The Low-Key Superstar Dad

I just read a few chapters and said that I can't accept Xi being a father, and I can't accept raising someone else's child before I get married. Maybe I'm just a selfish person. I would be good anywhere if it's my own. But if it's not my own, I feel uncomfortable living in my own home, let alone raising it as my own child.

You were drunk, you wanted to be a father, and you saved a singer with a child because the child couldn't let him go the next day, and then you, a special soldier, shamelessly followed her home? ? ? Do you understand how people are involved in the world? When we just meet each other, when do we get to know each other so well that we can directly treat them as their father and go home with them? ? ? Your feelings really come too suddenly, I really can't understand them. A man from Beijing drifts into love with a one or three-year-old girl at first sight? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Dear book lovers, can you vote for the author's new book? Thank you very much😭😭😭😭😭

First of all, new books need to be recommended to be at the bottom. The more recommendation votes there are, the more people will read them. Then more people can drive up the performance of the book. I read it after seeing your recommendation on the book list. Now that I have read the beginning, I don't have much problem with the writing, but I feel uncomfortable with the way of writing. There are three golden chapters in a novel. What is important is that it can retain readers, and if it is well written, it can be collected for a long time. However, your first three chapters are not very attractive. After reading these three chapters, the average reader is in a state of whether to keep it or not. However, if the reader feels uncomfortable with the wording, they may give up and read further. I think the poor performance may be related to this. Therefore, it is currently recommended that if you can, you spend a day or two making some small changes to the book. The first three chapters are the first, refer to the popular nanny articles, and try to retain the readers who have read it. The second is the content at the end, and the wording and other changes will be more comfortable. The problem with the writing is not big. Even if these things are done, there is nothing exciting. As long as it is not poisonous, readers can make do with reading later, and then send some small red envelopes appropriately, get recommendation votes, and slowly the results will improve. Finally, if you want to go further, try to add some cool points, and then pay attention to the daily writing style. Dad's writing should pay attention to daily life, either making people feel warm or making people happy. In this aspect, refer to the book of the master. Finally, the above is my opinion. The author can refer to it. How to proceed depends on your own situation.

First of all, let me say that I am not here to troll. I only read Chapter 4 and couldn't watch anymore. Let me just talk about the reason why I can't stand it. I still prefer this kind of book about warm life, but even though there is a beautiful woman in the main character at the beginning, what the hell is this child? Like to be a father? As a single person who is not yet married, I cannot accept it! I hope the author can change the beginning to include his own children, otherwise the first few chapters will dissuade a lot of people.

It's been a long time since I've seen an author who can insist on updating 10,000 words every day. This update speed is worthy of support. Come on, author!

I saw Chapter 14 and couldn't stand it anymore. I can accept the male protagonist easily accepting a daughter earlier, but is it wrong for him to slam the table and yell at the female protagonist? Not to mention that the heroine is his immediate boss, as a man, he has no position or right to reprimand the heroine. If he has an opinion, he can say it calmly and honestly, but he can't be complacent after scolding a girl until she cries. It's simply a cancer of straight men, too chauvinistic.

This book is highly toxic. Is the protagonist's IQ and EQ correct? Does the author have some misunderstanding about our country's soldiers and special forces? He writes about the demobilized soldiers as having such low IQs. Your writing about retired special forces makes me very worried about the security of the country.

Chapter One: Persuading to Quit: A Trash

The character is very mentally retarded, and I was persuaded to quit in the first chapter due to the poisonous point.