The Urban Pokemon System

If you're going to write fanfiction, you should at least choose a Japanese name. Otherwise, it feels weird! It's really annoying!

Author, I have a suggestion for you—and I mean a suggestion—that you don't need to create such a huge plot hole at the beginning, specifically regarding the protagonist's time travel. After all, plot holes need to be filled, and for readers who enjoy fast-paced, action-packed stories, this kind of plot hole can create a sense of unease. Since this doesn't feel like a typical action-packed story, and most readers of mobile novels prefer that kind of plot.

This is absolutely unreadable! I'm a Pokémon fanatic, and I've read hundreds, if not thousands, of Pokémon novels. Aside from a few abandoned stories after only one or two chapters, I've never seen anything worse! A female lead appears in chapter ten?! The Pokémon haven't even progressed much, and they're already going back to normal?! Do you think Scyther is a freeloader?!

The book's premise is good, but the aptitude levels are too mixed, and the writing style has a lot of room for improvement. The plot is strange. Who wouldn't doubt the origin of a gem the size of a goose egg? Are the three families mass-produced? Giving one to everyone without a background, and the protagonist's aptitude is epic. He encounters people with decent aptitude every few steps. Meanwhile, where did the first opponent, the three families, go?

Speechless. Did the Alliance give you an epic item right from the start? Couldn't the Alliance detect that? Second, do sprite eggs need energy to hatch?

Poisonous, extremely poisonous, especially after returning to reality, what he did was truly indescribable, even going out to give away mythical beasts, and falling head over heels in love. Please, have some common sense.

Seriously, what a piece of trash! I tested it for 10 minutes, but I couldn't continue after chapter 10. It's disgusting.

This book is highly poisonous. People with heart conditions should avoid entering, lest you be poisoned to death. 😁😁😁

The alliance is incredibly generous! Starting with the top three starter champions. They're even throwing in a backpack, supplies, and money. Wow, that's incredibly generous! It's like the government giving you a luxury car and free gas when you turn 18! Haha.

The first chapter was a bit poorly written. In my personal opinion, the Creator God could only create by relying on other laws, meaning that the Heavenly Dao isn't that powerful, and the laws are limited. This is just my personal opinion.