Learning Master in Naruto

I couldn't even finish the free chapters of this book. . People say that when writing fan fiction, you need to have new ideas, be innovative, and have your own style. But fandom is fandom, and new ideas are based on this story whose world view has been fixed. Not all elements are added to it. That only serves to entertain the reader and does nothing else. The first is the identity setting, just a hotel employee. I have to find out some background of Chinese martial arts. Wouldn't it be better to just write it as a time-traveling journey by a martial arts master? I have been studying for several years and am still self-taught. I am really confident that I have learned real skills. The martial arts fighting and training methods are all separated. No matter how well you practice, you will be knocked down with one brick. You can't fight even if you practice for 100 years. Is the so-called true message a lie? If you don't teach you how to play by your true disciples, who will be responsible for killing people? If you have a golden finger, study honestly. After all, the title of the book is not xxx kokushu Naruto vertical and horizontal. Nor is it xxx The Rise of the Sword Master from Another World. Since we are talking about learning from a master, and since we have specifically chosen Naruto, we should write a classic that incorporates Naruto's power system. Brainstorming and alien system invasion are two different things. Originally, there was no problem in not having too much contact with the protagonist and the famous characters, but he got the mountain clan, but then he made a big deal about the mysterious power of death, which simply lowered the status of Goldfinger, especially when Goldfinger is not the kind of bombshell. I don't understand why you write these kinds of comics if you don't write them. Writing a cheat can only teach you whether you can transcend the world and pursue those so-called mysteries. Especially an adult! At least the soul and personality are adult. The thinking is mature. Even if he couldn't pretend to be tender for a long time, he just pretended to be stupid. When he saw Uchiha Itachi, he was so excited that he almost knelt down and licked him. . After finally getting out of the village, it should mean that I have learned a lot and found someone to practice with. But another inexplicable organization showed up. It's all based on the author's own compilation skills and has no sense of substitution. I started adding some incomprehensible settings again. By this point, I have lost the desire to continue reading. . . Maybe it will be better later. But it's easy to put readers off in the early stage, and it's of no use no matter how good the writing is later.

I hope the author doesn't open a harem, just have a single female protagonist, or maybe one more, and don't just mess around with women like those who open a harem.

He takes the protagonist he wrote too seriously. It's just disgusting that a descendant of a chuunin would receive so much attention.

When I saw the Raikage Village ninja kidnapping the protagonist, I couldn't go on. Normally anyone with any sense wouldn't kidnap him in Konoha. Wouldn't it be nice to just assassinate him? What's the use of kidnapping him back? Kidnapping Hinata can get you a white eye. What's the benefit of kidnapping the protagonist to Raikage Village?

After reading Chapter 24, a group of rural non-mainstream people were slapped in the face by the author, and they were caught off guard. The protagonist has already begun to practice swordsmanship, and he still pays attention to the light and agile double-edged sword. . . . Aren't you going to join us? Is this Naruto? ? ? Shouldn't I ask how to condense chakra on a weapon? Shet. .

Come on, I just started watching it, it's very good

I haven't watched much, so let me briefly explain: The protagonist sees others practicing swordsmanship and understands the meaning of the sword. The sword practitioner is called Miyamoto Musashi, and he uses traditional Chinese swords. That's it, I can't stand it anymore

This is the most disgusting Naruto fanfic I have ever read

In the world of Naruto, is it okay for the people from the Yamanaka clan to teach the protagonist how to be a "Tianchixuanhuang" man?

I guess there are a lot of people who are confused, haha. Died by poison.

This book didn't hit the mark at all. The plot is so detailed in the forty chapters, but a 3-year-old kid was kidnapped inexplicably. I didn't understand it if I didn't kill the protagonist directly. Hinata has blood inheritance limits, so she kidnapped her back to have a bunch of blood inheritance limits. The protagonist has no value.

In Naruto, the martial arts flavor shouldn't be too strong, I'm tired of it already.

The children in Naruto are already precocious, but you are already mature. When I first appeared on the show, I saw Yamanaka Kaiichi acting so scared, and the same night I got to know the parents of others, and he acted so mature. The most unacceptable thing is that a four-year-old child is 1.2 Meters tall. Naruto is 1.47 Meters tall when he is 12 years old. Sasuke is 1.5 Meters tall when he is 12 years old. Do you want him to grow to 1.8 Meters when he is 12 years old?

I was also drunk, and Morino Hiki's scars were clearly on her face. You changed it directly to the top of your head.

Japan tolerates anime fans using Chinese swords to make a scene instantly. The most annoying thing is that they are second-rate idiots. Otherwise, don't write it. It's really disgusting.

Why not join the Qiudao clan? There is a mysterious statue in their family. Accepting the inheritance can cultivate fighting spirit. You can practice Taoism to overcome the tribulation stage and become a strong warrior in the Douzong. You can also fire Star Destroyer Cannons and kick into black holes.

Listen to my advice. Once you become a demon, it will be extremely poisonous.

I just finished the free chapters without spoiling any spoilers. I feel that the plot is very bland, and then I learn ninjutsu, practice martial arts, teach ninjutsu and martial arts, and the boring daily life related to the Yamanaka clan... There are many original characters that are indispensable, lacking in characteristics, and I can't remember their names.

Why is it a double-edged sword? Shouldn't it be a samurai sword? A little awkward

I don't know whether I have a misunderstanding about the age of 3, or the author has a misunderstanding about the age of 3

A very rare poisonous fan fiction, I even vomited out my meal the night before

How should I put it? I can barely accept your use of the sword, but why do you want to worship a person who does not exist in the original work as your teacher? It is really annoying to me, and there is no sense of substitution at all.

Every fan fiction likes to bully Uchiha, Uchiha is looking for you to mess with you.

I have a confusing question. According to the original novel, isn't it Yamanaka Haiichi who has the scar on his face? When did he become Nara Shikaku?

Nonsense, the Kyuubi attack was in Konoha 48 years, so what the hell is three years suddenly missing?

Does this book have a female protagonist? I took a look at the comment section and realized that my hormones were eaten...

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

The book is very good, come on, plain but extraordinary. The protagonist's method of recruiting a younger brother is also good. He slowly builds prestige and accumulates popularity, but is it okay to hand over the soft bone kung fu taught by Miyamoto Musashi to so many people in private? You know, Konoha has always been father and son, master and apprentice, so Konoha is still very conservative and can teach basic skills, but when it comes to secret techniques, ninjutsu is still a sure thing. Don't leak secrets casually, and try to teach them in categories when you are cultivating direct descendants!