Programmers in the Second Dimension

Too watery! There are too many female characters! Every female character or group must have some interaction But the author himself said that repeated attributes are a taboo Where is your face? ! ! It's so bad that it's so bad It's so bad that the Stone Gate hasn't been completed for four or five hundred chapters It's so bad that countless characters are almost out of focus I'll raise a wave first and then come back

It's so overwhelming that I can't stand it anymore. If you don't write down the daily running accounts of the story, you have to write about eating in the morning, working at night, and chatting with plot characters, but not the main plot. I want to continue watching it, after all, the background is not bad, but it turns out that you need knowledge about the game background, how to make the game, planning and production methods, buying things, past life memories, and understanding of anime. It goes back and forth, and there are garbled Japanese words interspersed in the middle. You just give the Japanese text and don't translate it. What should I read? Do you want me to take the lead? No matter what you do day by day, I would like to say sorry first. Is it embarrassing? And there is Nan Xiaoniao, who just played the piano for someone once and then fell in love with it? Who are you? If you want to write about the harem, that's fine, but don't write about the people who are so mentally retarded, right? Also, all the girls will come together to chat with the male protagonist when they see him, and then the male protagonist will look helpless. Isn't that a little too self-righteous? There is also a store manager who just wants to wear the male protagonist to record music, but is written like a re-created parent, thanking them endlessly. It's so nonsensical. Finally, I want to say one more thing, this is real water.

In fact, I have read this book a long time ago, but I gave up after reading five or six chapters. But please don't get me wrong, it's not because of the author's writing style. It's just that there are too many clichés. It's a stranger heroine, it's a light novel, and it's a new sister. Even if it's amazing at first read, I really can't stand this kind of cliché. Then, I came back, because there were so many books with the same routine, but only a few of them were good-looking. I couldn't help it, at least it looked pretty good here. The author's writing is so good. I hope he will not be kidnapped by the current trend of two-dimensional extraction and create a world of his own. I will definitely support him at that time 🤓

After reading Chapter 50, I feel that the role of the pianist and the novelist is much greater than that of the programmer, which is a bit like going in the direction of "copying everything". Is it better to just change the title of the book? Even Witch House, which is closest to game programming, only has a copied plot and does not reflect the presence of programmers.

To be honest, this is my favorite light novel. You may think it is wordy, but I don't think that as a liberal arts student, the emotions in it are handled very well, and the protagonist is not a stallion. Only Hui wins in the end. The writing style is also very good (I sit in the golden palace with my pen once, and read the sages all day long. The night is clear and the moon is bright, it is appropriate to get drunk, etc.) And you can learn a lot by reading carefully. The principles of being a human being (but this is not poisonous chicken soup, but the principles learned in dealing with the world), and I have nothing to say about you filling in random characters, but everyone has their own values and opinions. As a creator, it is very important to maintain fresh ideas and creative motivation. I think it is normal for everyone's experiences and experiences to be different and have differences. In short, this book is a very good book for people to deal with.

Large phones cannot be bound, so small phones will speak and support a wave of authors.

Why did you write the black cat as a college graduate? Sagiri, you said he was 12 years old. In Eromanga Teacher, there are a few people like my sister who appear. They are obviously in the same timeline.

What did you call yourself when you were in secondary school?

. . . . The consequence of reading too many books is to look at three to five to roughly understand the overall direction and number of paths. If there is no new ideas, then you can't read it anymore, then there will be a shortage of books, and then you will blindly search for books and then the cycle will be endless. . .

I just want to say, can you stop smiling so hard all the time? I don't know who started it. Some novels have a wry smile in one chapter. I just want to say mdzz. Wry smiles are not omnipotent. A wry smile refers to a bad mood and a forced smile. I feel sad, but it shows an ugly smile, like self-deprecation. I laugh at myself and want to comfort others, as if I don't care about the thing that caused the wry smile. Always smiling bitterly can be said to have a bitter face all day long. You must use a wry smile where you obviously mean a helpless smile, making it seem like a wry smile is omnipotent, a wry smile when you are embarrassed, a wry smile when you are helpless, etc. I am really speechless.

1. As in the title, "Dragon Set" (because it's too troublesome to think of names for the characters) 2. Standard: ACG circle-related roles can be in groups or individuals, including light novel writers, illustrators, original painters, animation supervisors, game producers, etc. 3. Format (sent out later) 4. I don't know why, but my subscriptions have been dropping like crazy lately, but I just have the confidence to open a building like this. Jpg 5. Even if no one responds, I will still hang this building (crying)

I was ready to jump in and read the comments in advance, but... The author said that this book is not about a harem, but about a single female protagonist... Let me go, you're going to show me a two-dimensional fanfic with a single female protagonist? Isn't this an ironclad pill? Moreover, if you really want to write a single female protagonist, that's fine! But why are there so many other two-dimensional heroines in the book? It's okay to just mention it in one stroke, but it must have taken a long time and a lot of interaction to tease a lot. This is not a question of whether there is a pill or not. This is just to disgust people...

