality and Taoism say that it depends on qualifications in the early stage and spiritual understanding in the later stage. It is just that good qualifications can make it easier to reach the later stage. You are already in the late stage and can't even make up for the foundation in the early stage. Are you practicing hammer? And when it comes to the soul, don't tell me that once you are reborn, you will treat the past as if it never happened, or that you can make up for the soul by reversing the plot a few times. Then I can tell you for sure that your soul will still not be able to pass the test. On the surface, you are deceiving yourself. Deep down, it is impossible to pretend that it never happened. It is even worse than in the previous life, no matter how many immortal ways you practice. Go home and pick shit! ! ! !

First-class world setting, third-rate chaotic writing The setting of the story background and world is so refreshing that I can't put it down. Unfortunately, the early plot is chaotic and the writing is clumsy and resembles Dou Po. It looks fine to middle school students, but it's really the same for old bookworms...

At first, the protagonist was reborn, but then he discovered that he was a fake immortal! Apprenticeship to Lu Chunyang - (I have written more than 100 chapters), I thought the protagonist was going to be awesome, but who knew he was still a piece of trash! There are about 6 shots in total, and there should be 20 chapters in total! The rest is in Shuiwen, non-stop in Bb! Talk about how awesome the other supporting characters are, and how you can predict and take the lead! It's always in the water, it's poisonous! Extremely poisonous! ☠️! Withdrawal, I really can't stand it anymore! 😵😵😵What a trashy protagonist! With so much foreshadowing, it's still rubbish! 2 Of the 8 Destined Sons have appeared so far! I don't know where to save it, 8 supporting characters who must die! 🤮Hematemesis I think it should be at least 1,000,000 words! The author is awesome! Niu b You won and left, so disappointed! The Qidian app has just been released! It's been 5 years since I posted a comment for the first time. I thought I found fairy grass. . . . . ! 88

Good and refreshing articles cannot be circulated, and they have to be written with some flashy stuff. I don't go all day to fight monsters, upgrade, change maps, hang out with some Qiao Yue ghost, I don't know. I wanted to see the plot of pretending to be a slap in the face, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, but there was not a single one. Although I usually vomit when reading novels, I still wanted to feel more comfortable. Using a good setting like this is speechless. So many people can't understand it. Doesn't it prove that there is something wrong with your writing? If you let others read it as a piece of writing, don't you have any idea what you wrote? Originally, the first three chapters pointed out the main plot, but in the end, there were foreshadowings everywhere, and the readers were not allowed to see it. Do you want to write a mystery novel? How? Like grandma? Really sick. Do you think having the protagonist say a few specious words is enough to be convincing? Did the author write this story for himself? Sorry, I can't afford to offend the author. I really can't stand the author living in his own world, so I slipped away.

The most annoying thing about reading this rebirth article is that you said that in the previous life, you achieved a high level of cultivation, but once you come down, your character cannot keep up, and you are still a loser. The character is like the protagonist. That is, because he is the protagonist in this book, in other books, this kind of person is reborn 100 times, and he is also a supporting character who is beaten to death.

The writing in this book is too messy and keeps skipping the plot. The author always likes to write half of a plot and let the readers guess the second half based on the context. It's so annoying that I gave up the book.

Reborn as a Dog is about a disabled dog who was reborn next to a group of destined emperors to see how awesome the emperors are. What kind of garbage is the protagonist's crippled dog!

The protagonist's character is not generally bad, and his IQ is seriously lacking, and he is selfish and speechless. The author should still be a high school student.

The protagonist doesn't look like a reborn great monk at all. He can't even adapt to some small matters of life and death at the beginning. Is this the state of mind that a fairy should have? I really can't stand it anymore, the character of the author's protagonist is ruined!

The story is quite interesting The author is also very good at writing people. Even the protagonist, including the main character, makes people dislike it. It is consistent The disgusting one is first-rate.

The Nie family of the Far East opened up the relationship, and poof..., He died of a poisonous attack.

Not to mention, the author, can you give me a nice word? If the eunuch wants to open a new book, please announce it 😵

The three golden chapters are the most important. Damn it, the protagonist in the first chapter is a sword slave, and his name is Chunyang? Bah(*｀へ´*), the second chapter is about the beauty in the car, I'm convinced

After reading more than 20 chapters, I felt that it was very confusing. I always felt that I was holding back my anger and felt uncomfortable. Moreover, the driving in the article was very vulgar.

Here, some people say that the protagonist's rebirth feels like a young man plus 100 years of memories. This is really true. The so-called rebirth of the protagonist in this book is a future deduced specifically for the protagonist by a certain great power. Therefore, there is naturally no change in the character of the character, but if you want to imitate the actions of the previous life, it is naturally neither fish nor fowl... Second, there is the issue of the protagonist's realm in the previous life. The golden elixir is useless (there is something wrong with the technique). Naturally, one cannot form a Nascent Soul. The so-called Nascent Soul means death, a baby. The soul was given to him by others (in other words, the soul was not his). The protagonist has always said that the soul cannot be bullied... It is a pity. The protagonist's spirit is fake 😅

Posted by the author (don't ask me why I posted it, he didn't have enough experience with his account and posted the post). Tell me something about this book. First of all, what everyone is most concerned about is the update time and quantity. Qianmo would like to assure everyone that from today onwards, it will be updated around 5pm every day, twice a day. Second, the release date... This, July 20 at the latest, mainly because it is waiting for strong promotion. If it doesn't come next week, Qianmo will have no choice but to go on the shelves naked (crying face). Third, regarding the issue that some readers in the comment area say they can't understand it, those who can't understand it can just read it as if they are ignorant. When Qianmo reads other people's articles, there are many times when Qianmo can't understand it... (Don't laugh at me! I'm a novice reader! You bite me!). Some of the stories in this book and the foreshadowing of Qianmo will be gradually revealed in the following chapters, so don't panic. Fourth, regarding the issue of adding updates... Qianmo will try its best to add updates while ensuring updates after it is put on the shelves (now it is mainly waiting for forced recommendation... It has more than 300,000 words, which is very sad...), And then the update rules are: 10,000 recommendations plus three updates, 100 thousand monthly tickets plus one update, 10,000 rewards plus one update, and every 100 plus orders plus one update (the remaining updates will be made up on the shelves, so don't panic). Finally, there is a rumor circulating that the first high-quality women's clothing to be ordered on the shelves of this book? Ahem... This is a bit difficult. I only have 10,000 copies of this book in my collection now. If I want to order 3,000 copies... It all depends on your efforts! Time: July 7, 2018. Signed by: Moxing Qianmo.

Sorry, I really can't stand it anymore...

Let me tell you my feelings after reading Chapter 70. The author's writing skills are not strong enough. The writing is vague and feels very grand. Actually, it's a confusing batch. Have you finished writing it yourself and read it? How much rice is needed for a large bowl ( ･᷄ὢ･᷅)

There's nothing wrong with the character design, but it's just boring, so boring. I don't know what I'm looking at. I'm just getting a hammer here and there.

I was so embarrassed that I almost got cancer

Sorry, I really can't stand it anymore.

If it were me, as long as I had enough living expenses for a year, I would go to school and find a place to play the game for a year without being disturbed by the outside world. When the end of the world comes in a year, I would become a great supernatural power, and then take my parents away to enjoy the blessings, right?

Pretending to write is not fun at all. Pretending to write is not fun at all.

The first 50 chapters are so poisonous that I can't bear it anymore

I was really confused the whole time. I kept watching just to avoid being confused. I ended up confused for a long time.