One Punch Naruto

I think it's pretty good, 🙂 but why don't you write it down, ah ah ah

As a Japanese, Itachi's idea is to kill the whole family and protect the village. If it were me, I might kill the whole village and save my whole family. Last time I watched Liang Jian, there was a captain who said that you can't even protect your family, so why should you protect the country?

The funniest thing is that he clearly looked down on many things that happened in the original work and kept talking about his own thoughts. As a result, the action completely followed the plot of the original work. Since you are following the original work, don't write so many opinions and thoughts.

Author, can we not write an analysis article? They are all here to watch the plot. Who would want to watch the Uchiha family and why the village declined at every turn? It was originally a very good novel with Sakura as the protagonist, but with this messy analysis, I no longer have any interest in reading it!

It's a boring fan fiction, I keep analyzing the original work, and it's so boring to analyze it over and over again. The protagonist mastered Saitama's one-punch training method in his previous life, and was basically invincible. However, as soon as he came to Hokage, he became intimidated (he didn't bring his soul-piercing strength, but his soul was invincible), which was very frustrating to watch. The bully has a venomous mouth and a ruthless attack. When someone becomes ruthless, he will pretend to be stunned. It's so disgusting. The more I watched, the more frustrated I became. When I saw Gaara fighting against Gaara in the Chuunin Exam, he surrendered when he came out. I was so disgusted that I couldn't stand it anymore. Strong people don't have any magnanimity at all. They have a lot of inner activities and look down on others. If you look down on others, you should show off your strength. When it came to the Chuunin exam, the strength he wrote was almost the same as Kakashi's. He was all kinds of cowards and pretended to be cowards, but he didn't have the feeling of being invincible like One Punch Man. If you're going to be too cowardly to write, don't write about the first time you traveled through time to One Punch and practiced Saitama's training. The contrast is huge, no wonder it feels cold.

The entire article is an analysis of the original plot, and readers are not here to read the analysis.

At the beginning, I felt that there was something wrong with this book when I read that it was all parallel imports. I gritted my teeth and read a few more chapters. I actually saw that Itachi would use other gods to you, a 7-year-old who is not even a ninja. The reason is to let you take care of Sasuke? I wouldn't have made it up like this without any brains, right?

There is a tradition called - scolding eunuchs!

You gave up when you saw that you were about to fight a red panda. You had been pretending before, but when it was about to fight, you gave up in front of tens of thousands of people. Even if you beat the red panda in a deserted place, who would know about it? From now on, outsiders will only say that people from Konoha are so frightened that they surrender when faced with red pandas, and Konoha's face is completely lost. Not to mention that in Japan, a place where face is so important, people like this will end their lives, and they will eventually be despised and cast aside in any organization with a sense of honor.

600,000 Words, cut it as you say, awesome

The writing is very problematic. The article contains too much of my own opinions and analysis of the original text. This is a big taboo. Not to mention that this kind of thing itself will cause controversy, and what you write is a novel, telling a story, not "Interpreting Naruto", not writing an argumentative essay. If you really want to let readers understand your thoughts, please promote the development in the setting of the storyline and integrate your thoughts into the story, rather than talking about it in a long way.

What the hell, I've read dozens of chapters, all of which are analysis of various Naruto plots, and I haven't seen any of the plots. If you often read Naruto fanfiction, you don't need an explanation 😥

Author, please change your name to Haizi!

Real Nima water, I've seen water, but I've never seen someone as watery as you,,,,, a psychological description can fill several chapters 666699999

Whoever reads this book will regret it. It's watery at the beginning. Chapter 11 of the book is watery and the protagonist hasn't started practicing yet.

In the comic, the protagonist Saitama's fighting power is off the charts, and no one can stop his serious punch, just like the name of the comic "One Punch Man". Why Saitama is so strong is because he successfully removed his own limiter. In the setting of the original work, due to the physical differences between species and individuals, there are limits that cannot be eliminated no matter how much effort is put into it. The purpose of this limit is to allow various creatures to grow without losing their survival awareness and rationality. This growth limit is called a limiter. S-class heroes such as War Horror Long Tornado can be considered to be born with great talents, which are limiters with a wider range. When humans become monsters due to various external factors (such as transformation desires, environmental induction, scientific transformation, etc.), They are physically regenerated into other species, which is equivalent to resetting a new limiter. The protagonist Saitama is the only creature in the comics that remains human and has successfully released his own limiter.

Go ahead, I really underestimated the author's power of tons of water! It's been ten chapters and Orochimaru hasn't passed yet!

Last time I said there were 4 updates but there was only 1 update. I will give you all the recommendation votes. Stop being a pig.

Come on, I like it, support the author

Very well written... Voted for the last time_(:з∠)_

Sign the new book and leave a paw print.

In the final analysis, the profession of ninja gives priority to tasks. As long as Buza gives up the task, there will be no conflict between the two sides. As for bringing Bai back to Konoha, it's a haha, not realistic approach at all.

The content of 2k is just one or two useful sentences.

I'm so excited, please update. . .

I saw the new cover, you can have this one, it's so domineering 😎