Infinite Dao Palace

It's not easy for the author either. It's almost a stand-alone situation and it can be updated continuously. I cried a lot of bitter tears when I saw this book. I felt that it was really not easy for the authors to write the book. I just opened it casually when I was looking for the book in the library. As for the content, after all, I have never written a novel, and I don't know much about the author's industry, so don't be surprised if there are authors who say something wrong. The first point is that I think the author should have had an idea when he wrote this book. He had an idea and a story in his mind and then put it into writing, right? But I don't know if there is a clear positioning! This is the key. Judging from the author's writing, it seems a bit green, and the characters and plot are a bit superficial. I'm not a novice at writing novices. In fact, it's okay to write a novice like a master. A qualified novel, even if it is a simple passion, the whole plot, the supporting roles, the protagonist's pretentiousness, the atmosphere is harmonious, just like showing family affection in a family, everyone is kind and caring. But I felt that the main character here was a bit out of place and his emotions were a bit artificial. The atmosphere of this book is not intended to be a hot-blooded and mindless novel. It is too bland. The character of the protagonist is too obvious. There is no doubt at first glance. If there is no unknown, it is not a qualified novel. Otherwise, how can you attract me to read it? I don't think the author needs to deliberately sensationalize his expression. Each supporting character he needs must have a prepared character and at least have his own little calculation. Let the protagonist think. It is a taboo to talk superficially and deeply! If you think about it, in real life, if someone who is not familiar with you tells you embarrassing things about your family and secretly tells you his inner thoughts, will you become good friends with him immediately? Won't! Most people will only think that this person is sick, or think that you are such a person! It will give people a very superficial feeling. The author is a little deliberate. Everything is explained very deliberately in the article. It is not explained by the protagonist. It feels like everything can't help but jump out. The character of the protagonist is that we are not familiar with it, so he reveals his heart. I personally think that the author should focus on the plot conflict and then let the characters drive it. It sounds very simple, but if you want to attract people to watch, you can't directly show your cards. The author must also learn how to count words. Just like the protagonist sharpening his sword, don't rush to explain. Talk less and don't explain. Let the protagonist do it directly. It will become clear in the process of doing it. The words should not be so intense. They all talk about the road of life. It feels like communicating with each other with shallow words. For example, my favorite actor, Chen Daoming, has connotation at a glance. If you want to know what's going on, you have to pay attention to what he says. Slowly, you will continue to understand the character you are playing. This is the normal way for the protagonist to open up. Of course, you are not writing Baymax, and it does not need to be so deep. I just say that you need to dig out slowly in this way, so that you will have a three-dimensional understanding of the protagonist, like a living person. You directly speak your heart. The plot is not as Baymax as constant conflict, which is too weak. Don't be afraid that others will not know what is going on! Watch!