A Certain Scientific Fluid Control

After reading so many Magic Forbidden fanfics, this book is the only one where I don't have to worry about becoming a eunuch. It is also a Magic Forbidden fanfic that I can patiently read and follow. Although I was a little uncomfortable with it at first because of the author's original characters, it gradually became more natural. Come on, author, I will support you with the original version. However, the update speed of one update per day makes me less surprised about chasing books. If possible, I hope that the author will occasionally update a chapter. Of course, it does not need to be too many, because the author's one update is already worth two chapters. Finally, I wish the author's grades will get better and better, the quality of the book will get higher and higher, the author will write well, the readers will read it well, and finish the book perfectly. Good luck to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง.

The original plot is simply invincible. This is the first time I have seen an original plot from a Demon Forbidden fan with original characters reaching this level. But it was obviously good in the early and middle stages, but it took off in the later stages. After reading the closing remarks, yes, I can understand that the original work has lost its creative enthusiasm. Although I can understand this starting point, I still feel it is a pity, it is really a pity. If the ending is carefully and reasonably arranged, it feels like the reading experience can be doubled, at least for me, haha. By the way, I don't know if the author will read it. I also support the harem. After all, it is difficult to give up any of your favorite characters. It is better to say that the harem can achieve a happy ending in a certain sense. But. . The ending of the harem should require emotional foreshadowing. As a member of the harem, if you are included directly without much emotional foreshadowing, you will feel, emmm, unstable, empty, false, and abrupt (my language skills limit my description). If the harem is rationalized, it will be a super, super perfect reunion, but this is difficult to achieve. If you can't rationalize everything, you can subtract one or two characters who don't have enough emotional foreshadowing. Ah, if true love is limited to the original work and cannot be added to the plot, there is nothing to say, just add _(:3∠)_. Finally, big cheers to the author! I wish you good results with your next book!

So the protagonist and his teammates are considered mercenaries and their brains are broken?

Read Chapter 2. Nonsense. Attempted rape. Scared the trouble. The author has watched too many cartoons. How could it be so easy? It would be weird if it didn't last for a few years.

There are too many original plots and too few Touma scenes. It feels quite routine, lacking a bit of the excitement of Academy City. The storyline involving Sister Misaka has been particularly changed. Shokuhou Misaki actually has a clone. . . At least the anime doesn't have this setting. I feel like this book is different from other Magic Forbidden fandoms.

2 Monthly votes have been cast, and it feels like it's getting more and more exciting! ! Come on, author

The writing in the later stage is indeed too strange. The first and middle are good-looking, and I feel that later on, setting the protagonist as a magic book that seizes the body is a bit strange and unnecessary.

I haven't read it yet, but I just want to comment on whether science is unscientific in the work No matter how powerful you are or how you fantasize about science, you still have to abide by the most basic scientific theorems What temperature cannot reach minus 271.15 What is the role of force? It's mutual or something like that I'm not a scientist and I can't say much. For example, I read those martial arts novels about Qinggong, where a person can fly ten meters high with a tap of his feet I won't say much, but I didn't read the content, but when I read this kind of fantasy science, super power development and the like, it's all about looking for science within science.

Wow is this the finale? I also want to see more of Kawakami and Misaka's daily interactions!

Why do you, the author, write so much and say that the level is still only level one?

Thank you to the author for this book. I like it very much and look forward to your story in the corner~

Come on! It's quite good. In order to read the book well, I read Railgun again....

In the end, it's still a harem... Orz

This novel is really great. Come on, author. I'm most annoyed when I read pretentious articles. This novel made me happy.

Chasing Chasing, I have finished reading Yusang's third book (by the way, I would like to add some incense sticks to the broken Death Knight and the spiral...), And I have forgotten to follow it for several years... I wish Yagi a smooth journey to Chaldea...

The best Doujin fic I have ever seen! There are so many original scenes! Full of characters! Get perfect scores every day! To be honest, my attitude towards the Magic Forbidden is basically that I only like the science side and dislike the magic side, so I have very little exposure to the original work. I basically watched two seasons of Super Gun and one season of Magic Forbidden and then directly joined the fandom. The original line of this book is just long enough, and there is a feeling that I can't tell whether the original characters are the original characters of the Forbidden City. At least the author has done a great job in shaping the two-dimensional characters. Ah, when will I also learn to write daily routines! Even if it's not from the two-dimensional system, that's fine!

I don't know if it looks good or not, so I'll put it on my bookshelf first and look at it later when I remember it.

Ah... From the time I wrote it, I counted tens of thousands of words, to the end now, I am filled with emotion. Maybe this is the first harem story I've read? 2333. Not much to say about supporting the new book... I heard that the author wrote FGO and I went to play it. However, I uninstalled it before I could play it. I hope I can read it. After all, the author said it has little to do with the original plot [laughs]

1.56 Million, complete book! Thumbs up.

I was still thinking about how you would break up the process, but I just skipped it, awesome 😅

Is a chapter of 2000 words really good? ? As above. .

Did the author deliberately not upgrade his level to lv1?

Sister Pao wants to kiss... What should I do... I'm so excited O(∩_∩)O

Because the sense of substitution for the issue of ability is too weak, it feels like a forced explanation.

This article ends on the same day as my birthday 😭

Are you the boss from a certain pool? Can we capture the boss alive?😁