The Dragon's Map of the World

No wonder no one reads it. He cuts the grass without eradicating the root. What kind of author is writing about the Three Kingdoms? Stop writing about it. Go and write about Xi Yangyang and Big Big Wolf.

This is a book about the Three Kingdoms that I think is very well written, but it also has shortcomings. So, I will allow Xiaosheng and I to comment without presumptuousness, so that the author and readers can be merciful. First of all, let's talk about the advantages. First, the storyline is very good, not sloppy, has climaxes, and there are laughs. In terms of historical data, I can tell that the author is great. Those who have done a lot of hard work also have their own opinions. The combination of the two is very perfect. Secondly, the character identification is good. The protagonist Mu Jing, with the word "Long Tu", is very consistent with the purpose of the book. Third, the generals' force setting is good, which reasonably highlights the generals' role on the battlefield, but is not overly exaggerated. Strong crossbows and arrows can limit and defeat them. In summary, I personally think that this is a very well-written and rare book on the Three Kingdoms genre. But there are also disadvantages. First, the logic of the details cannot help but be scrutinized. Take the protagonist before the time travel. Instead of accidentally killing someone, being wanted, and falling off a cliff to death, it is better to change it to the protagonist. He is young and wealthy, loves traveling, and loves adventure. Second, the writing is not meticulous. The author, since he has put so much effort into this book, should not be careless. As he read it, he found many typos. This is not only irresponsible for the author, but also irresponsible for the readers who love the author. I hope the author can correct it. I would like to make a small comment, I hope the author will not mind it, and can provide more detailed descriptions of the characters and their psychological activities. From Xiaosheng's point of view, the ancients were not necessarily worse than today, especially those who can survive in troubled times and leave their names in history. Compared with today, they are no worse, or even worse. To sum up, if the author can write with great care, this book has a chance of becoming a god. According to Xiaosheng, the word count should be around 3000 chapters, which is perfect. The above are just the words of Xiaosheng's family. I hope the author and readers will not hesitate to enlighten us and discuss together. Another special note to the author. Although Xiaosheng does not make much money, the author has published chapters. Xiaosheng must subscribe to each chapter. He has reported the hardships of writing to the author. In addition, a reward of 100 yuan has been given today. Although it is not much, I hope the author will not dislike it. 2018.2.25

Let's not talk about whether the aristocratic family looks down on you. In that era where people were judged by their birth, is there anyone who can help you? People must be self-aware and please the aristocratic families, so that the poor people will not rebel? Are there no more Yellow Turban thieves?

1. The most poisonous point in the previous part is that it said that the whole family was destroyed, but the old people and children were let go. It was specifically written that he left with hateful and vicious eyes, and he also shouted the villain's lines, "My name is ××, seek revenge on me." I heard that some people gave up after seeing this. After all, it is the Three Kingdoms 2 This is a martial arts novel in the skin of the Three Kingdoms, and it is still the same old routine, so I withdrew it.

Compassion does not control soldiers, and righteousness does not control wealth. Don't keep talking without taking your hands off your hands! If others don't die, you will die. The hatred of destroying the family is irreconcilable. Don't you have a backstage at a young age? Naive

Chapter 19: Killing the entire Zhu family is to silence everyone and prevent the news from leaking out. But he spared women and children. In ancient times, large families all married each other. Wouldn't it be exposed if you let him run away? Isn't it just a case of destroying one's balls? 😅

In ancient times, falling in love, being submissive, and doing politics in the harem, there was no decisive killing, cutting off the roots without eradicating the roots, and the spring breeze came back. Do you think you would be praised for your kindness? Troubled times are the stage for heroes. Heroes are fierce, domineering, ambitious and cold-blooded figures. For the sake of power, relatives can be killed (think of Li Shimin). Wu Zetian personally killed his own daughter just for power. Look at Liu Bang, she has no use for it. The birds are gone and the bows are hidden, the donkeys are killed by unloading the mill

It's strange, there are always pig's feet making a fuss about human nature. What does it mean to be a human being? Does cutting the grass but not the root have anything to do with human nature? My understanding is no. The reason why people can be at the top of the food chain is because they step on the blood of others. No matter how you explain it, the fact is so naked. The weak eat the strong, nothing more than that. This is the process of starting a family in history. Either you die or I die.

I won't talk about other things, but I will just say one thing. For women, how infatuated are they to resist these historical beauties? Would a businessman who was a bully in his previous life be so resistant to a beautiful woman with benefits and a historical level? You also want to turn them into independent women in the new era. Are you kidding me? Not to mention that era, it is modern. If there is a choice, a man will not think about his wife going out to show off. If he has the financial strength, the woman will have no problem at home. There is no unhappy situation. There should be few men who will do everything possible to persuade the woman to leave, right?

Everyone, give up the book. It's so poisonous that I couldn't read the first few chapters. You also said that you are so decisive in killing that you can't even attack the enemy. You also know that you are afraid of repeating the Zhao family orphan scene, but you still don't attack? Don't you know that the fish in the trap will report you? If you weren't the protagonist, you wouldn't be able to pass chapter 30! After eating a full meal, you will forget the hard days in the past! Too toxic, farewell!