The Urban Pokemon System

If you want to write a fanfic, you must first give it a Japanese name. Otherwise, it feels weird! Very unpleasant!

Author, let me give you a suggestion. It is a suggestion. You don't need to dig such a big hole earlier. This is why the protagonist travels. After all, digging a hole requires burying it. For readers who like to read cool stories, digging such a hole will cause a sense of depression. After all, this does not look like cool stories. Most people who read pocket novels like to read cool stories.

It's simply unreadable. I'm a Pokémon fan. I've read at least hundreds of Pokémon novels, if not thousands. Except for some that were abandoned after just one or two chapters, I've never seen anything worse than this! ! ! There is a heroine in Chapter 10? ? ? Pokmon has not developed anything yet, can it go back? ? ? Are you a flying mantis and cabbage? ? ? Bad Butterfly can use three kinds of powder when he is nervous. How can you succeed with the sharp claws of your Charmander? ? ? If you're paralyzed, you can't move, right? ? ? Sleeping powder will put Pokémon into sleep, right? Poison powder will also continue to reduce blood pressure, right? Ah! You're kidding me! If you don't know how to write about Pokémon, then don't write about it... Sorry, I like Pokémon so much that I can't accept such insults or fabrications about Pokémon. Just write whatever you want, right?

The setting of this book is very good, but the qualification level is too complicated, and the writing style has a lot of room for improvement, and the plot is strange. Who wouldn't doubt the origin of a gem the size of a goose egg? Is it a mass product of Yu Sanjia? Give one to each person with no background, and the protagonist's qualifications are epic. After walking a few steps, you will meet someone with good qualifications. At the same time, where are the three families of the first opponent?

Speechless, will the alliance give you an epic at the beginning? Can't the alliance check it out? Second, do elf eggs need energy to hatch?

Poison, extremely poisonous, especially after returning to reality, what he did was hard to describe, and he even went out to give away mythical beasts, falling in love with him forever. Please keep your IQ on point.

Really, what kind of spicy novel, 10 minutes of drug testing, I really couldn't stand it after reading the 10th chapter, it's so disgusting

This book is highly poisonous. If you have a heart disease, it is best not to come in, for fear that you will be poisoned to death😁😁😁

The alliance is too generous, the three best royal families start. Comes with backpack, material, and money. Rich man! It's equivalent to the country giving you a luxury car when you turn 18 and including gas! Hehe

The first chapter is a bit poorly written. My personal opinion of the God of Creation is that creation can only be achieved with the help of other laws, which is equivalent to the way of heaven not being that powerful, and the laws are still limited. It is only a personal opinion.