The Legend of Iruka in Konoha

Do you know why there are 170,000 clicks, more than 500 recommendations, and a monthly pass? Because the writing is really rubbish. Ten songs and Kirabi are exchanged for the Eight-Tails. Let the Eight-Tails die. You really thought of it.

Iruka's choice of entry point is very good, and it is also very accepted by the public, but what is going on with the seven-point routine style ten years ago, pretending to be 13, slapping people in the face, and all kinds of entanglements with one-stick plot characters are all fantasy routines that have been disgusted by the style of writing, and there are also some character plots that have been written badly. They look like copying and pasting, and there is nothing new. It's not that you can't write a running account, but it's usually not the case in the middle and late stages. And since Iruka taught the Twelve Little Strong, it is at least certain that he is the confidant of the third generation. Why not dig deeper on this point?

It's all on the shelves. What's your comment on the launch?

Tens of thousands of psychic beasts above Chuunin, even if they are all Chunin, how much chakra will be gained if they are channeled, even the Nine-Tails will probably be drained.

Sweat, can rb country's bad situation be the same as ours in china? So ridiculous

Without a plug-in, how can you pretend to be a cool Hokage who is flying all over the place?

I was a little bit looking forward to it after reading the synopsis, but the first two chapters convinced me to give up. The second design is a bit ridiculous, and the following only represents my personal opinion. First, judging from Orochimaru's release of the souls of the previous Kage in the later period, the technique of corpse sealing existed a long time ago. Second, although I have not read the comics, the animation does not seem to show that the God of Death is conscious. Not only the God of Death, but also Yama summoned by Pain's Six Paths does not show any subjective consciousness. Third, the Nine-Tails is a collection of chakra and the strongest tailed beast. Even if the God of Death is dozens of times stronger than the Nine-Tails, the Nine-Tails cannot be such a licker. Finally, the completion of the sealing of the zombies means that they have entered the stomach of Death, so I am very curious, did Death spit out the Yondaime and Kyuubi first and then eat them after talking? Moreover, if the author assumes that the God of Death is a ghost, it would be against the rules to throw the Kyuubi and the Fourth Generation into his stomach. .

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stop reading. The author has never watched Naruto at all. He is just writing randomly, and the logic is unclear.

It's probably because the author doesn't understand Naruto and is too naive about the characters.

Both orders are 60. . . Come on

How should I put it, it's too cliche, has a lot of mistakes, and there is actually no need to conflict with Uchiha. First of all, it's not that Uchiha in the manga didn't want to go out and fight the Nine-Tails, but was stopped. To evacuate the villagers, so Uchiha was rumored to be unable to go out to fight, which is a very irritating thing in itself. Uchiha is proud, not domineering. In comics and anime, Uchiha is not the kind of person who has shit in his head, but Uchiha has reached the point where he will die whether he rebels or not, facing the acquiescence of the third generation. Under the covetousness of Obito and Danzo. It is not up to Uchiha to decide whether to live or die. It is the strength of the entire village. And with the support of Kaleidoscope, if it weren't for Shisui being too naive. To be honest. Uchiha really may not die, and the third generation will not allow Danzo and Uchiha to go to war. However, Itachi is too young and Shisui is too naive. And to be honest, as one of the founders of the village, it is normal to pursue the position of Hokage. Uchiha is not unreasonable, judging from the manga and animation performance. Uchiha knew exactly what he was facing and what he needed. The Queen of the Kyuubi came to Uchiha and wanted to rebel. The manga clearly stated that Danzo was so forced that he just had to lead his roots directly into Uchiha to seize the eyes. Without Itachi, Danzo would probably have been unable to resist taking action himself not long after Shisui's death.

Emmm, how should I put it, the writing is a bit poor! The story is not well connected! I skipped and watched a section! The purpose of the supporting characters appearing is to slap the protagonist in the face. It can't be said that I don't like watching it, I just think it's better to pretend to be 13 inadvertently! Also, when you wrote earlier, you shouldn't have written down the specific time. Well, what should I say? It should be just to leave suspense, or something like that! I have read Chapter 19, and I always feel like I am reading an essay 😰! How should I put it, the role of Iruka should be outstanding! There must be someone in the ancestor who is familiar with the third generation. After all, the third generation's secretary is there! It doesn't matter, there is no talent, how could it be him, right? I don't know if the author has noticed emmm! ! Any shortcomings and opinions discovered in the future will be written here!

I remember Iruka was a civilian, right? Where did the family come from, and what can you do if you know the plot? Does your becoming stronger have anything to do with knowing the plot? The introduction pissed me off. Then I skipped here and read a few chapters. Among all Hokage, Iruka is the most comfortable person alive. There is also a little fan girl who likes him. Otsutsuki cannot be killed. I can only test the Yin Yang Escape Earth Explosion Star Seal in the bloodline of Sasuke and Naruto. What else do you want to dance? Do you have to make yourself disabled? There is nothing wrong with becoming stronger and not leaving scars on your face.

I feel a bit novice. The owner of the knife shop does not have bodyguards and is bullied by gangsters. This personality makes me feel that there is a big contrast in the queues to buy knifes in his knife shop.

This introduction is superfluous~Does the author know what time travel is? The world of two dimensions, novels, movies, TV shows, and songs are all considered time travel ~ no matter what the protagonist's reasons are

Chapter 12: Persuading you to quit, I really can't stand it anymore

I didn't say that! Author, you are really getting better and better! This chapter has half a word written about ninjutsu!

It's very poisonous. When I saw Sarutobi tricking Pig's Foot into signing the agreement, Pig's Foot actually didn't have any resentment. It would be fine if it were the real Iruka. He had been brainwashed since he was a child, which is normal. But Pig's Foot comes from the earth. Your nominal parents sacrificed for Konoha and want to take away your assets. It's normal to endure it for the time being. But Pig's Foot didn't react much. He promised Iruka to kill Kyuubi before, so he was destined to be the enemy of Konoha's top management. . Full of poison points, give up

Umino Iruka original setting Ninja 6 body 6 illusion 5 sage 8 strength 5 speed 5 essence 6 seal 7 total 48 dive 4 luck 2 Ninja, 7 bodies, 7 illusions, 5 sages, 9 strength, 5 speed, 5 essence, 6 seals, 8 total 52

With a shake of my hand, all the recommendation tickets were given away 😰