1. I don't understand why Xiao Mi is added to improve the word count. So far, I haven't seen her have any effect on the plot. To be honest, Xiao Mi's character is fine as a comedy drama. If you write her into a novel, it will look artificial, childish, selfish, and it can be said that there is no shining point 2. How many memories does the protagonist have? Is it considered the only urban daily drama you know? About 100 pictures, Passerby, Eromanga, LL, Qingyin, My sister have at least five dramas. I am really curious, author, are you embarrassed to write like this? 3. Because there are too many characters appearing too quickly, the plot of these 100 chapters is skipped here and there. As a result, there is still not much progress when it is almost released 4. Let's talk about Xiao Mi. When I saw Xiao Mi in the first chapter, I knew that he was another brainless darling. A brainless pet that has nothing to do with love, remove all the plots about Xiaomi, and you will find that the book has no change in reading, and the rhythm will even be better That's all, if some people catch me nagging here without paying, please shut up. What I said before it was put on the shelf is wrong and I can provide evidence to refute it. Don't tell me that I paid. It's not attractive. Why should I pay? If I don't pay, I'm not qualified to comment?

It's a pity that the legs are not missing in this picture 233

First there are saints and then there is heaven. I am as beautiful as a fairy in a painting.

I felt very embarrassed when I read the previous plot. I wrote more than 40 chapters but didn't submit the novel. The daily life at school was very embarrassing, and I didn't say much about Xiao Mi at home. It would be better if I removed Xiao Mi's character setting for him. And I see so many female supporting characters, who are so ambiguous with others at the beginning, and I feel that it may be uncomfortable later. They are the kind who have nothing to do with him in the first place. You still write so many ambiguous scenes, and then she is not included in the heroine, and it is very uncomfortable.

I skimmed it, flipped through the table of contents, and got a general idea of the plot. This is what a variety novel is like. There is only one male protagonist, and there are too many girls. He flies around among dozens or hundreds of flowers, and he is reluctant to write the female protagonist to the original male protagonist or keep the original lily routine... This is a common problem, and the other is that time moves very slowly, and the protagonist has many abilities. , Because there are too many works in the collection, I have to communicate back and forth with a bunch of heroines and costars, and the time is very long. It seems that I meet two girls in the morning, two girls in the afternoon, two girls in the evening, flirt with another girl on the phone before going to bed, and it will be another full day when I wake up tomorrow... It is a common problem for the protagonist to have rich abilities, and he wants to copy everything...

I think An Yilun is really disgusting. He clearly knows the thoughts of other girls, but keeps dragging them on, and uses this to "kidnap" them to work for his own immature ideas. If the protagonist's halo is not still in the second dimension, let's see what will happen to people like him.

Suggestions include but are not limited to roles, plot development, stock selling, etc. (Note 1: Works that have appeared so far: How to Raise a Passerby Heroine, Dry Girl! Xiaomi, LoveLive!, The Pet Girl of Sakurasou, My Sister Can't Be That Cute [Magic Revised Version], Qingyin Girl.) (Note 2: Works that have already appeared as protagonists or created by societies: My Youthful Love Story is indeed problematic, Witch House, Steins; Gate.) (Note 3: If there is no one around, I will close this building [cover my face and run away].)

Although you said yourself that you don't know how to write the beginning, the beginning is very important. Why does it make people want to read it if it is written in such a cheesy way? Also, are you a programmer? Second-rate programmers are not as bad as you make them out to be. There are not that many first-class programmers in the world. A second-rate programmer from a second-rate university is not considered a coder and is despised. Moreover, code farmers are used by programmers to laugh at themselves, not by society to despise programmers. Besides, second-rate programmers don't know how to improve themselves? The protagonist's appearance can only be described as useless. Then, throw him three times the workload? How bad is your company that you allow a rubbish colleague to give a useless programmer three times the work? What should I do if the project cannot be completed? It's not that society is beautiful and no one bullies others, but the way you write it is terrible.

There is "Love! Live! The Mysterious Tenth Person of the Muse" in your profile, why doesn't it appear?

I can't stand it after watching the first few pictures. He is really talented. He keeps talking one after another. I feel like the author has no basic knowledge of life. Every move he makes is inconsistent and embarrassing. He sings such a popular song like "Butter Fly" in a quiet cafe. I really can't help but complain 😅

The setting is slightly unique (if you have a house, a girl, and your parents are gone, both of you are usually dead, you have gay friends, and the pig's feet have a special status) The writing is natural, the logic is clear, the wording is accurate, and the plot is unique

How should I put it? It is inevitable that the routines will be similar. After all, there are so many fan novels and there are only a few famous daily series, so it depends on the author's writing skills. So far, it is quite good, but there are too few updates (funny). Also, please let Zha Lun spend the rest of his life with the paper man. To be honest, I feel so angry that I have a myocardial infarction. Both the defeated dog and the senior are so distressed. Obviously the defeated dog is so cute and the senior is so cute. Will the protagonist change his job and become an archangel? It's good to take stomach medicine and dog food. After all, the Crystal Palace is better than sending girls, right? The harem is not a stud. Anyway, here's to collecting it, come on, author!

The author once wrote that the protagonist said "my humble work". Our Chinese teacher told us that this is a wrong usage. My humble work itself has the meaning of my work.

The emotional line is too blurry. Do the seniors and Eiri like Tonya? If so, the protagonist should not have an affair with them. If not, you should distance them from Tonya from the beginning. What did the author plan? It made me anxious.

The writing style is not a pile of words. The occasional ancient words and phrases in the first few chapters have a sense of inconsistency. Pursuing writing skills deliberately is a bad way!

Author, do you know about the Invincible World and the Flower of Ending? I think this game can be made! Just don't leave out the h part.

Who is your favorite among the nine people in lovelive? I like Eri the most